Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 74

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful ending di
the last word of arnav kaun khushi
boken my dam of tears
waiting for the new phase
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a verytouchig...emotional and apt ending...I agree with uwith the seperation... itcannot be that Khushi can forget every dreadful thing shewent thru... every dream of hers with Arnav shattered... and upon it she had to thinkabout the baby that she brought into this world... not t forget...her feelings for Arnav superseed every other emotion and every other relationship in this world for her

Can't wait for next series to start... waiting for romance to bloom between them...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Usne Chaha to Chahaton Ki Hadon Se Barh Kar,
Kehti Thi Hath Na Chhorna Toofano Se Darr Kar.
Phir Khud He Torr Diya Woh Ta'alluq Zindagi K Ik Morr Per,
Woh Lamha Tha Jo Guzar Gaya Kinaron Ko Torr Kar.
Khud He Ro Parri Woh Ik Zindagi K Morr Per,
Or Keh Gayi Tum Kisi Or K Ho Jao Mujhe Chhorr Kar.
Main Hasrat Se Dekhta Raha Usay Apne Hathon Ko Jorr Kar,
Or Woh Chal Parri Mairi Wafaon Ko Chhorr Kar.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Very heart touching ending..totally unexpected...
I'm a very sensitive person...with a small and fragile heart..
I used to weep whenever I see something very emotional..
and from beginning to end of this chapter I shed tears like a child ...
that was an emotional update.. you made me sentimental ...
with this heart touching story..Arnav's words pierce my heart..
when he said.."Thak gaya hun Nani..."Khushi's letter was heart wrenching...
But I'm glad that you bring sequel of TVK..With light-hearted and romantic story..
So bring it on dear.. I want to see them happy together...forgetting all the past memories..
I'll wait for the time when they fall in love with each other all over again... :))
The story, characters, their feelings, their anguish was very touching...
You have penned it beautifully...thanks a lot for mentioning my name...sharing you story with me :))
Edited by Chandni.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
THE MOMENT HE SAID "GOOD NIGHT NANI" ...
I CRIED... I DIDN'T WANTED TO READ FURTHER... BECAUSE I KNEW...
I DIDN.T WANTED IT TO END...
I KNOW THERE IS A SECOND SEASON... BUT STILL IT MUCH MORE UNBEARABLE TO READ THIS END...
WHY ALL GOOD THINGS HAVE TO END...
THANK YOU DEEPTHIYA FOR GIVING US A WONDERFUL PEICE...
BUT STILL...
EVEN AFTR 2 YEARS OF END OF OUR ORIGINAL "ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON" I CRY UNDER MY BLANKET IN THE NIGHT...
SO DEFINATELY M GONNA CRY FOR THIS STORY OF URS...
I NEVER BELEIVED THAT TIME ALSO (THAT ipkknd WILL END) AND DIDN'T BELIEVE THIS TYM ALSO THAT tvk WILL EN)
EVEN I THOUGHT THAT NO IT WILL NOT END BUTT... ALAS I HAVE TO ACCEPT IT...
AS SAID EVERY GOOD THING HAS TO END... BUT I DIDNT UNDERSTAND WHYYY... WHY?? A GOOD THING HAS TO END...??
BUT STILL... IT IS SAID NA " EK AAS REHTI HAI"... AND HAVE SEEN MANY STORIES GOING ROUND AND HAVE A HAPPY END...
IT WAS PAINFUL TO READ KHUSHI'S CONDITION AND STATE OF HER MIND...
I AM SO GONNA MISS THIS ON...
BUT SURELY U HAV DONE JUSTICE TO THEM...
ADVANCE SORRY "LALARUKH" BUT COULDN'T STOP MYSELF FROM TAKING OUT THESE LINES FROM UR COMMENTS "
Let them free...let them breathe...let them live the fate they facing...let them walk on the path they chose for themselves...let them decide wt future they wanted to have...let them heal without each other touch..."
AND SO AS U ARE HAPPY WITH THE STORY , I M HAPPY WITH IT...
SO I WOULD ONLY SAY "thank you" SO MUCH DEAR FOR THIS STORY... THANK YOU DIL SE... :-*
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Posted: 11 years ago
dear deepthi,
thanx for this wonderful yet controversial story...though at many places i would stand to defer this was one story i could not keep myself away from and the way this phase of arshi has ended is quite commendable because khushi is like that and so the decision she took to part from arnav was very much acceptable.

will be eagerly waiting for the next phase of the Valiant Knight. As you rightly said

