SanDhir FF:Inequilibrium Hearts #~THREAD: 1~#

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First of all, this is my very first work of fiction. Till now, I've just commented on others' fictions.😆😆

So, let me clear this very well that I'm not at all good at writing.😆😆

This ff is being written on the request of Avni.. We met, exchanged a few words, she asked me to write a ff and God knows why, I agreed. 🤣🤣

I dedicate this ff to my bestest buddies over here. Piya (My Farzi Engineer) and Preetu (My Chandramukhi).. 🤗🤗

And also, to all the new friends I've made on this forum. 🤗

Please bear with me...🤪🤪

Regarding the title, I've no idea why I've taken this title..🤣🤣




I'm not going to give any detailed character sketches of the characters.

SANYUKTA- A bubbly, happy-go-lucky pretty lady.

RANDHIR- An arrogant yet charming personality.

These two are college students. Their family backgrounds are not same as in the show.



Like the magnetic currents, opposite personalities also attract with a unique spark in them. So is the case with Miss Sanyukta Aggarwal and Mr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat. A girl who wants to live her life to the fullest. She seems to have everything with her, a simple life which every girl dreams of. But is it what the reality is?

Is her life actually what it seems to be? Or there is a multiple-layered web she's living in? Well, as of now, she seems to be enjoying her life with her friends in her Dream college.

So, I guess we should leave her grooving in her own world and move on to another interesting character.

Mr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat is an arrogant yet super intelligent cum psychic machine in the form of a human being. He gets everything done as per his will. Or again, that is what it seems.

What happens when a girl full of life enters his caged life of boredom? Will these two magnet and nails attract? Can they together peacefully throughout their life?

For that, we ought to move ahead to the main story.

Accompany them as they face the dark shadows of their lives, together or not, where life and death continue to remain a game. Watch them struggling to live and bearing the pain of having innocent people around them getting killed in the process of this game.



A/N:
  • Likes and comments invited. If you're busy, then a one or two word comment will also be okay with me.😃
  • Suggestions and criticism invited as well. Feel free to say anything. 😛😛
  • Feel free to complaint.
  • For PMs, buddy me.😃
  • And please bear with me, if required, juttas, chappals, tamatars, everything welcome. But please avoid eggs, I'm a vegetarian. 🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res 😆

----Unres----

I am 1st
u startd ur ff? 😳 nt evn 24 hrs are ovr..aftr I said u 😃
sooo happy to read ua ff...

the start is awesomee...waiting fr the story update soon kiri 😳 [:D/]


thnku fr pm 🤣
Edited by avniarpitha - 11 years ago
..Mellifluous.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres...
kritit...
the title is so awesome...loved it...
u penned it beautifully babes..
the prologue seems interesting n so intriguing...
am completely looking forward...
update soon,..
thanks for the pm!!
love,harika
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres
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I'm so sry fir unresing sooo late...

Coming to the update...it was brilliant ...

Ur a good writer...

Keep writing

Love
Ayesha...
Edited by Craziness123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
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unres

i hope i'm no too late😆😆
i mean i unressed before the ff got complete😆

u r such a brilliant writer why were u hiding this talent for so long dear
i'm totally in love with his story
fantastic

love
soumya

Edited by krazyinlove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ress
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Whoa!!!Ye Kyaa... "Rubs Her eyes"
Dedication me mera naam😳
Love U soo much Kirtiii🤗
Finally U decieded to write some...Thats really gud!!!😊

Challo jaldi se chapter-one likho...m looking forward to it😃

Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay,Amazing start .. And it doesn't seem that you are writing for the first time.
Intro was good,I must say! Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

PM me again!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The prologue was really nice... 😃
Do continue soon! ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really don't know why you haven't started writing wayy before this. I am so looking forward to reading your writing. And just for the sake of annoying you, I'm going to Res every time you update 🤣
Also, the prologue was pretty intriguing. A few things struck -

Mr Randhir Singh Shekhawat is an arrogant yet super intelligent cum psychic machine in the form of a human being. I think you've just solved the enigma that is Randhir Singh Shekhawat. He isn't human. He's an alien. No human is allowed to be that *cough* appealing *cough*

Will these two magnet and nails attract? I am well aware that it is a rhetorical question, but can I just say - Hell yes! And I really love the magnet and nails analogy for some reason.

Can they live peacefully together throughout their life? That's a question? Really? (Even if rhetorical) 🤣 Of course not! That's why we all love them, isn't it?
Edited by AzureLicht - 11 years ago

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