||TaaRey SS: FRENZY|| Ch 4-pg29 {13/1/16}

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Hola TaaReyians :)


I am here again with a New story.Ummm don't kill me please and if you want to then first listen to me.I know I have so many On-hold stories and I have not updated so many stories since long but from so long I wanted to start this story.So,Please please have a look on this.After that you are free to kill me.
Main marr gayi to stories kaun update karega ? :P ;)


|| Frenzy ||

Chapter 1: Ansh and Angel

She looked out from window.Her eyes shining with new light,smile adoring her beautiful lips and heart swelled with happiness.She is going back to her hometown.The place where she was born.Where her parents started their beautiful life.So many memories of her childhood are hidden in this place.Her weekends masti on beaches .Sunday masses in her favorite church.Her mom's bargaining in fish market to buy her and her brother's favorite fish and cook it at home on Sunday's.Ride's on her Bhai's cycle.She missed everything about this place and most importantly she missed HIM.Her best friend,her childhood love,her soul mate.

Everything was attached with this one place.Away from the hustle bustle of main Goa.The pollution,traffic,over crowd of Goa was not here.

Vasco,her hometown.A small coastal state of Goa.Named after a noble and richest man of that time Albert Vasco.

She was away from this town from very long.When she was 14 her parents left this place to live their life in city.After that they all got settled in city and never got time to come back.She always wished to come back to meet HIM once but her parents never allowed it.After her father's fight with her Uncle(Tauji) they never wished to come back to meet that person again.Her Uncle also died after some years.But still her father never came back.

And now She and her Bhai are here after 10 years to live with their Cousin,Kunal.

Swayam:"Nervous?"

He asked looking at her lost state.She looked towards him and smiled.And then shook her head in No.

Swayam:"Excited?"

He asked again and she smiled and embraced his arm with her hands and then rested her head on his shoulder.

Taani:"Happy is the correct word,Bhai.I am very happy that we both are here again"

She replied with a big smile and he too smiled back.

Swayam:"I never thought that we'll ever come back.But seems like god is in our favour"

He said looking out from window as the train came to an halt on Vasco station.

She smiled in return and then Swayam took hold of their two bags and they both got down from train.

She looked around the station.The same rusted benches on platform.The same water tank near tea shop.Everything was same like before.

Swayam:"Taani,I have a meeting with land dealer for our restaurant's place.I will have to go to main town."

He explained her as they both started coming out from station.She nodded in understanding.

Taani:"Bhai,I'll also come with you"

She said as they both were looking for Taxi.He shook his head in denial.

Swayam:"No,I will take a lot of time and you are already tired with journey.Then in evening you have to go for admission also.So,you go and rest"

He ordered in nodded.They both started looking for Taxi and many Taxi drivers came there and started hovering around them.

Swayam:"We have to go to the west side"

He said and all Taxi drivers backed away.And shouted for other Taxi drivers who were resting on their Taxi's.

TD:Scorpion's Area"

one Taxi driver got up from his Taxi and came near TaaYam and took their bags.

TD(Scorpion area):"Come sir I'll take you there"

He said keeping their bags in his Taxi.Swayam explained him about way and then left from there after taxi driver took Taani away with him to her destination.And Swayam made his way towards Main town in other Taxi.

~

Taani was sitting silently in Taxi.She was looking out the beautiful greenery.

Taani:"Umm..What is this Scorpion Area?"

She asked and the middle aged Taxi driver smiled.

TD:"Are you new here?"

He asked looking at her through mirror.She shook her head.

Taani:"No,I used to live here.But I've come back after ten years"

She explained and TD smiled in understanding.

TD:"Many things have changed here in last ten years.Now this place is divided in two parts.West side is Scorpion's area and East side is Eagles.Eagles are not allowed to enter in our Scorpion area and the same follows for us.Eagles and Scorpions are two very dangerous gangs."

He explained patiently and Taani was shocked to hear something like this.She wanted to ask so many questions but then left them for later to ask from her Bhai.

Taani:"Stop.Stop.Stop"

She shouted as she spotted her favorite church from window.The same church where she used to spend time with HIM.

Taani:"Uncle can you please wait for some minutes.I want to visit this church.Pleaseee"

She pleaded making her puppy face.The old man smiled and nodded.

TD:"I'll also have a round of tea nearby by then.Come fast and wait for me here only.This place is not safe so don't wander around"

He ordered her in a stern tone and she nodded her head like a kid and smiled in excitement.

The Taxi driver drove away from there and she turned around to go inside church.

~

A ten years old little boy dressed in black shorts and white tee sneaked out from church escaping the boring mass prayer going inside.He looked around and spotted an old banyan tree there and ran towards it to rest under its shade.

He reached there panting for breath.He closed his eyes to relax and when he opened them he saw a shadow of someone sitting around the tree.He tip toed there to look on the person and it was the first time he saw her.

Dressed in a yellow frock she was sitting there on ground.Her tiny hands making Mud castle.Her short brown hair held up in two tiny pig tails.Her soft chubby cheeks covered with mud and her light brown eyes shining in excitement of building her castle.

Sensing his presence she looked towards him and then passed him the most beautiful smile of world.He felt his own lips forming a small smile.

She patted the space beside her and invited him to join her.He was hesitant first.He never had any friends and it was all new for him to get such treatment.

Hesitantly he sat beside her and she forward her hands covered with mud towards him.

