Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 72

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh ... This is very emotional ... I will comment more later...
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Honestly I was bit suprised to see The End, I do understand why u decided this end . It would be very difficult for her and would take time to accept . I feel bad for Arnav too , it was not his fault and he lost her . The ending , who Khushi , is the most painful of all and Khushi's letter was very emotional too . I am not sure how long it will take for her to come in terms . Few things cannot be erased, but it's the acceptance that takes a long time . No wonder, she shyed away from
Arnav's touch as it would still remind her of the dreadful night . Her son was not at fault so raising him was right thing to do , but I think somewhere Arnav would have been her strength . She needed some time , which is acceptable but close to leaving him is unfair for Arnav too . Perhaps he might still feel guilty and all the more now she felt . I just hope they get through this difficult time .

Will be waiting for the next series to begin , a new hope and dawn in their life .
Edited by nonie3081 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashahzadi

Loved the update. I will miss this story so much. Idk about others but I loved the endings and I actually wanted this to end like this so it's realistic. Thank you so much for giving us this wonderful story. will be waiting for the 'phase 2' . can't wait. Good luck.


Thank You, I tried to bring it as real as possible...Much Love - Deeps
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky_sathiya

Thanks akka for the PM. The letter made me cry and Arnav's last word made me cry even more. Can't wait for Valiant Knight 2


You are welcome...So sweet of you to call me Akka...I totally love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Arnav. Hope ARHI are together soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok starting with comment i am a sucker when it comes to comment and i know you would have known till now...
But now your update..
Dammit are you even normal how can you write something like this evertime i read i feel like crying..
And now i am angry at khushi for taking such decision.
I know it was not easy for a girl like her character whose world revolved around him and i even understand waht was going in her mind...
Leave her talking about arnav omggg i am so much in love with his this character wgere he can do every god daam thing with his paoker face showing nothing...
His character some what shakes me to core.. I dont know why and how but a man changes himself completely for someone so that he could bever see the tears in her eyes and in the end she gives him those tears and this was a kind of betrayel on her part...
Whe. He said thakh gaya hu nani...
It shows how much broken he was with her one decisions though she gavve her reasons but the man who gave his everything for her lost everthing he cherised in his life.
And i dont know i feel an anger towrds the female lead of the story...
Oh my god please dont do such things please ...
I am gonna cry
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are such an amazing writer that i am so daam impreseed with you and your way of writing and you are the only writer when i see the updates i close mt eyes like oh my god what is going to happen now...
You always scare me to hell..
But still i love you and your updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor khushi is suffering a lot. ...hope arnav understands her pov
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...don't make khushi away from arnav ,,.may be now anjali and aman will get them together,,

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh m crying after reading this...it was very very painful...

waiting eagerly for part 2 coz cant see them with so much pain they need happiness
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yes you may be right with the decision khushi took but nooo it should not happen...honestly it's must be mutual...why Arnav has to suffer for loving her so much... N in note you mentioned about phase 2...really happy abt it ...the story to give Arnav all the happiness he deserved...bt I do have a question...the happiness means Khushi...right...bcz I can't guess Arnav without Khushi... Seriously I want to see Arnav win Khushi all over again with the baby leaving the past behind...

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