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Posted: 11 years ago
Read ur ff in one go...omg hw cum I missed it...its awsum...whole tym I was glued 2 da screen...m totally hooked.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Here is some extracts from the comments made by other readers about that chapter that i liked. I didn't pick all of them though, just the first pages after the chapter. Questions and theories about the past and future of the story :

lexie seems too much into giving away her possessions... while such quality is definitely endearing...
i dont want arnav n khushi to come together, just cause lexie gives him up...
in that case khushi is better without him... let him be wherever he wants to be... in short, let him go to hell...

What ever is the case with Lexie... Whether they r together or not... Arnavs soul seemed to be bonded to her...
BIGGEST TRUTH OF ARNAV nKHUSHI's LIFE WOULD be that THEY CAN NEVER HAVE THAT PURE SOULMATE BOND...
They might continue to stay together...but I wonder if they can ever live together ...?


more over Arnav never promised her love...he clearly stated that before they consummated their marriage...
It was only the most probable next thing in their relationship for him...it was only Khushi who hoped for love n believed she could get him to love her too...
My only complaint about Arnav was that he knew Khushi hoped for love in future in their relationship...so why did he not share Atlaest Lexie part of his past...?


with consideration to Arnav, his feelings, what he had to let go- with due consideration to all of this - that I dont care that he didn't think of Khushi even once
while travelling. And I an glad that that didn't happen. It would have slightly overated and unbelievable.


And for the first time in the my history of reading fiction the words, 'I won't be able to love' or something on the similar lines, have made sense .
They so make sense. I doubt arnav would be able to love anybody the same way anymore.
Now I understand why he is so twisted... So damaged.And while I should be mad at him too I guess for not even thinking about Khushi in all this,
I believe he's gone there to fulfill responsibilities. And I admire that quality about him, to stand up, take responsibility and do what's need to be done.

There is a chance Arnav might bring Lexie but discretely as its not good for political life.. if he brings her, there r couple of things which might happen
1) Kushi will obviously distance herself from him which is correct..any woman with self respect will do..
2) Arnav will know that who holds more control over him now, Kushi or Lexie..
3) Kushi will help Lexie heal because both are great human beings but she will never get close to Arnav

And well lets just face some truths which I understood from all of this uptil now.
1. Arnav isnt going to abondon Khushi or something. Even if he withdraws or still loves Lexie. He is 'responsibilty' personified.
2. And will that do away with the rising thoughts of 'what if' in Khushi s' mind.? No..
What if, Arnav hadnt returned back all those years ago? Ofcourse he would have been with Lexie unless Tsunami hadnt struck.
What if Khushi hadnt married him. And there had been this phone call about Lex. Endless possibilities which will only give her pain.
Because its Arnav Khushi, we have this 'Hamesha' thing going on with us. But they just like any other names, with a this life, this past and its real.
And so I had mentioned that Khushi deciding for herself thing.
I just hope Lexie comes out fine and hasnt tried to hurt herself or something.


I do feel bad for Khushi,hearing about her husband's past love life is not easy.
I just hope she understands Arnav and gives him the time to come to terms with the present situation


I feel there is a lot to be revealed yet from Aman... which will lead to why lexie is where she is (maybe ill or drug use or something else)
and what happened when arnav decided to come back to india all those yrs back... also he was having affairs after coming back to india so didn't he
think about lexie then? will wait for you to reveal more...

coming to khushi... she is strong on the outside not showing much about her inner turmoil but shes broken completely inside and there is more to come and Aman
didn't reveal everything to her... so hopefully they will be her support system for her to deal with all the pain... Arnav is a different story I don't want to say anything yet as we still have hear his story...
nothing wrong in falling love with someone he was at an age where people fall in love...
well he didn't think of Khushi while travelling to London and was only thinking about Lexie and their past... that hurts because of the way he left and his words to khushi... she didn't even come in his thoughts after that phone call... you may have a past but you just can't leave your future without answering your actions...


