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Nishi

@-Snowflakes-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

It was awsm
Loved it
Update soon

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deepkriti

@..Deepkriti..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Go on Niru👏

Superb update😃😃

I like the way you put on the emotions. Its fab😉

keep writing and update soon😳

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@Slayerkajal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Awesome update...
Loved it...
Plzz plzz update soon...can't wait for it...
Thanks for the pm

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

i read both the chapters in one go yay !!!

it was an amazingg try

i loved how you introduced swayam

the whole star factor was very well penned

his dance defined him

wat can i say abt sharon's character

she was more than khubsurat

the fact she is blind n the contrast you gave wit

tat blindfold was heart-touching n emotional

nothr part which was very well written was

swayam's realisation

the second chapter was a lil rushed

so i m happy tat you din end here

i wud request you to extend tis ts for

few more chapters tat way we can get a journey

of how they strongly fell for each other

as a writer you definitely did an amazingg work !!!

do update soon 😛

-rosy

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

i luvd the concept very much...i luv with ths os...
update soon girl...n do pm me...

Edited by bhavz_vrushan - 11 years ago

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shreya

@....ShreyA....

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Amazin on amazin ..

Loved it dea ...

Btwn ty fr da pm...

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Hey dear,

Amazing piece of writing must say 👏

Your style of writing is very very appealing

It keeps the readers eyes fix to the screen till the end 😉

Would Love to read ahead

Do Update soon.. Very curious 😳

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Swathi

@Pinkylibbi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

You know what? I am totally loving this.
Any word I use would be less to describe it.

And thank god, I thought you ended it. I am glad that you changed it to a 3 Shot.

Update ASAP.

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Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Sorry fr late cmmnt

It was full rush of feelings n emotions

Waiting fr d update...

Pls update soon

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Nice TS👍🏼

bt when r u going 2 update

excited wat will happen next

update soon😃

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