Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 3 - Page 83

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi fabulous updte...
finally he is home...
man she is missing him and this man is shutting her out...due to lexie's incident he is feeling inferior that he is not capable for LOVE...really i mean really he is thinking like that...a man full of selflessness...tried his best to save his love for lexie...and giving full respect for khushi...is really a gem...yeah he makes mistakes...ofcourse humans will make mistake in their own way...so with that we can't judge him as cruel...he is poor soul that lost his love long back and lost the idea of love...needs lots of love...iam sure khushi will take cre of that...
she is such an fighter...apt to the chapter's title each word she spoke to arnav is filled with so much power...iam sure she will bring this man to life...in love with her...
waiting for nxt updte...
thks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is very very nice story...pls continue soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
ok I loved khusi in this update. I always liked her but this one showed her new light. hopefully arnav will not damage this relation beyond repair. I m loving it that khusi is fighting for him...For her love and someday I wish to see arnav fight for him because I know it will be more compassionate and he will just do anything to get her . lexie was nice but her ways were wrong and I somewhere agree with khusi that she never loved him. looking forward to next update. Thanks for pm. though I love your arnav but after this update your khusi will be my favourite fiction character.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear, applauds to Kushi first before u 😉👏 She simply scored in this update. I loved the way she handled the situation. She did what no amount of Aman's drilling could over these years.

I'm so in love with this story now and oh my I can't wait to see Arnav's reaction to Kushi's words. Please please do update it fast.


But as a reader now I'm getting to feel disappointed by you. Many writers have done this to their faithful readers. For the words of 100 they ignore the true and perspective words of one or two sincere readers. I'm a writer myself. What I have to ask is, why can't writers take in the real and perspective and sensible comments of their readers, even if she has just one or two such readers and write for them and their own selves rather than lose their spirit over a number of readers who are actually insensitive or not sensible.


Often talented writers go by such readers' words and ditch the sincere readers. So much that now I;m scared to read a new story bz I don't know when this writer is going to ditch me with a half baked story because some readers responded in negative...Writers should also have the maturity to handle such things. Don't write for your readers, write for yourself. Midst that if u get constructive criticism and encouragements, accept them to develop your work and to nourish yourself as a boost.

Hope you will not be the next in line talented writer out there to disappoint me...hope not dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am definitely not wasting my time reading your long long chapters, so I am all ready for what you have in store for the readers as I just love this story and its characters.
Coming to the update, it was awesome and just what i expected and hoped. Arnav, I knew would clam up and become detached and hold himself responsible after seeing Lexie in the state she was. And Khushi, true to her character got into the problem headlong after giving Arnav appropriate time to adjust back to normal life and as he failed to confide his worries with her she caught the proverbial bull with the horns and confessed her love to Arnav...bravo, Khushi! Just loved it, wish everyone was like her.
I am looking forward to what happens next and what Arnav does.
Great update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...
khushi is fighter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Take a standing salute dear, simply beautiful,.. this is how women should be .. fight for what is legally theirs.. great update.. just loved it.. keep updating faster
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a wonderful speech that Khushi gave Arnav. She is a very strong woman who knows what she wants and tries to get it.
Hope Arnav sees it that way.
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Posted: 11 years ago
khushi my girl good going... khushi rocks.. love the way khushi confessed her feelings and the ultimatum to arnav.. she is clear what she wants from her life.. her normal married life with her husband.. who must have some past baggage but she is there to help him now.. she is standing next to him.. he just needs to look at her and she will do her part very nicely.. khushi have proved herself in the past and she will again prove that to ASR.. arnav just need to stop blaming himself.. he is protector agree but he can't help a person who is not ready to listen to him.. lets see what changes does khushi's confession brings out in arnav.. loved the update.. it was mind blowing..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayye! Khushi stole my heart in this last update. And the ending was just...wow! There were no apologies for confessing her love and then the resolve to make Arnav confess as well was perfect! The courage it must have taken to do this is immense. Khushi is definitely a woman and we are hearing her roar!

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