Sandhir FS: Broken Souls(Dark & Mature) Last Part- Page-20, Epil-P

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Avni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

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hey...dis story is superbbb. ..the one wid lott of suspense..

Randhir knws she is Sanyukta bt she doesn't knw him...somethin intresting 😃

& yaa my confusion gt cleared... 😊
16 yrs ago? were they childhood frnds ?
I hope all this clear soon..
update soon!!! I wanna knw whats the story abt.. nyc1

thnku fr pm 😳

btw ur name is reet? I haven't askd u b4 😕

Edited by avniarpitha - 11 years ago

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

good it was good ..

just a few thoughts ...

1. LOL 7 STAR FACILITY lolOLOLOLOL IT WAS A MASSAGE PARLOUR RIGHT ? LOL NOW IMAGine A MASSAGE🤣 PARLOUR GIVING SOMEONE A 7 STAR FACILITY LOL🤣🤣

2 . MADAM LOREN ? reminds me of old british ladies

dear madam loren... lord xOxO is wating for uh in the balcony for tea 🤣🤣🤣

overall it was really good

pls do write more and PM me

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: maths_geek
good it was good ..
just a few thoughts ...

1. LOL 7 STAR FACILITY lolOLOLOLOL IT WAS A MASSAGE PARLOUR RIGHT ? LOL NOW IMAGine A MASSAGE🤣 PARLOUR GIVING SOMEONE A 7 STAR FACILITY LOL🤣🤣

2 . MADAM LOREN ? reminds me of old british ladies

dear madam loren... lord xOxO is wating for uh in the balcony for tea 🤣🤣🤣

overall it was really good
pls do write more and PM me

umm...may be you found it funny but if you see old English movies , you will get such scenes, rooms reserved for some VIPs... other i upto you... i am not forcing anyone to read... ...you liked it then good.

otherwise thanks a lot dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: AnuSweet
YIPEEE... I m first...🥳
it was awesome😃
plz... update next part soon...😃

thanks a lot dear.

may be tomorrow...

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amulbaby06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

God dear... dis is unbelievable... seriously... remembered some old movies... Its very interesting... why Randhir hate dat much Sanyu?? something is there he know her but seems she doesn't knew him... yaar its interesting... update soon...

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: reet21

umm...may be you found it funny but if you see old English movies , you will get such scenes, rooms reserved for some VIPs... other i upto you... i am not forcing anyone to read... ...you liked it then good.
otherwise thanks a lot dear...

OLD ENGISH MOVIES gawd 🤣 sorry but i can't help ... massage parlour and 7 STAR 🤣 ermmmgawd ! LOl

okay so u mean something like erotica hotels in paris right but ... A MASSAGE PARLOUR and 7 STAR gawd !!!! *dies laughing*

ps : sorry i wasn't trying to sound offensive i thought u would appreciate creative criticism

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: amulbaby06
God dear... dis is unbelievable... seriously... remembered some old movies... Its very interesting... why Randhir hate dat much Sanyu?? something is there he know her but seems she doesn't knew him... yaar its interesting... update soon...

thanks dear,...but i must tell you, it will be completely dark one...maybe something very unexpected...

ya, something is there, both know... but the thing is Randhir knows she is snayukta but she doesn;t know he is same randhir...

anyways thanks for liking...

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reet21

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: maths_geek

OLD ENGISH MOVIES gawd 🤣 sorry but i can't help ... massage parlour and 7 STAR 🤣 ermmmgawd ! LOl

okay so u mean something like erotica hotels in paris right but ... A MASSAGE PARLOUR and 7 STAR gawd !!!! *dies laughing*

ps : sorry i wasn't trying to sound offensive i thought u would appreciate creative criticism

if it would have been creative criticism, i would have definitely appreciated...

anyways, i like to ignore than to fight with words...

thanks a lot dear...

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Pariha khanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: reet21

if it would have been creative criticism, i would have definitely appreciated...
anyways, i like to ignore than to fight with words...
thanks a lot dear...

sowiee anyway

but hon i always get the last word 🤣

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amulbaby06

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: reet21

thanks dear,...but i must tell you, it will be completely dark one...maybe something very unexpected...
ya, something is there, both know... but the thing is Randhir knows she is snayukta but she doesn;t know he is same randhir...
anyways thanks for liking...

darling such type of stories are interesting not only lovey dovey types 😉😉😉.. ur concept is too good... So assume that Sanyu said her soul belongs to only one person might be it is Randhir & she doesn't seen him. so many twists yaar Interesting very Interesting 😉😉😉