Arshi Story : Once Upon A Time..... chapter 3 up, PG 19, 16th June

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Awsommmiiieee itz amazing...hehehe he was pretenting 2 drink tea waiting 4 but finaly he had 2 leave without ny option...khushi ovr-slept 4m staying awake all nyt & knwing 4m Garima he left but only a while ago, she ran 2 catch him...den whn dey met it was amazing, his emotion on reciving hanky..he got ovrwhlmd & so did she, 1st she was lil hurt getting 10rs. thinking he gave 4 hanky but whn he said itz his gift n 4m his 1st salary it warmd hr inside...innocnt luv budding btwn dem..she askd f she cud write him lettr, well i hope he rpliz hr..i mean it wud b rude if he doesn't atleast 1c in a while kare...lil glimpse of possessivnz n jealousy 4m his side..itz nice i lyk da way she said som rply n som don't...nxt chp sooon!!!! #PS: Idk if ny1 noticd n correctd u or not...well da thing is ur story set up is in 1960s dat tym it was Bombay not Mumbai..Mumbai was named somwhr near 2000..so corrct dat..

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

just caught up wid this story and it is simply wow
continue soon dear
do pm me when u update😳

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

awww thats really sweet update. really cute Mills n Boons type with innocent Khushi n Arnav. The way Khushi came running after him to give the handkerchief was the highlight of this update. WOW Akash is Khushi's cousin...somthing diff seeing him as Khushi's n not Arnav's😊

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

uh no i didnt get bored , but it was sooo sweet,

2-3 aise chapters aur de diye toh pakka diabeties ho jaye mujhe..

given by story is setup in 60's rs. 10 is sucha big amount..

well i like u r keeping realistic simple gift like handkerchief :)

hey dont make them separate for too long:(

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sphobic

@sphobic

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: shruti46
uh no i didnt get bored , but it was sooo sweet,
2-3 aise chapters aur de diye toh pakka diabeties ho jaye mujhe..

given by story is setup in 60's rs. 10 is sucha big amount..

well i like u r keeping realistic simple gift like handkerchief :)

hey dont make them separate for too long:(

@bold...not that big yaar...ab ek saree jitne paise toh dega na😆

and agar u r free and exam is done then come on chat thread...

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shruti

@shruti46

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: sphobic

@bold...not that big yaar...ab ek saree jitne paise toh dega na😆
and agar u r free and exam is done then come on chat thread...

it was madam

again we will have same discussion regarding 60's and now..

aur tujhe lagta h khushi sari kharidegi?😉