SanDhir SS:Incomplete.*series of OS and Drabble*Part 10 & epilogue - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anneban

umm...where to start from..

this was just simply superb ..it had et al ..all the emotions beauttifully conveyed ..when i found rd being with this girl rids ..my haert sank bt i knew he needed to move on too ..as sanyu having betrayed him(or so i thought ) bt then a sandhir fan that i am!! ;p no bt srslly this character rids was so amazing so lovely n most of all pure hearted soul as she is !! letting him have his love n letting go of him ,, though she eventually found her soulmate too ! i must say u penned down this one beautifully it was just flawless...n yea the best part was that u mixed up the sandhir n clay-rids convo ..one of the creative ideas of beautiful writers such as yourself!! ;)
n also

If you could go back and just change one thing about your life, would you? And if you did, would that change make your life better? Or would that change ultimately break your heart? Or break the heart of another? Would you choose an entirely different path? Or would you change just one thing? Just one moment. One moment that you've always wanted back.

these lines ..aahh! my fav from the above ..n just so trruee!!
actually it is sometyms the moments only we would want to change which inturn can change our lives n future altogether !! it is the moments which change us for who we are or become .and afterall MOMENTS are tht we cherish!!
kudos to u !! <3 <3




thank you dear! I'm really glad that all the characters appealed to you!😳
I used Riddhima's character just to show that there are people who will back-stab you but there are people who will always be there for you. So don't lose hope on humans yet.😳
And SanDhir are always meant to be so there is no chance that I am gonna separate them.πŸ˜†
Aren't those lines an absolute beauty?😳 One of my favorite quotes from One Tree Hill.πŸ˜ƒ
I have updated the story, I am so happy that you liked it.😊
Thanks for the lovely comment.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sushie166

res

unres *like a boss* 😎
maine toh pm aane se pehle padh lia, nd comment bhi kr rhi hun 🀣
moi itni jyada intelligent ho gyi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Comin to the chap
Parth lookin like a gypsy 🀣
such a moron he is πŸ˜•
I liked Riddhima and Evans story so much... 😳
But Sandhir are best... Yaay dori wala scene aa gya *mein kitni besharam hun* 🀣🀣
After that everything was so awesome.. πŸ˜‰
I told earlier also...i like it how u keep on shifting scenes! its so intersting to read it 😳
Vidhushi ultimate entertainer 🀣
Randhir in black shirt *starts drooling*
Zoya, both the parts were so beautiful...
though you posted it after a month
Ab plzz khtm kr de iss SS ko 😭
Update soon (i knw iss phrase se tumhe koi fark nhi parta, bt still saying) 🀣

Love
-Sush 😳


boss ki beti toh boss ki tarah hi un-res karegi na! 😎
Beta maine update kiya hai! Parle! 🀣
abh rona band kar and thanks for the comment! 🀣


beta...don't mess with me okay! 😎🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Beautiful! Keep writing! :D


thanks arushi!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED IT MAN THIS WAS SIMPLY AWSM!!!! πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! Zoya
such a lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely Ending😳😳
Love it to the core...❀️❀️

Lovely, beautifully and nicely written dearπŸ‘β­οΈ
Love it😳
Keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ
Do write more
Love to read ur work❀️
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
reswa
unreswa after i read the whole thing...
might take a while, got lots of college stuff to finish first..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Moi aa gyi.. πŸ€—
mera cousin mahaan.. 🀣

Thnk god tumne last part dia... πŸ˜†
This was so sweet...
And a perfect end...
Oh how much I love happy endings, thanks
Zoya, go and read the total update, it is so beautifully written...
Agli baar quit krna ka socha na toh main hi maar dalungi 😑
Sandhir Convo was totally aww..
Maine ghus de dia...bt yeh iske liye nhi tha "thorns of Roses" ke next update ke liye tha 🀣
Update kr dena, moi aug ke end mein padhungi.. 😳

THIS WAS AWESOME πŸ˜‰

Love
-Sush 😳
Edited by sushie166 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES!
I will edit tomorrow! HopefullyπŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updatesπŸ‘
Loved the way you ended itπŸ‘
Continue writing more
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulously written...
it is one of my favorate os collection...
keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!

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