Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142

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Armela

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

Although a very painful ending but logical one as well. Will wait for next phase.

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sudhalata1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Have never cried even when I watched a emotional movie(all the rona dhona kinds) but your ending of the story made me cry and made me all emotional. 😭 But will wait for the part 2 of the story. You are an awesome writer and my favourite. Please keep writing. In fact you should publish your stories. They make for such wonderful reading.

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afsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

That was heart wrenching

I hope u come back soon because until i read the happy ending i cant sit in peace

Will be waiting

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pooja102

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

not fair ...it shouldn't be like dat honestly ...we were der evry thick nd thin stitutaion ...but ...I dnt have word to express how disturb I m and how much angry I am ...wht use of dem ...wen go all dis ...in reality der are sum who accept life ..
and live happily ...m sorry to c u disappoint me

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

This update made me cry . To be frank I cried twice while reading this FF once when Arnav came to know the truth , second today , I felt emotional many time's but cried twice. Deepthi I just want to say that TVK will always be a part of my life. I really dont know if it is your way of writing made it a part of my life or the story may be both.

To be frank when I read what Arnav said to Nani Thaak gaya hoon Nani.

you know that single statement tells the state of Arnav it has a lot more meaning to it . It tells how much he felt defeated ? How much he lost in his life? How much he tried but failed?

I have no words even while tying I am in tears. I love Arnav you know I want to give him a hug and say sab theek ho jayega . I want to hug Khushi and say you are the best. I want to hug the kid and say you are innocent.

Love you Deepthi and God bless you dear.

I agree with what you said about your parents I have seen and experienced it. Even today when my mom is sick she does not want me to do the house hold work so she appointed a cook if she was alone at homw she would never do that .

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pooja102

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

and u better cum wid phase 2 soon

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: pooja102
not fair ...it shouldn't be like dat honestly ...we were der evry thick nd thin stitutaion ...but ...I dnt have word to express how disturb I m and how much angry I am ...wht use of dem ...wen go all dis ...in reality der are sum who accept life ..
and live happily ...m sorry to c u disappoint me

I understand and I knew before choosing this end, I am going to face lot of hate. But I totally understand the reasons behind your anger...

I have no hard feelings and I tried to keep it as real and yes people do accept it but I am not portraying people here I am portryaing Khushi...I dont think any of my words will justify and convince you...

So no hard feelings...Thank you for being with me until this point..

Best Wishes...

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Pari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

Story ended
No words to say
Very emotional
I think kushi will need some time to heal the wound and forget about the past
Will be eagerly waiting for the next season

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Mayar Hany Ahmed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

I never expected this To Be the end nor that this the Last Ch. of VK1 😭 !!

Shit Man 😭😭 I'm crying like Hell right nw .. This Update just touched my heart .. I Feel Terribly Terrible for Arnav and Khushi 😔 !!
Arnav DoNOT deserve any Of This .. Damn he doesn't deserve it 😭😒 !!

Thaak gaya hoon Nani...was Arnav's feeble reply looking at her with utterly pallid face.

This one Line of his Pricked my heart .. It made my cry even More .. I just can't bear it !!
Why he has to punished all his live for no fault of his ?? Why dammit ?? 😡😭 !!
And Khushi .. I knew it when she was going to do something like this .. she was behaving utterly indifferent 😡 !!
Is she really think that Arnav will be better without her ..
Arnav can compromise any thing for her .. any damn thing .. but he can't torture staying away from her .. she knew that she is his every happiness .. But u knw what .. i think she made the right decision .. I don't knw but I can't see any other suitable Way other than that maybe The need time to hell their wounds .. Let's see what u have planned for us In VK2 .. I really don't want the baby to be in VK2 .. I might sound cruel .. but that what I wish .. A baby can't live with a mother who won 't be able to love him freely .. He is better off in heaven with Angels like him becoz he doesn't deserve to Live in this cruel World
Huh .. I have just realized that i have written so damn much 😲 !!
Hope I didn't Bore U :)) !!
Waiting eagerly for VK2 .. I really want them to live their life happily with eachother .. Have their own child ^_^ !!