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Posted: 11 years ago
awsmmm
amznggg updt.. lovd it... cont soon plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear...
Loved it
Update d nxt part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hearty congrats fr ur new job dear have a wonderful experiance wd lots of successes ...!!! nw cme 2 d updat wowww virman r gng 2 london 4 ther hm ovr excited nw lov ths possesiv manvi n virat s sooo bold he carid hr infrnt of many ppls awww... precap sounds vry intrstng. take care if ur health n updat wen u r free tc bye
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the update 😊 😊 😊
Superb update 😊
Waiting for Virman's romance 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz plz kushi update next part soon, can't wait for next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Update! !!!
Virat has his ways to see diff shades of maanvi now...awesome...eager for nxt!!!!:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE KHUSHI DEAR. LOVED IT. U UPDATED AFTER A LONG TIME BUT AS USUAL IT IS AWESOME AND MIND BLOWING. AWESOME VIRMANS R IN LONDON FOR THEIR HONEYMOON. LOVES THIS JEALOUS AND POSSESSIVE MANVI SO MUCH. AWESOME VIRAT PICKED MANVI IN FRONT OF MANY PEOPLE. NOW VIRMAN ROMANCE ON THE WAY. SO UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE OF UR HEALTH. 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb updates
loved the last one
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for latePart---131
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V-smirked nd walk towards her who standing near window..looking out side view..come behind her nd hug her from back gently..with placing his face in her nape--kya hua?..jagah achchi nahi lagi?
She just shivered as her back rested against his tough chest..with closing her eyes..
M-gluped--b..bea..beautiful..
V-smirking--i know..mera touch hai hi aesa..ase bahot se beautiful moment ayenge..main tou abhi kuch kiya bhi nahi hai..
He said woth nuzzing her neck..making her open her eyes surprisely..
M--vi..viraattt..
She stammered..as she felt his teeth tourturing her..
M--main..main ne resort ki baat ki thi..
V--what?
M-smile nervously with biting her lover lip..as he raise his head..she move towards him--yes..ye place bahot beautiful hai..lekin yaha dur dur tak koi aur house ya kuch dikh nahi raha..main tou bore hou jaungi..
V-removing his hand from her..making sertain face--ohh..so ye place beautiful laga?
M-noded nd step backward with hiding her smile..
V-placed his hands on his hips--aur..bore hou jaogi?
M--hummm..
Again move back..
V--ohhh right..just wait..he said with attitute..nd move forwards towards her to catch her.bt before he come near..she brust in laugh nd run back..nd he found his arms empathy..
M--hehehe...
V--how dare u..
Maanvi ran more..
V--run behind her..towards small hall--maanvi..stop..bahot regrate karogi baad me..stop..
He ran behind her..finally after running here nd there he caught her nd lift her upon his sholder..
M-clutching his jacket in her tiny fist on his back--virat..chhodo mujhe..niche utaro..
V-smirk..walking towards there master bed-room--no..
M-virat i m sorry plz mujhe niche rakho..main bas mazak kar rahi thi..plz..
Finally they reached in room..virat close the door nd placed her feet on floor..
M--uff..shooked her head little..--paagal hou kya..ase koi uthata hai..sab ulta dikh raha tha..uff..
She said like cute kid..
V-pulled her close to him nd crushed under his arms--so what?..waise bhi as sahi hau ya ulta..next 5 days main hi hoon..
Nd winked at her..
M--5 days?
V-moved his fingers in her hairs..smirking--humm..
M--par..lekin hum yaha 5 days kya karenge?..yaha tou koi ghumne jane ki jagah bhi nahi hai..maine count kiya..hum main city se 5 hours dur hai..puri isolate place hai ye..
V-amused--like..really maanvi?
M--kya?
V--umm..means..huma kya karenge?..tum ye puch kaise sakti hou ye?
M--kyu puch sakti?..tum mujhe yaha leke aye hou..mujhe tou yaha k baare me kuch pata bhi nahi hai..aur 5 days..like mujhe pata tou houna chahoye na hum karenge kya?
