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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHAK1234

Wow amazing so creative .. do write the nxt chapter . Eagerly w8ing ... please pm me also😊


check after few min i will upload nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusweet

Suprb story.. I read it in one go.. I realy liked it.. Keep writing :)


uploading nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ranyu

Hiee..

This was so cute!!!!!!!😊
I loved the way he was caring for her..❤️
And then when he said that he will always be there whenever she will call that felt so good to read..Seriously..
Continue soon..n thanks for the pm..


ya uploading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avniarpitha



I thought u updated it here 😭
was waiting for it from mrng 😭

k...update it mrng..wil be waiting for it 😳
if cn pm me plz



sry yar for late i m uploading in few min check karo k na
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Posted: 11 years ago

YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - PART 10 - A BEAUTIFUL EVENING...




PREVIOUS PART : PART 9 : PART 9


Sanyu came out of the spa. She was wearing the same sky blue dress which randhir chose for her. Her big 5cm diameter sky blue earing and thick bold bangles on her right hand was equally complementing her knee long tight frock which had a black belt at its waist.


Her long hairs curved at their ends, her light pink shiny lipstick and her eyes decorated with light eye shadow, muscara, eye lashes and kaajal added more beauty to her perfectly figured body. She was looking damn hot.


Randhir was mesmerised with her beauty. He was lost in her beauty. He recalled her dress up with bangles bindi paayal etc, which she wore for his condition. She was looking totally different from that day. But was looking equally beautiful. She came closer and said.


S: mcp(no answer).. Mcp(more louder, still no answer)
She gave him a jerk.


S: kahan ho. Chalen chocolate khane. Tumne kaha tha.


R: haan.. Haan... Chalo.. Main payment karke aata hun yahin khade raho.


He paid the bill and came out of the parlour. There sanyu was silently watching people climbing the escalator. Randhir came closer to her ears from behind and said.


R: udhar se jaana hai.


S(excited): haan. Chalo.


They went to the escalator stood there. As it was going up and up sanyu was clutching randhir's arms tighter and tighter due to fear.

R: dar lag raha hai.


S: nahi to dar kyun lagega. Waise ye jisne banaya hoga wo bahut intellegent hoga na.


R: intellegent nahi mechanical engg hoga.


S: wo kya hota hai.


R: jo is tarah ki chizen, car, bikes design karta hai usi ko mech engg kehte hein.


S: achha. Mujhe bhi ye designs banane hein.


R: jab ghar jayenge tab dikhaunga mera office, wahan log yahi karte hein.


S: sachi. Are hum to upar bhi aa gaye. Ab meri chocolate do. Chalo.


Randhir brought a chocolate for her and asked her.


R: ab chalen mujhe kuch lena hai.


S: ab kya lena hai.


R: chalo fir pata chal jayega.

They went to a toy shop. Randhir asked the shopkeeper for a barbie. He gave one.


R: chhota nahi. Jo sabse bada hai mujhe wo chahiye.


Shopkeeper gives a beautiful big pink barbie dall.

R: haan ye achha hai.

S: itna badaa. Ye kiske liye??? Mere liye???


R: ye meri beti k liye hai.


S: tumhari beti. Matlab meri bhi friend. Hai na.


R(smiling): haan baba.


Randhir paid the bill and they went to the car. He kept the shopping bags at the back seat of the car. It was early night.

His phone rang. It flashed pari. He signalled sanyu to keep quite and received the call.


P: hello papa, kahan ho ap??? Din me ek bar bhi phone nahi kiya.


R(in his mind): din mein itna sab kuch hua hai kaise bataun tumhe beta.


P: papa chup kyun ho. Bolo na kyun phone nahi kiya.


R: wo beta. Papa din me bahut busy the aur tumhare liye barbie bhi to lena tha na.


P: sachi papa. Badi waali barli laaye ho na.


R: haan princess bahut badi barbie laya hun. Aur suno ek nahi do do dalls milegi apko.


P: wow sachi papa. Dusri waali kaunsi dall hai batai na. Please please.


R: nai.. Wo to surprize hai meri princess ka.


P: wow surprize. I love you papa.


R: love you too my princess. Ab main rakhta hun. Kal ghar bhi to nikalna hai na.


P: ok papa. Bye.


R: bye papa and he hangs the phone.


Sanyu was busy with her chocolate as well as teddy. He smiled at her cute expression and stupid deeds. After few minutes they reached the lodge.


Meanwhile sanyu slept on randhir's shoulders. He was quitely admiring her and recognizing his bus trip to FITE.


After sometimes he came out of his memories and his phone buzzed. It was vishal's message ALL SET SIR. HAVE A GOOD TIME.


To be continue...


NEXT PART : PART 11 : PART 11

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres...

this part was sooo cute...waiting to see pari's reacn when she meet sanyu 😳

its getting intresting...
update soon
Edited by avniarpitha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey such a lovely beautiful update loved it
plz continue asap :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW!! PART 10 WAS SOO GOOD
11 waiying to see pari's reaction after seeing sanyu...!!

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Posted: 11 years ago


i will take time to post nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago


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