Arshi Story : Once Upon A Time..... chapter 3 up, PG 19, 16th June

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

update de do pls... writer dost... kahan ho?

ab to exam bhi khatam ho gae hain... ab to daily update dena banta hai... achcha daily na sahi every second day de do 😉

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sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: tanu3579
update de do pls... writer dost... kahan ho?
ab to exam bhi khatam ho gae hain... ab to daily update dena banta hai... achcha daily na sahi every second day de do 😉

Sorry for the delay, di. Mummy was not well from two days. But now she is fine...

will update in an hour :)

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shruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: sphobic

Sorry for the delay, di. Mummy was not well from two days. But now she is fine...

will update in an hour :)

oh great then , i will read it tomorrow,

good relaxation after exam😊

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sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

awesome update

Khushi is a pagal but is very cute too.

Aww that so romantic and lovely that now Khushi is going to write letters to Arnav.

Update next chapter soon

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ashw99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Beautiful updates... indeed Taste of separation...

Very descriptive could picturize things happening...

Tea in steel glass... Foggy and chilly climate...

his disinterest in beautiful nature at the moment...

his Killing time to meet her...

his impatience to see her...

his uncomfort to take whatever they were giving him while going...

his going blank at his father-in-law's praise... Smile his Savior indeed.

his thoughtfulness to give her money from his first salary as gift... made her feels so special so his... Arnav Singh Raizada never fails to surprise us...

his going all green looking at the boy getting close to his wife... that was so ASR.

Khushi's very sweet gift just like her... I had expected something like this from her... that will remain with him all the time... and remind him he is special to someone... and why not she has spend her whole night to make it... made it all the more special...

Could feel her losing hope and crying when he left...

Could feel her running to see him before leaving...

Could feel her sadness when he left...

so she will write to him and they already started as friend...

Hope he replies... She'll feel nice.

Akash was sweet the way he was oh-i-know-him... and Namaste...

Could feel that brother-in-law aura.

Eagerly waiting to read more...

Loved the update...

Thanks for pm.

P.S. : hope your mum is fine.

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sushmita ghosh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Awesome update..khushi is too naive n cute here..she was up whope night to make a hanky its too romantic

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: sphobic

Sorry for the delay, di. Mummy was not well from two days. But now she is fine...

will update in an hour :)

i hope she is better now... tk cr of her pooja... update can always wait... plus we r rt here :) :0

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sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: tanu3579

i hope she is better now... tk cr of her pooja... update can always wait... plus we r rt here :) :0

she is fine now...thats why updated :)

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Param

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

that was superb update !!! arnav prolonged drinking his tea waiting for khushi to show up.. oh god.. khushi was working on her gift for arnav whole night.. very nice moments created by you.. felt nice to see arnav's reaction and he giving a part of his first salary to khushi.. so arnav was jealous to see her cousin's hand on her shoulder.. arnav is ok with khushi writing to him.. hope he answers her sometime.. loved the update. it was really superb one.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