Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 3 - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago
Terrific chapter Shwetha! What a multifaceted story it is !
Like Khushi I too had been watching and liking Arnav in his politician avatar and then there was Anjali and Payal who threw hints like Dada made this sacrifice... and one cannot forget how he married her.. so Arnav is responsibility personified. But now is the time, she gets to know her husband as he is or was from a first hand witness. Now she can herself decide whether she loves him. If she decides, can she leave him? Will Arnav be that fair to her, like he had been to Payal? Which Arnav will he be, one that told Akash that this life means nothing to him or the one which does everything to be a successful politician? And will ditching this life be as easy to him if Lexie is not there? Of course the time gone must have changed Arnav too. I like the tough Khushi you have portrayed.
At this time I'm super excited to read how you take this tale further... Is it update time already??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Waiting.....dil thaam ke


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Posted: 11 years ago
As soon as Khushi saw Lexie's painting, I knew she played an essential part in Arnav's life and I hated her. Completely irrational but I'm pretty sure many of your readers are in the same boat. We don't know the full backstory but, really, anyone who is a threat to Arnav and Khushi's relationship becomes public enemy nmero uno.


I will not be able to write a comment that will do justice to Hopes and Ambitions right now but I promise to do so in the future. I would like to say that you have struck a good balance between politics and romance. I do not like political dramas too much because most of it, unfortunately, goes over my head. You have just the right amount and it never gets too complicated where I'm wondering 'what did I just read?'

If there is a PM list, I would love to be on it! In the meanwhile, you have acquired a new stalker.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta, when is the update coming?
Don't you know how anxious we are to know what happens next!

K , you actually researched the hospital on Google!

Shweta, this is what a good story does to us, dekha!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Shweta, when is the update coming?

Don't you know how anxious we are to know what happens next!

K , you actually researched the hospital on Google!

Shweta, this is what a good story does to us, dekha!


Same pinch :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting waiting and waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
On a positive note, maybe this visit will give Arnav the much needed closure from Lexi's chapter and he can finally move on in his life with Khushi. Am I being too positive here?????
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Posted: 11 years ago


"Do not spoil what you have by desiring what you have not; remember that what you now have was once among the things you only hoped for."

Epicurus



Shweta I apologize for the late response and for posting twice on your thread. IF was not allowing me to unreserve my previous reserve from a few days ago.

From day one your story has really made me think and take into account each and every character, every emotion, every moment, every chapter has taken us on journey in the lives of your Arnav & Khushi.

Which is the reason we feel so connected to them and I truly think as a reader we understand them.

I have gotten to know the Khushi & Arnav as individuals as well as a couple, your amazing writing takes full credit for that. All the chapters have been the foundation for this past chapter. Where everything finally came to the blowing point.

Am I upset with Arnav? Absolutely not.

He led his life with the freedom that very few people get to experience. Most people always wish they could've done this or that. He actually lived it. It was his for the taking and who are we to decide what's right or wrong?

He was just a guy who met a girl and fell in love. Was he supposed to think how this love affair would effect his future? No absolutely not, it wouldn't be falling in love otherwise. Love is not calculated or planned. It happens. And he had every right to go with the flow.

Am I hurt for Khushi? Yes, most definitely.

As a women, a wife how could I not feel her pain? How could I not hear her heart break?

She is so young and has lived a sheltered life with her parents, the complexities of love and relationships has never factored into her life, so how can the weight of loving a man as intense as Arnav Singh Raizada not have a life altering effect on her?

But Khushi is strong, stronger then we know and stronger then she may even realize at times. I know the next few chapters will be difficult for her, but I have full faith in you Shweta that you will do full justice to her emotions. She loves him, and most importantly she knows deep in her heart that she can't expect him to feel the same, but hopes for love to blossom one day.

She will not hold his past against him, but will watch and wait for him to rise beyond it and choose her as his life partner.

They may already be married but she wasn't really his choice, and now I will wait for him to finally realize that Lexie may have been his guiding light but Khushi is his home.

Absolutely magnificent!

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting eagerly for the next,so much is happening, your writing is Brilliat!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta ji, where art thou?? 😒

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