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Posted: 11 years ago
hey, purnima. .y r u nt updating? 😭
I luv this story a Lott..
plz update it 4 those who read it...plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avniarpitha

hey, purnima. .y r u nt updating? 😭
I luv this story a Lott..
plz update it 4 those who read it...plzzz


thinking to post nxt week wht say 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
1st of thnku fr nt stping it here .. :-)
bt y nxt week? its aldredy soo late na? :'(
cn update dis week?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avniarpitha

1st of thnku fr nt stping it here .. :-)
bt y nxt week? its aldredy soo late na? :'(
cn update dis week?



just i m joking yar i will upload yar thoda late wht say acha k u tell when u want i will post
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: purnima209



just i m joking yar i will upload yar thoda late wht say acha k u tell when u want i will post



post asap 😊 wt say today ?😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avniarpitha



post asap 😊 wt say today ?😉



k only for u wait for few min... 😉😃😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avniarpitha



post asap 😊 wt say today ?😉


ha we want update plz updatdm today dear why r u bothering abt others this ff was really awesome i really loved it plz update n dont even think to stop:(
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 11 - night madness


Sanyu slept on randhir's shoulders. On taking off his shoulder's she woke up. By rubbing her eyes she said. Her voice quite rough and low..

S: hum aa gaye kya????
R(on her cuteness): yes baby hum aa gaye. Ab chalein.
S: hmm chalo.
Randhir came out of the car and took her in his arms.
S: aise le jaoge to yahin so jaungi. Achha jhula hai.
R: bhuki reh reh kar bilkul halki hk gayi ho. Chalo tumhare liye surprize hai.
S: kya???
R: chalo to sahi.

He took her to their room. It was full of baloons and dinner ready on a table. The room was beautifully decorated with candles and roses too.
S: ye to kitna beautiful hai.
R: tumhe acha lagaa.
S: bahut.. Aur dinner pe kya hai.
R: khud hi dekh lo.
S: wow noodles.
R: tumhe pasand hai na.
S: pata nahi aise lagta to hai ki kabhi khaya hai...
R: pur mujhe to pata hai ki ye tumhara favourite hai. He started to tickle her.
S: hahaha hahaha... Chodo mujhe mcp mujhe gudgudi ho rahi hai.
R: tumhe nind aa rahi hai na.
S: nahi nahi... Nai aa rahi... Ab chhodo na please..
R: achha thik hai chhod diya.
S: (still laughing).
R: ab dinner karte hein warna thanda ho jayega..
S: (quite normal)... Ohkk

After finishing their dinner, they went to sleep. Randhir slept on the right side and made her sleep on the left.

S: mcp...
R: haan sanyu bolo.
S: do gaye.
R: hmm. Kuch chahiye kya.
S: haan ice cream.
R(with a shock): kya??? Abhi???
S: haan abhi..
R(in his original mcp state): tum paagal ho kya?? Itni raat ko ice cream kahan milegi?? Dimag thik hai tumhara. Raat k 11 baj rahe hein.
S: to kya hua. Mujhe kuch nahi pataa. Mujhe abhi k abhi ice cream khilao warna main chillaungi.

(she stood on bed and started jumping, saying "ice cream do ice cream khana hai". She started shouting)
R: thik hai meri maa chalo.
S: yeee.. Chalo

Randhir took his car and started driving. Sanyu sat on opposite side playing with her teddy murmering "hum ice cream khayenge. U also like ice cream na. Dono milkar khayenge. Mcp ko bhi thodi si de denge". Observing all these

R(in his mind): oh god sach me ye paagal hai mera bhi dimag kharab kar degi.

But after noticing sanyu's innocency he melt. He saw a no of ice cream cornors but all were closed. At last he found one.

R: uff.. Chalo koi shop to khuli hai.
(he comes out of the car)
S: hum aa gaye. Yeee ice cream and ran to the shop.
Randhir ran towards her. Now he was smiling of her cuteness.

Inside the shop. So ms. engineer kaunsi ice cream khaogi???
S: strawberry.

She took the ice cream and started eating it. Randhir paid the bill and they both went to the car.

R: ab to khus ho na meri jhansi ki rani.
S: haan bahut. Tum kitne acche ho and kissed him on his cheeks.

Randhir was in super shock that what happened. He was continuously staring sanyu with his eyes wide and mouth open.
S: mcp(no answerp.. Mcp(waving hand infront of his eyes).. Mcp(viving a jerk)
R: haan..
S: kahan chale jaate ho bar bar. Chalo nind aa rahi hai.
R: haan haan chalo and he starts the car.

The reached their room.
R: ab koi badmaashi nahi. Chup chap so jao. Shaitaan ki naani. Pata nahi tumhari mummy tumhe kaise sambhali thi bachpan mein.
(on saying this, he was quite happy and smiling)
R(in his mind): kal ghar me sab kitne khus honge sanyu ko dekhkar. Maa papa ap sabke liye bahut badaa surprize hai. Ab bas subah hone ki der hai.

(he was interrupted by sanyu)
S: mcp.
R: haan..
S: main tumhe pakad k so sakti hun kya. Wo mujhe dar lagta hai akeli. Wahan bhi main so nahi paati thi.
R: isme puchhne ki kya baat hai baby. Main tumhara hi to hun jaise sona hai so jao.

(she pulls his arms keeps it on he shoulder, rests her head on his chest and hugs him tightly like a big demon is besides her to take her away..


guys if u want i will post nxt part today but if i get good response... so jaldhi jaldhi read and give me good response then i will upload nxt part ... tata 😊❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu_anya


ha we want update plz updatdm today dear why r u bothering abt others this ff was really awesome i really loved it plz update n dont even think to stop:(


uploaded yar read karo and enjy karo... waiting for ur comments 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
res 🤗
unres
1st of alll thnku sooo much 4 updating😳
I thout u would nevr update or ans me😭

this part was sooo cute😳 i am missing pari now...nxt part she wil b bck😃
Now i just wish Sanyu to get back normal sooon!!
hope she will be f9 soon na ?😳
I am luving this ff mre & mre😳
pm me plz
UPDATE SOOON😳

Edited by avniarpitha - 11 years ago

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