Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 3

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Well done Khushi for laying out the truth to Arnav. I can't wait to see Arnav's reaction to Khushi.

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bbindu

@bbindu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Very nice portrayal of emotions. I loved that way how Khushi told about her love. Arnav as expected is feeling low at this time. will waiting to see what happens next.

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Brilliant chapter ... But he will come around... Time, people and circumstances heal

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

awesome...as i said in my last comment that i doubt that arnav will take any help from khushi...same thing happened..may it out of guilt or out of self doubt or may be due to illusion of the love gone by...and i liked khushi's very mature stance which told him that she is there for him and she has fallen in love with him but next step will have to taken by him until then their marriage is on the hold...ball is in arnav's court now...i am happy that you did not come under any pressure from us readers and also you just do not have to justify your stance to us...its our love for the flawed characters of your story because life is not bed of roses...life is imperfect and imperfection of life is beauty

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

I have to read it again to comment!

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

I have no idea who has been bashing your characters. I for one love the strong confident Khushi. Young maybe but knows and is unafraid to speak her mind.

Keep writing. I will look forward to it

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Spectacular update. Loved Khushi's ultimatum. What Aman couldn't do, Khushi will be able to. Her love confession is unique :)

Can't wait to see Arnav's reaction to her words. Khushi is so right in saying Lexie did not love Arnav, but Arnav loved her nonetheless. Eager to see how Arnav comes out of his guilt zone.

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anjubua

@anjubua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Just Brilliant, this update was for Khushi
wow woman you rock, just applaud her for
putting some sense in to her thick headed
husband who thinks he has failed but you can't
save someone who doesn't want to be saved, that was
in the case with Lexie. Khushi left Arnav speechless!
Waiting to see what happens next. Thanks Shweta 👏 ⭐️

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Thank you Shweta. I loved the update. This is one of the most awesome, brilliantly written stories on Arshi. Please don't think of stopping to write long updates and please don't leave it in between. It is perfection personified. All the characters are written perfectly.

Thank you for the note and I totally agree with all the points you have mentioned to describe the characters .The story is very realistic and true. Please don't think that you have failed as a writer but rather it is the other way around. You have portrayed and narrated all the characters very very brilliantly👏👏👏. The shades of grey in the characters and your brilliant story telling is what attracted us to it in the first place.

I want to humbly let you know that the discussion in this thread was an appreciation towards this wonderful story and that we totally love, respect, and understand the characters of Arnav and Khushi.

Request you to continue the story as you have thought , planned, and decided to write as we are all here to read YOUR STORY OF ARSHI.

I love the way Khushi handled herself. Arnav needs KHUSHI and her love to bring him out of his past and live his life and i am so glad that Khushi has the maturity to think that way.

Can't wait to read the next update.

PS:You are one of the very very few rare awesome, fabulous, superb,

writers on this forum⭐️. Please don't ever doubt that.🤗

Edited by vks11 - 11 years ago