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Posted: 11 years ago

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hello
havent read ur wrk so far bt wud lv to
coz this idea is so amazing
eh i m eagr to knw watz d motive nd how did d poor thing end up here
oho
he cares fr hr tearz so sweet
lv the characterz u r devloping
update soon
lv
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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Thanks guys for liking the update

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Gosh, this was so intense. The dialogue "I own you" just sent a shiver down my spine. Reet you ate an amazing writer man. And the name Madam Loren is such a British Classic. I hope he doesn't get intimate with her and things unfold before its too late, before she's completely broken. She definitely loves her mother too much which led to such a huge sacrifice. The world is cruel. Hope he becomes her saviour in this dark world. Please update as soon as possible. Lots of love xxx

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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

darling such type of stories are interesting not only lovey dovey types 😉😉😉.. ur concept is too good... So assume that Sanyu said her soul belongs to only one person might be it is Randhir & she doesn't seen him. so many twists yaar Interesting very Interesting 😉😉😉

thanks a lot dear

Yes there is a better content in it...that is sure

just four parts but assure it will touch your soul

Next part will be tomorrow

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shwetasaddahaq

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Hey... it ws nice...

I liked it a lot...

First of all... long part... I love long updates...😛

Its very intresting...dere is sum big secret connecting dere lives ...

Update soon ... eagerly waitingn plz pm me..😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Thanks guys for liking the update. ..

Ummm...about all your questions. ..will give you some answers tomorrow. ..

Its just a short story of four updates...

So stay tuned

Thanks

Reet...

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_Angel_love_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Hey!Reet

nice FS

Love Dark fs

update soon

thanks 4 pm...

😊

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hema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Read prologue n chapter 1 in a go!! Loved it

Very interesting concept!!

can you please pm me when it is updated?

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Anisha Chowdhury

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

hey pls update soon...cant wait...

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Sonali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

oh now he owns her, what will happen now

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