||TaaRey SS: FRENZY|| Ch 4-pg29 {13/1/16} - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Awesome excerpt
Updt next part soon
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Bahaaron Phool Barsaao, Mera Mehboob Aaya Hai
Mera Mehboob Aaya Hai
Hawaaon Raagini Gaao, Mera Mehboob Aaya Hai
Mera Mehboob Aaya Hai
Haaye aap aaya kushiya aaye
Anyways wlcom back luvly yaar
But taarey MU but I luv tht both
Still care for each other ty for PM
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wow awsm
sounds very emotional
continue soon
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#74
M in love wid dis story..
Excerpt was really nice
Continue soon!!!
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Very excited for the next part
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childhood promises r trzr if d frnd is true lyk angel & ansh otherwise it's jst a waste of tym
nywaz amzng excrpt
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#77
Seems really interesting😉
Waiting for the chapter😉
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Aww finally Taarey see each other after ten whole years
And Rey is angry at his angel
I hope they made up soon
Wonderful update
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Hola TaaReyians :)

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Black Bold:Dialogues
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Pink:Female lyrics
purple:Duet lyrics





Chapter 2:My heart still wishes for you


Unless we share someone's pain,
We don't get separated from our [own] pain
and pain doesn't get separated from us.

She looked in eyes of the person who was holding her.The same Hazel brown eyes.The eyes which held the power to make her senseless anytime.

Taani:"Ansh?"

She asked touching his face with her hand.

Taxi Driver:"Madam,What are you doing there?Come here fast"

The Taxi driver shouted from the window of his taxi.He was hell scared to see that beautiful innocent girl standing with Eagle gang and that too in arms of leader of Eagle gang,RS.

She started struggling in his arms to free herself but he had no such plans.He was holding her waist tightly and as she struggled his hold became more firm.

Taani:"Ansh you are hurting me"

She said trying to push his hands away.He helped her standing straight.He closed his eyes to control his anger.There was no chance that he would hurt his Angel.

Rey:"What about my hurt,Angel?Why the hell you left me here,alone?"

He held her shoulder in a death like grip.His anger,pain and helplessness of ten years was stored inside him and watching her he couldn't control himself more.

Tears of helplessness,pain and betrayal filled in her beautiful eyes as she stared at him.

Taani:"Ansh it was not in..."

She tried to touch his cheek with her hands but he jerked her away .

Rey:"Leave"

He said turning his back to her.

Taani:"Ansh please"

She tried to come forward but he walked one more step away.

Rey:"Taani please leave"

She looked at him in shock.It was the first time he was addressing her with her real name.She kept looking at him with longing.Waiting for him to stop her but he just kept his back to her.

She turned around and ran away from there.Tears flowing out from her beautiful eyes.

"Angel,I'll never let you cry"

His one childhood innocent promise echoing in both of their ears.

~
He looked at her retreating figure.She was running not even once looking behind.She fiercely wiped the tears off her face and sat inside taxi.

He came towards his friends and snatched her yellow scarf from Nil's hand.His friends were looking at him surprised.

Nil understanding the situation asked everyone to relax and leave.They all started their bikes and drove away from there.

Nil and Rey sat down on sand near sea.

Nil:"She was your Angle,ri8?"

He asked looking at Rey but he was just staring at sea waves.

Rey:"Yes.She is my Angel"

He replied smiling and caressing her scarf.

Nil:"Then why did she left crying?"

He asked confused after watching that lovely girl crying.

Rey:"Nothing.Long Story"

He replied and got up to leave and then gave his hand to Nil.Both friends got and up ad drove away on their bikes.

~
He walked out from Mr.Joseph's office after finalising the deal for his restaurant.It was his parents dream to open a small restaurant in Vasco.That is why after competing his course he is here with his sister to complete dream of their parents.

He started walking on the streets of Main town.Remembering his childhood days here with his parents and sister.But then suddenly he saw a girl coming there running towards him.She came and crashed straight on his chest.He held her waist to steady her.

Sharon:"What the hell.How dare you touch me?Don't you know who I am?"

Sharon shouted angrily. Swayam left her waist and she fell down on ground.

Sharon:"Ouch...How dare you? You...you...I'll kill you"

She said angrily in pain.Swayam smirked and sat down on his one knee beside her.

Swayam:"Mam you asked me to not touch you.And by the way I don't know who you are"

He said and left from there leaving a fuming Sharon behind.

~
After 1 Week

Flashback~

Taani ran out from church after meeting her favorite Father in church.Actually visiting church was just a excuse for her.Everyday after school she insists Swayam to drop her here and makes an excuse to meet Father at church.But her real motive is to meet her Best friend.Her Ansh.

He was siting there near tree.His back rested on tree and tears flowing out from his eyes.

She panic looking at his crying face and ran towards him and sat down beside him and cupped his face.

Taani:"Ansh,why are you crying?"

She asked as her own tears started making way out from her eyes.

Taani:"Ansh tumko lagi kya?"

She asked checking his face and found a big wound there on his left eye which was bleeding badly.

Taani:"Ansh ye kaise lagi?"

She asked and wiped her tears as they were making her vision blur.

But He was not at all moving.His innocent eyes were staring ahead as tears were flowing from his eyes.

She opened her school water bottle and started washing his wound with her tiny hands.

Taani:"Ansh bolo na kya hua?"

She asked crying more.He flinched at her crying voice.

Rey:"Angel don't cry"

He said and wiped her tears with his hands.

Taani:"Ansh<sob>what happened?<sob>Kya hua tumko?"

She asked touching his wound.He flinched in pain.