Edited by Parisian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I didn't comment on last chap I even have no idea what to write for this either.
he lost a lot but he enjoyed his life at fullest also, so thinking about sympathy for him is little hard on my part choices what he made life what he led apart but he was not fair with khushi at many many levels she is his wife he was using her as sex object to meet his needs for me physical relation without emotional bond is inhuman more like animal act
khushi on her part in love with hope to get love in return some day trying to hold only relation she has but Arnav was fully aware what he was offering her. he proved himself at every step of this relation selfish be it personal or professional his priority always his benefits though he was brutally honest but he always ignored khushi for the matter her feeling emotions outcome of his actions
I wish to see strong khushi keeping distance physically n emotionally from him
Edited by aayt - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta ji, weekend shuru hogaya hai, any chance of an update over the weekend??
Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl


Kishmishji, you actually did that much of research?? 😲 I am maha impressed :)

LOL Shweta ji, Kya haal kar diya hai aapne hum sabka?? 😆


I was just curious to know what could be wrong with Lexie ! 😆
so obviously it isn't cancer ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Swetha...im a new reader here...well honestly not exactly new...i have bee reading your story for the past one month...i have read it in parts and it took me some time to finish up. and to tell you very honestly i am too lazy to comment. but after reading the last chapter i just cant stop myself from commenting. it was like WOW.i cant put it into words...i can only feel...feel for khushi...feel for Arnav. it was kind of an emotional wreck...really touching!!!

i started reading and after around 5 chapters i got throughly hooked on...i dont want to say who is better than who...but each of the characters is unique and different. and as you say i would listen to the story patiently. all i can say is that your story is splendid and you are narrating a wonderful story to us. its a treat to read your story!!!and with the Arnav of hopes and ambitions...its cherry on the top.

keep going...and update soon.
Edited by naaza_deen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kishmish


I was just curious to know what could be wrong with Lexie ! 😆
so obviously it isn't cancer ...


A broken heart?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta ... any news from London ?
or has he gone there and everyone else is out of sight out of mind ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Shwetha, Is Arnav's character from when he was in London, was it inspired from the character "Jack Dawson" from the movie Titanic????
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Parisian

"Thinking about that time now, he believed, he had been living in a fool's paradise,
and Lexie was figment of that illusionary world. He now confessed, he had dreaded to pop that notional bubble. He feared if he did anything untoward, then this fragile illusion will crack and he had lose everything. And that had been the gravest mistake he made. He should not have let the fear rule."

I have read again the last chapter and especially the last paragraph. I think some readers have misunderstood it. (Or maybe it's me LOL 😆)

Arnav wanted to stay in that illusionary world, he says he misses the time when he was a free young man and he is regretting that he has let the fear ruling him when his mother asked him to take his responsabilities and come back home. He was just afraid of her.

I do have a theory about what could have happened back there in England :

Arnav's mother asked him to come back, he refuses.
So she blackmails him and threaten to harm Lexie, as she knows about his lover, lifestyle and social life there. Arnav is scared, and go back to India in a hurry without giving a explanation to Lexie who is devastated and "found solace" in drugs, getting "high on life" again, to the point of getting ill.

About Khushi now, i think that she will be torn inside : as a woman, she will understands Arnav's
story but as a wife and lover, she will be shattered, knowing how deep is the bond and love between Lexie and Arnav, and knowing that she might never have a chance to win his heart. And i do think Khushi should create emotional and physical distance between her and Arnav so that she can't get hurt again. She should go out of the city, discovering the world, but it might be difficult with Shyam outside.

I do have a feeling that Lexie might comes to India with Arnav so he can look after her.

Argh ! I can't wait to read the next chapter ! Please do the update soon !

I apologise if there is any grammatical error in my post. 😊


My thoughts on the last paragraph is that he is living under the illusion that he is in love with Lexie , his art, and lifestyle he left behind and he can never forget or leave that.. He thinks that his past will always be part of him . He finds some sort of false security living in that bubble. He does not want to confront it or question it as he has no reason to. There is nothing to look forward to .
But now things have changed and with Khushi coming into his life, he is hit with the truth that Lexie was not someone he was actually in love with but was just very fond of as they both were similar with their passion towards art and other things and this was what had initially attracted him to her . He is now scared to admit it because it is going to shake up everything in his life and what Khushi means to him now...

I may be wrong but LOL nothing wrong in hoping for it. Just an eternal optimist.

Oh! how I wish Arnav is thinking on these lines.






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Edited by vks11 - 11 years ago

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