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panamaa

@panamaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Nice updae dii

After a looong time u updated nd ot was awesome

Really feel bad for virman both r rite im their place

Nd love to see their care for each other

Update Soon

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Aft a lng gap u updated
Update was superb
Update d nxt part soon

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Superb update!!! Virat can show anger n concern at d same time...liked it..waitin fr nxt khushi!

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Part 128..
As always amazing update. .
And as always love virat's concerned. .. love ...Possessiveness. ...care...anger...everything ...
Every action made us fall for him all over again. ... .
Egrly waiting for next chapter...
Plzzz try to update soon. .
Keep rocking dear
Tc

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

PART----129
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Dammmiittt...
He said anrily nd more worriedly as her coughing increased...nd she felt difficulties in breathing...
He look at table to grab water bt dammm...he forget to braing water with food..
V--maanvi just relax..
He said with rubbing her back nd holding her hand..
V--main abhi aya...
Nd with that he rush out of room to take water..
He hurriedly rush down stairs nd went directly to in kitchen..
In min he returned back..
He opened door with thund nd rush towards her direction..
V--maanvi..paani..
Bt stoped..
He stoped as he saw place empathy..
V-worriedly..almost shouted--maanvi..
Nd turned around his head in room for her..
On otherside..
As he shout her name..maanvi jumped in fear from bed nd stood up with glass of water in her hand..nd look at him..bt again closed her eyes in sign nd placed glass on side table..with placing her hand on her chest as just few sec before coughing stoped..
As he saw her..he rush towards her..
He placed glass on side table nd saw jug nd glass of water there..
Bt for now he is damm worried for her..
V-cupped her face in his rough nd strong palm..fustrated,angry,worried,protective--thik hou?
M-her eyes r still closed..she nodded possativly..
V-bt not satisfied--chest..chest me pain hai?..kya hua?..health?..maanvi ankhe kholo?..batao?..khaana?..khaane me koi problem thi?..maanvi?..kya..
He was getting more high..bt she just standling calm nd motionless..which making him hell out of control..
V-loosing his control..almost shouted..his hands slip towards her sholder ndshooking her bit--maanvi???...main kuch kuch raha hoon?
Hearing his voice she opened her eyes..
M-without looking in his eyes look up--kapde..
She whispered in low voice..
V--what??
M-gluped--kapde..garam kapde lene hai?
Frowned..she felt his gaze..
M--mujhe place pata nahi hait tou..tou..rakhne hai??
She said in calm voice which made his more fustrated nd confuse..his grip loosen..
She turned nd walk again towards couch..
M--saari packing hou gai hai..aur..maine sameer ko bhi samzha diya hai..tum dekhlo thik hai ya nahi..
She said with placing plates in tray..she hardly eat half chappati..
With in time his anger raising like hell..he saw her reacting this way first time..
She took tray from table nd walk towards door..
She abt to open door bt stoped...
MAANVI STOP..
His lous warning made hr jump nd drop the tray on floor..
As soon as it hit the floor in 2nd sec she found her self pinned against nearest wall with in no time..
AHHaaa...
She screamed with gaped..
As he bite soft skin fistrated..his all emotions..demanding nd worry took over it..as he hear her scream..his lips changed in shoothing termed..he shooth her pain..
Which made her melted helplessly ..as his hand rleasd tight hold nd roamed on her skin..
His face moved up to her face..his teeth bit at the sensitive curve behind her ear possasivly..nd whispered..more demanding..
V--i hate it..i just hate it..
She abt to collapse bt hold herself by holding his sholder..closing her eyes tightly..
V--moving towards her face by kissing her tight jaw line--tum..tum jaanti hou..i..i..hate..ignorance..specially..from..u..
Nd at last he kissed near her lips..
V-wit jointing his head with her..cupping her face--m sorry...
Nd with that she cannt hold more..tears sliped out from her close eyes..she bit her eyes to stop her sob..
V--maanvi..plz...i said m sorry...janti hou tum..main pagal hou jata hoon tumhe le kar..aur..aur us kamine tou..
She opened her eyes nd cut off him.
M--meri kya galti hai?
V--frowned
M-clutching his shirt tightly--batao naa..maine asa kya galat kiya?..bina bataye tum us khatarnak jagah chale gaye..koi mag nahi..aur..woh..kichad..i know..woh kaise hua hoga..aur
v-placed his finger on her lips--shhh...main janta hoon..aur tumhari koi galti nahi hai..main bas tumhe kisi bhi chiz k liye pareshaan nahi karna chahta..in sab ke liye main hoon naa..
M-pushed him little away--right..than do it..tabhi tou naa kuch pucha..na kuch..tumne kaha tha packing ka jou maine kardi..aur kya karna hai bata dou..
Again she making him angry nd bt he can see hurt in her voice..
He hold her wrist nd pull her close..nd scuped her in his arms..
V-cold tome--sure..tum mujhe relax kar sakti hou..waise bhi aaj k whole day k baad thakan hou gai hai..
She gave angry glare..
He placed her in middle of bed..nd come on top of her..
V-removing her dupatta..in husky nd concern..possasive..protective voice..roaming his hands on her all over body..nuzzing her bare neck nd sholder--maanvi..plz...ye mera kaam hai..tumhe protect karna..aur ye haq mera hai..maine use ase hi nahi chhhod sakta..
She moved her hand towards his sholder nd neck..ached back her head..biting her lower lips..as he pull her dress down..making her weak..
M-moaned--virattt...
V-continu--plzz..mujhe deal karne dou..aur tumhe in sab se dur le jana chahta hoon..bas uss se pahele ye karna jaruri tha..use ye dikhana ki tum meri hou..sirf meri..
Ahhha.
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for my bachcha

Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago

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seelisakuraa

@seelisakuraa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Thank you so much for updating 😊 😊
Loved Virat's possessiveness for Manvi 😳 😳
Pls do update Ehmmbh-U hv to cme bck 🥱 🥱

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pritivirman

@pritivirman

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

awsmmm
amznggg
pr glt time p kyn stp krt h yr...
wtng fr ur updt plzzz cont soon

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Awesome update part 129...
Loved it...
Loved how Virat tried to make Manvi talk...
Loved Virman part..
Finally Manvi talkt to Virat...
Loved how Virat tells Manvi that its his right to protect her...
Aweome update...
Pleaseee update soo...
And how is your healt now??