Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 41

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Posted: 11 years ago
WHY DID YOU STOP IT THERE?
I'M DYING TO READ FURTHER
I dunno what to say I feel so bad for both arnav & khushi!
I can't see Arnav in so much pain :(
and khushi poor gal my heart goes out to her!
i was dreading this day..
khushi herself came to know everything Arnav couldn't save her this time :(
I really don't want her to blame him for anything ..
he's been tr
through a lot :(((
can't wait to read the next update

p.s. arish is a lovely name :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
so now evey secret is out wats going happen next is d question left ...khushi is on the phase where her mother ones stood
dey both r lyk living der parents worst phase of life n will show how it should get ended .
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Posted: 11 years ago
gosh clifferrr arghh!!!
lovely updates!!!
both ur updates were poles apart...loved it truly!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭😭😭 Oh god wat wil happen now am still crying I hope u will not be too harsh on them they goes a lot in their life .." And a friend of my we are talkin about ur story and She explain a story dae happen to her mom place a man drug his bro wife and spelt wit her later the bro and the alder no about it and he was send to leave the place but later went baby boy was born and look just like the bro of her hband , she have her dout but did not say a word ,but one day she hearOlder people talkin about wat happen and she kill her self and months later the child died ,,I was crying why is it always women suffer all the time ,,,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
both are in so much pain...khushi has realized most of the truth...

awesome one...how will arnav react upon knowing that khushi is very much aware of most of the truth...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG OMG OMG yeh kya hua... It's just sooo nerve wrecking.. Really feeling bad for both Arnav and khushi.. I thought everything is going to be fine but then again you can't possibly hide such stuff no matter how much you try.. Feeling really bad for khushi.. At this stage of her pregnancy it's really scary.. Can't wait to read the next update.. Once again you have done an awesome job writing this chapter.. The way Arnav cried over those scars and the way khushi figures out everything was just too emotional.. Desperately waiting to read what is going to happen next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deepu,... Brilliant... 👏... No words to say How brilliant writer you are...

Interestingly My eyes didn't moistened this time.. Instead my heart was lightened. Then only I realized it was heavy until now, all these days... since that horrible night. I felt happy that Khushi knows the truth, finally.


Here I have to say this Deepu... How could you manage every time to surprise me. I thought every possibility out there for Khushi to know the truth. But I didn't even for a second thought about the possibility of Nani seeing Adi rescuing her. I anticipated she will figure out the truth all by herself, of course you gave the clue, I don't deny it. Although she is trying to connect all the dots... One clue lead her to the ultimatum. But hearing the same thing from his mouth will be death of her.


How can a woman react in this situation. How could she handle herself, Love of her life, and the new sprout about to bloom in days. How she will take the bitter truth. I am worried about my Arnav, how he will take the Khushi knowing the truth. How he can handle the shattering Khushi.




She trusted Arnav,... Always his actions spoke different version than she thought about him. Always his eyes spoke different version than she derived from his words. Now, what she will do. How she will interpret his actions and pain she is seeing in his eyes since she came back to him.

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Truth,... what it is going to do with Khushi,... Truth.. what it is going to do with Arnav... Truth... What it is going to do with their relation... Truth what it is going to do with the baby... Only Deepu knows... I wish.. I wish... baby comes to the earth... because it is not the baby's fault. The person who made her go through hell, got his punishment. The person who could have saved her stood in front of her with defeated and guilt carrying shoulders. The person who went through the hell in the disguise of unknown amusement, is standing in front the person who is hiding the truth all this while, demanding answers for what happened with her and what happening with her.. what she should do after this. Little she know that the person himself is struggling to find the answers all this while trying to hide his turmoil under the blanket of her love and trust.

What will happen now... Will have to wait until Thursday... which is gonna be very painful for me.. than Khushi,.. than Arnav...

You are really an amazing writer Deepu... Really... an outstanding writer. Now my eyes are moistening... Really... do you know why.. because you made my heart get light... But I have a request for you Deepu... Please be gentle with my Khushi and Arnav... They cannot suffer more than they already suffering. They cannot take more heart breaks. They cannot take each others shattering hearts. They cannot see into each others defeated eyes. Please be gentle with them and with us. I am truly worried for Arnav. Because whatever happened to Khushi, it will break Arnav's heart into million pieces which in return will make my heart into zillion pieces.


Edited by lovedrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oooh..nooo...y did u stop ..y did u stop..omg... y did u stop...😭😭😭😭
i really want 2 read more...😕.it will b painful 4 khushi...hope she'll not think..that now she's not worth 4 arnav...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no she heard it, after all the precautions he took and the extant he went, now nothing matters. OMG
how will she react now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully wrttien , can't wait to read the next part. Thanks for the pm

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