Taani:"Ansh,Can I get a Jhappi pleezzz.Pleez Ansh"

She pleaded widening her little arms.He smiled on her stubbornness.She always demands a hug from him and he too gives in her demand every time.

She wrapped her little arms around his neck and he too kept his head on her shoulder and cried his heart out.

Rey:"He is not my dad,Angel."

He said in between his sobs.

Rey:"He said he picked me from Bin where my mother threw me.He pushed me and I hit table.He slapped me too"

He said crying in her arms.Her Ten years old mind could not understand everything but she just knew that her Ansh was hurting and she has to heal his pain and nothing else.

Rey:"I don't have anyone with me Angel.My Mamma dumped me and Ebrahim is not my Dad"

He said seperating himself from her.But she hugged him back.

Taani:"Don't say like this Ansh.You have me.I am with you always.I am your best friend,your Family.My Mamma-Papa are yours too.We can share them Ansh.Plzzz don't cry.My Bhai is your Bhai too"

She said and wiped his tears with her tiny hands.

Rey:"No Angel I Can't share them with you.They are your Mamma-Papa"

He replied taking her hands in his.

Taani:"No,Ansh.We'll share them.We'll share everything we have with each other.You are my best friend na.So,don't say no."

She said hugging him again.He too let go of his pain and hugged her back.


Taani:"Ansh"

She got up from her sleep trying to hold her Ansh but he was nowhere near her.

Its been a week she came back in this town but from then her Ansh is avoiding her.She saw him only twice.Once outside church and once near her college but then second time he left before she could initiate any conversation.

She got down from bed and walked in her balcony.The scene in front of her was so calming.Many children were playing in ground in front of her house and behind the ground the green tall trees were standing and after that limitless sea.She smiled as she inhaled the fresh morning air.

~
Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yaheen marna aur jeena
Yaheen mandir aur madeena..


He parked his bike outside her college behind a tree.He saw her coming out from college dressed in a beautiful pink frock.Her long hair falling on her back.She was talking to her friend but her eyes were searching someone all around.

Teri galliyan.. galiyan teri galiyan..
Mujh ko bhaavein galiyaan teri galliyaan
Teri galiyan.. galiyan teri, galiyan..
Yoon hi tadpaavein, galliyan teri, Galliyaan..


He hid himself behind the tree so that she couldn't spot him.After she left from there in her Bus he too sat down on his bike and left.

~

Tu meri neendon mein sota hai
Tu mere ashqon mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayaalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai silaa tu mere dard ka
Mere dil ki duaayein hain.. Teri galliyan


She was passing by town after buying vegetables when she saw him siting roadside with some of his friends.

She made her way towards him.

Taani:"Ansh I...umm Can you come aside for a minute"

She said fidgeting with her scarf.She was feeling so nervous in front of him after their last encounter.

Rey:"Go away from here.Don't disturb me,Taani"

He said continuing playing on his phone.His friends were checking her out shamelessly and he was just trying to control his temper.

Taani:"But Ansh..."

She tried to speak but he pulled her away holding her shoulder in a tight grip.

Rey:"What the hell is your problem,Angel?Why you came back?Just go away"

He pushed her aside on wall.She tried to control her tears.

Taani:"Ansh please"

She tried to speak but he left from there leaving her behind.

~
She entered inside her Bhai's restaurant.He was working on some orders as she greeted him.

Taani:"Busy?"

She asked as he was totally engrossed in his work.He nodded and then again started packing some orders.

Taani:"Can I help you with something,Bhai?"

She asked siting down on one chair.

Swayam:"Actually the delivery boy is absent today so I've to deliver all these orders.I'll deliver them on my jeep but this one order is from far end of town and that too in different direction from others."


He explained and Taani's eyes lit up with excitement.

Taani:"Bhai I'll deliver it.Please Bhai I also want to help but you always keeps me away from work.Pleeezz Bhai"

She said with child like excitement and Swayam smiled on her childishness.

Swayam:"But Taani the place is in east"

He said understanding the danger for her.

Taani:"Oh please Bhai.Do you believe in these rivalries? Nahi na,then why?Come one give it to me.I'll be back soon,bye"

She said and after taking the order and address left for her work.

~
She entered inside the huge gate of East town,the Eagle's area.

She spotted some guys siting there on their bikes but ignoring them she started moving inside but they blocked her way.

Guy1:"Where are you going girl?You are KK's sis ri8?"

He asked blocking her way.She tried to move away but he snatched the packet from her hands.

Taani:"I've to deliver this order here.Please let me go"

She said but they all started laughing.

Rey:"Let her go,Max"

Rey said as he came there on his bike.They all obliged without a word.

Rey:"Sit on bike.I'll drop you"

He said and she smiled at him.

Taani:"Hello to you too,Ansh"

She said smiling and irritating him more.It was always like this in between them.He always the angry man types but she love to irritate him by smiling unnecessarily or asking him for her famous jhappi's.

Rey:"Don't test my patience,Angel."

He said in his no-non sense tone and she zipped her mouth dramatically and sat down on bike behind him.

Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera
Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra
Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se
Kho jaayein.. kho naa jaayein hum se
Kaafilaa, waqt ka rok le..
Ab dil se judaa na hon..

She started her nonstop blabbering and he was trying hard to not to smile on her silly talks.

Taani:"Ansh you are smiling"

She screamed as she saw his smiling face in mirror.

Rey:"Shut up"

He said and continued his control to stop himself from smiling on her antics.

Teri Galiyaan, galiyaan teri galiyaan..
Yoonhi tadpaaven, galiyan teri.. galiyaan




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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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