V-he really cannt believed that she is really ex-wedding planner..godd...she only know abt marriage or wht?..here he planned only romance...nd she..wann roaming around world or what..??.
He abt to say when they heard phone ringing in maanvi's bag..
M--ohh phone..ek min haa..
Nd with that she move towards her bag..she bring her phone out nd saw its from home..
M--ohh shit.humne yaha aake ghar pe tou bataya hi nahi..
She said worriedly..
V-shooked his head--tou ab bata dou..yahi karne aye hai yaha..
He said with making face nd walk towards wasroom with towel..
Maanvi get confuse with it..bt come back in reality as her phone again ringed..
M--hello..
Vm--hello?..maanvi..pahoch gaye tum log?
M--haa mom hum pahoch gaye..m sorry main informe karna bhool gai..
Vm--arey its ohk..hota hai..
She said teasingly..
M-confused..
Vm--achcha..woh arti aur yash aye hai yaha..kuch din yahi rukenge..aur sameer apne match practice ke liye gaya hai..
M--kya?..arti aai hai?..kash main waha hoti..
She said sadly..
Vm--relax..woh yahi hai..jab augi tab mil lena ohk..
M--thank u mom..
Vm--abhi arti se baat karlo..
M--ji..
A--hey..meri bhabhi..itni jaldi thi jane ki k bataya bhi nahi..hmm..?
She teased
M--arey ase kyu bol rahi hai?..woh tou virat ne achchak se..
She remember in wiche situation he made plan..
just that time virat come out from bathroom..wiping his face..sit on front couch..nd look at her..who stood near bed..
A--ohhh..viratbhai?..hmm...i guess..surprise houga..btw itni jaldi main gaye hou tou kuch shopping bhi nahi ki hougi kyu?
M--shopping?..kyu?..mere pas already virat k gift kiye hua bahot se kapde hai..honeymoon k liye shopping karne kya jarurat hai?
Virat shooking his head after hitting his forhead with his palm..nd walk towards her..before arti can rpl he took phone from her..
V--hey sis..
A--hey bro..hows going..?
V--nothing..
A--what?
V--yeah..i think mujhe teri bhabhi kum friend ko mujhe kisi tirth sthan pe..yaa kisi zoo me le jana tha...
He said with looking at his confused bt little angry wife..
A--heheh...relax bhai..just thode words use karlo..chalo use phone do..
V--yeah..here..
Nd he again ge phone to maanvi..nd walk towards his bag..
M--haa..
With angry bt sad face..
A--kya yaar maanvi..mujhe tujhse ye ummid nahi thi..
M--maine kya kiya?
A--kiya nahi hai..bt ab kar..
M--kya?
A--romence..
M--matlab?
A--uff..wait...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 10 years ago
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Part---131
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M--kya wait?..i know abt romance..lekin isme shopping kaha se bich me aai?
Virat who placing his stuff out of bag hearing one side convo..nd getting more amused by his wife..he really didnt know what to do with her..
A--yaar maanvi..tu naa really me dumbo hai..
M--what?
A--see..honeymmon me kya houta hai?
M--kya houta hai?
A--aghhh..maanvi..
M--haa...
A--achcha ek baat bata..honeymoon pe kon-kon gaya hai?
M--main aur virat..
A--good..aur tum ek dusre ke kya hou?
M--husband nd wife..
A--thank god ye tou pata hai..
M--arti?
A--ohk..sorry..achcha..aur husband wife houneymoon pe kyu jate hai?
M--ghoomne..firne..ek saath ime spend karne..aur
A--that..yes..that..ek saath time spend karne..aur woh bhi akele..samzh aya..
M--ohh..
A--kya ohh?..idiot..jou tum douno yaha family k saath rahe ke working time me moment spend nahi kar sakte woh sab karne ke liye houta hai honeymoon..
M-just look at virat who glaring at her in between his work..
A-continue--like..no shyness..no family..no bahane..no work..naa jaldi kam pe jana..koi fikar ya dar nahi..bas ek dusre me khoye rahena..aur haa..na whole night se*
m--eeekkkss..chhiii...