Girl:"I m Taani.What is your name?"

He smiled when he heard her melodious voice.Taani.Her name was so beautiful.

Boy:"I am Reyaansh"

He said and held her hand to introduce himself.She smiled and then asked him to play with her.

~
He was sitting there under the Banyan tree and was watching the sea waves from there.Church was surrounded by just little wall boundaries all around and then started the Beach from there.He still remember how they both used to sit here all day and used to watch sea waves.Sometimes building castles or collecting Sea shells.

Rey:"Where are you Angel?"

He whispered looking at sea.

~

She came out from church after prayer.Her eyes were shining with happiness after coming here.It is the place which is closest to her heart.

She looked around with a smile on her face.She came back outside church's boundary and started looking for Taxi driver.But he was not there.She decided to wait for him and then pulled out a yellow scarf from her hand bag and covered her face with it to avoid sun rays.

She sat down on one stone and started looking around again.The place was same like before.The same walls,same roads and the same Banyan tree.

~

Taani:"Ansh,Slow down.Pleeezz this is so scary"

Eight years Taani screamed as her Ansh was moving cycle too fast and she was siting behind him on his cycle.Dressed in a beautiful pink frock and hair held up in a pony tail.

Ansh was her friend from past four months.He was her best friend now.And she was his only friend.Though he was two years older than her but he was still her best buddy.

Rey:"Angel,I want to show you something today"

He said as he parked his cycle and they both got down from it in front of church.She smiled in excitement and smiled challenging her and they both started running towards Banyan tree.Everyday they used to do race from Church to Banyan tree and he always let her win to make her smile.

They stopped in front of tree and he held her hand to show her something.

Taani-Rey

It was scribed on Banyan tree.

Rey:"Look I wrote our names here.Now we both will be always together .

~

She smiled and got up from there to look for their names.She was going towards it when suddenly eight-nine bikers came there and started biking around her.She looked at them in horror.

They stopped and one of them got down and started coming towards her.

Guy1:"What are you doing here?"

He asked looking at her from head to toe.She shifted uncomfortably on her feet and then decided to move away.

But he held her arm tightly.

Guy1:"I asked,What are you doing here?"

~


He was sitting there when he saw his friend's bikes hovering around a girl dressed in a yellow knee length dress.Her long brown hair were open and were reaching her half waist and her face was covered with a yellow scarf.
He shook his head on his friends craziness and started going towards girl to save her from them.He knew they'll not do anything with her but sure they'll scare her to hell.

~

Taani:"I came here for prayer"

She answered tears threatening to spill out from her eyes.

Guy2:"Where are you from?"

He asked as other guys also got down from bike.

Taani:"I am from Main City.I have come here to meet my Cousin"

She answered and tried to move away but the guy was still holding her hand.

Guy1:"What is your Cousin's name?"

He asked leaving her hand as she was wriggling under his hold.She backed away a little.

Taani:"Kunal.Kunal Kapoor.Please let me go"

She answered and they all looked at her in shock.And then started laughing.

Guy3:"Ahhh..you are KK's Cousin.Interesting"

He said laughing and moving towards her but she backed away scared.

Guy4:"Remove your scarf,baby.Let us also see how KK's Cousin looks?"

He said holding her scarf.She backed away and pushed the person who aside and her started running away.She ran just three steps when she collided with a hard body and lose her balance.

~

He was near his friends when he saw them removing the scarf from the girls face.He walked fast to stop them but then the girl pushed his one of friend and started running towards him.Her scarf was left behind in his friends hand but her face was not visible as she was running looking behind towards his friends.But then she turned around and collided with his body.

She was losing her balance when he held her from her waist to save her from falling.She looked towards him but her face was covered with her long hair.But as the wind blew her hair flew and then her face was visible.

But his eyes rested on those light brown eyes only.Fear was visible in her eyes but still her eyes were same.His Angle's eyes.


Hola again :)

So,How was the First chapter.This story is inspired by movie Josh but story will be all diffrent.I just took the name of gangs and place from movie .All the other things are not same.

Frenzy name coz JOSH also means Frenzy.

Now give me your honest answers.Do you want me to continue this?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm luvly taarey know each other
And luv each other from childhood aww
Taayam prt was nice luvly yaar luv taani dress
And taarey meet but n rey save taani haaye
Waiting for nxt prt thanks for PM wait u did not
Send PM right
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oops
I completely forgot to unreserve😕😆
The story is amazing
eagles and scorpions😛 sounds funny more than thrilling😆 *just kidding*
update soon
Edited by deepkriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting story
superb start
do continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awsm start
love it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow another TR story,

and the beginning was perfect..
great that he recognized her eyes, this will be interesting to read
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey titli 😊
New TR story no bad ha 🥳
Awesome start Ansh and Angel
A Love story in Goa I love that place so much beach parties sunset point sooo romantic😳

Finally at last Ansh met her Angel wow
Flashback memories were cute specially the first FB their first meet.
The way u describe taani first cute innocent kiddy look was just beautiful.

Waiting for the story to proceed
update soon
Plzzz

Thank u so much for starting a such a beautifull and different TR story🤗
Love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting story
superb start
do continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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too good nonu , very intreasting , luckily meine josh nahi dekhi soo, its very loving start 4 me , m loving this story n 1st update is awesome, m looking forward to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb start
It reminds me f josh movie..
Bt do continue soon!!

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