Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 3 - Page 79

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow brilliant part. Kushi is so mature for her age. She made arnav speech less. Loving the strong kushi. Arnav needs to come out of his past only kushi can help him. Please dont stop writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the update. . And please don't be bothered by criticism. Its a form of appreciation. They have known your characters in depth to like them or not. . So you have not failed at all. Its individual concept of hero and heroine that arise the criticism. According to me its the best characters I have ever read. Love how u have shaped your arnav and khushi.. so please continue to write. .life would be too simple if all are perfect. .right. ? Excellent story. . Please don't leave it in between. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update

this chapter belong to khushi , the way you show her initial hesitancy to approach arnav but later the way she tried and fight and declared her love to him is simply awesome and most interesting part she is not going to back down and setting the pace of this relationship everything is brilliant.

you are so right she is indeed a fighter, desperately waiting for the next update and want to know arnav views on this clear declaration.

dont know about the bashing, only want to say that you are a brilliant writer and the flawed characters of this story make this story more beautiful and realistic. thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with us.


thanks for the pm
Edited by faree - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wooww khushi rock today in this fabulous chapter👏❤️ .Being a 21 yrs old woman ,she really a strong person..❤️ hat off to you Swepta👏
Thanks for the note & just want to tell you that i fell in love with this fabulous story koz you a brillant writter👍🏼 ❤️ & hope you will continue to write & give us long updates.Take it cool about the criticism 😉 😃
Eagerly waiting to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update. You are a terrific writer and this is a wonderful story.Don't ever doubt that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was an amazing update especially the part where hushi laid it out for arnav what she believed.
about the note youve written in the end i would just like to say that everyone is jaded and so every characters has grey areas to them which is what makes them human.
I love your story and would very much lie you to continue with it as you've planned!
eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved this Khushi... Arnav needed to be stripped and and cleansed of the illusions he is in. Lovely update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta I don't know why people made you feel the necessity to explain your characters but that was not required at all.. You have written beautifully and weaved the story with such ease.

If you don't mind my two cents. When a reader specially a female reader reads a story they kind of find themselves in the female protoganist and when something like lead male characters past comes up; specially the one where he loves her or loved her; all of them feel betrayed and cheated on. The best way to show that emotion is by bashing the characters. I would recommend to not take it personally or let it affect you. I would say ignore and go for selective reading. You have all the right to read what you think is right or productive.

I just hope all these doesn't affect your creativity. I hardly comment reason being I like to read the story without any external influence and then give my compliments at the end..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love your story and i follow it regularly...am so sorry about my lack of comments or short comments in the last few updates..That's because I am away and travelling and in between a professional mess..but I do read each update with great love..hence dont have mixed feelings...I am sure there are people who are attached to this story...go on girl..
I loved Khushi's fight for her love...excellently done...this punch was mixing in last few updates..but that's obvious since it was about Lexie and the damned past...hoping for fire now...:-)

PS: I love Aman...can I have him please?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just by chance found that you had updated ...
Glad to have you back ! 😆
What an amazing chapter ...
Khushi though a mere 21 years of age has proved that maturity and compassion does
not come with years alone ...

will be back ...

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