Maanvi shouted..making both surprised nd shock..virat nd arti...
V-rush near her--r u ok?
He said with little panicly..
M-look at him blinkly..
A--hey..bahera karogi kya mujhe..
M-hmm?
V--theek hou?
M--nodded in yes..
V--tum bhina..achcha jaldi se baat khtm karo me kitchen ka set up dekh ke ata hoon..
M-again just noded..he left..
M-gluped--arti..tum pagal ase kaise bol sakti hou ye sab..pata hai virat yahi samne tha..
A--kya?..maanvi?..tum virat..wait..yaar..maanvi..virat aur tumhari love marriage hai..aur mostly main jaha tak bhai ko janti hoon hoon tumse pagalon ki jaise pyaar karte hai..
M--haa i know..lekin..
A--maanvi react tou ase kar rahi hou ki jaise ab tak tum douno k bich kuch hua hi naa hou..
M--nahi..asi baat nahi hai..
A--pakka?..means..
M--haa..pakka..hum as husband-wife..bahot khush hai..
A--tou ase pagalo jaise kyu kar rahi hai?..aur honeymoon ki shopping means..ase kapde le jana jisme aap comforatble hou..aur easilly removable hou..samjhi..
She teased her..
M-blushed..
A--aur..plz..ye waqt ghumne me waste mat karna..pata hai..humare honeymoon me tou hum room se bahar hi ni nikle the..
M-opened her mouth in 0...
A--ab apna muh bandh kar nd bhai ko mana..unka mood off lag raha hai..
M-realise what she did..--ohk..thanks..
A--any time..ab yaha ki fikar mat karna..do enjoy..
M--haa..thanks..bye..
Nd cut the call..
M-sit on bed..thinkin with biting her lips-ab mujhe thodi sapna ayega ki kya karna hai nd kya hota hai..aur virat..use batana tou chahiye..aur ye arti..ab bata rahi hai..uffo..ek tou mumbai me bhi humari itni ladai..last kuch din me kitna stress tha..virat ne akele sab handle kiya..aur main..
She stood up from bed..
M--ye virat kaha rahe gaya..
With that she walk out of room nd walk towards hall where virat talking with some one on phone..
V--yeah..no i want one honeymoon suit in ur hotel near city..nd yes send me details of good places in this city..ohk..done..my manager will handle all this..no thanks..we like to visit in our car..yeah..ok..we will b there tomorrow morning..ok..
He just cut his call nd turned when he felt sudden push..maanvi hugged him..
M--m sorry..
V-surprisly--hey..what happen?
M-still her hands around his waist--m sorry..plz mujhse gussa mat hou..i promise main sab theek kar dungi..
V-moved her little away nd cupped her face--hey jaan kya hua?..kya theek karogi?
M-innocenlt--plz...mujhe us hotel me nahi jana..hum yahi rahengey..
V--kya?..maanvi..i know main demanding hoon..lekin main force nahi karna chahta tumhe kisi bhi chize ke liye..aur waise bhi hum waha rahe ya yaha kya farak padta hai..
M--nahi..hum yahi rahenge bas..she said bit angrily..
V-amused--ohkay...relax..jaise tum kaho..
M--smile innocently..
V-pulled her back in hug..while she looking at him--u love me right?
M--of course..
V--just smile at her..nd hug her tightly..
M--ase kyu puch rahe hou?
V--nothing..just wann feel that u r mine..nd only mine..only i have right on u..only i can love u nd always i will..nd only i m in ur heart..mind..soul..
M-can feel something happened between him nd beera..nd how much his love get higher nd higher..his passion..she hug him as tight as she can..no matter how he also pulling her in born breaking hug..
M-kissed on his chest--i m only ur virat..ony ur..nd only u hve all right on my love..my heart..my mind..my body..my soul..my every cell of body..my breath..everything..this maanvi only belongs to her virat..i love u..
V--i love u too..
Nd both lost in eachother..maanvi rubbed his back..
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preacp...
Romace... 18+...
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:for all who above commented for update...
Thank u guys.. Nd sorry for late...
Edited by Niaksharma - 10 years ago

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