A Valiant Knight can give her anything but if the person with distorted soul is not in the receiving end, will only be recovered by her innerself when she is ready and at her pace...She needs to take that next step by herself, only because she is Khushi, woman who always made her life without making anyone else suffer on her behalf and Arnav will be the last person she will make him suffer.


this was indeed one fantastic FF and as SRK would say "Picture abhi bhi baaki hai mere dhost" 😉


pls continue soon😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
I was surprised to see 'the end' at first.. But i feel khushi is right and arnav is hurt by her decision..
loved the update...
waiting for the phase two...
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Posted: 11 years ago
the moment khushi said the name of child, i was like go girl...
so true, y shud they hide everythin and suffer to themselves, esp wen everyone says the child looks like arnav.
it must be so hard for khushi to leave arnav and go . but truth is tht both of them cannot abandon the baby and tht cud be done only with the distance.
the way arnav reacted to khushi's letter was unexpected. guess he will beback into his B&W ASR...

Wish Khushi gets the strength to recover soon and brings happiness again into Arnavs life.
Thanks for giving us a wonderful story... Glad to know its NOT GoodBye.. ...
See U Soon:-))
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Posted: 11 years ago
deepu..first of all i am more convinced with this ending...i mean it takes time for any woman to come out of that horrible incident(can i call it an incident..dont know)...khushis reactions are pefectly written in the chap 43 after she knows the truth...and the way it came out of her mouth after finding arnav at the door in the DVD.."aap aye the"..i could understand her feelings and i literally saw her expression and her state...
yes...she has every right to know what has happened to her...so her stubborn decision to watch it is correct from her POV...i know the hell arnav was going through when he was watching khushi in such state of watching what happened to her and telling that she thought it is arnav...i am feeling so nervous while writing this..and tears in my eyes...beaz u wrote it picture perfect..and i can see her and feel her pain..as well as ARNAVs
then arnav words ...when khushi refused to deliver the baby are telling once again abt what a great human being arnav is...he is trying to convince khushi saying that the kid has no role in this and its a innocent creature...
he is giving choice to khushi to give for adoption to somebody or to threw in dust bin while it is completely opposite to his life truth...
i really can say hatsoff to khushi for her boldness to tell the truth that it is adarsh singh raizadas kid...
yes,...she can no longer pretend as it is arnavs kid when she was going through hell about what had happened for her and hence to their relationship...i bet khushi is the only one who can understand ARNAVs every feeling even if he tries to hide his feelings to make her comfortable abt their relation and to make it unaffected by any kind of horrible past...
and i really hats off to khushis love for arnav...the proof is ..whatever it is no woman can control herself when the two day old baby is crying with hunger and the woman breast is full of with milk...and top of that she is mother..and hear it is khushi who loves orphans so much...
why i am telling this is as a mother i know how it is to see a baby crying with hunger..becaz after i became mother i used to feel a lot to even see a puppy without its mother...
khushis decision is perfect ..her reasons are correct..as a woman who loves her man more than her ..thinks like this only...she wants to see his man to get best in his life and also se wants to do justice to that innocent kid..once again one of the prime reason is her hubbys values towards the orphan kids and his life truth...
ur decision to keep them apart and give them time is correct one ..yes ..time can only heal khushi...but i am really feeling bad for khushi for what she has go through to bring up the kid..and also how difficult it is for her to be away from ARNAV...but her reasoning is correct..she cannot pretend now and so cannot hurt arnav...
i loved each and every word of that letter...unfortunately she has to tell her first feelings for him in this kind of situation...
i know they will fall in love in season-II with healing of time...waiting for ur story once again to fly into the arshi world...
i am really really feeling so sorry for not commenting for few chaps as i am really loaded with lots of work in offiece and house my laptop and broadband both r not working..sometimes using mobile i cud read the ff...
but still u remember me and mentioned here..its ur highness...my respect to u increased after reading the comments u have written to each and everybody...i can understand how much effort u r taking to balance personal life..official...and the ff ...and replyimh comments...and accepting friends and to maintain the relation...how lucky lala is to get a special place in ur heart...
i pray god to bless u with all happiness and peace in life...

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is one of the updates wer I took time. Every thing stood still wen I read The End...but wen ur note u r absolutely ryt...they both sacrifice their lives for the sake of others n now both for them...Khushi knew he will b hurt seeing her n d baby n arnav knws she will not accept d baby until he is in front of her...brilliant update. Three cheers for u.. hoping to c u on next venture
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a heart wrenching update...i do understand ur and khushi's pov...and the thought going in my mind was, what bt after a few years...and thats exactly what u are giving us...

hope arnav n khushi will be happy with each other in phase 2...eagerly waiting for it

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