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umm...where to start from..
this was just simply superb ..it had et al ..all the emotions beauttifully conveyed ..when i found rd being with this girl rids ..my haert sank bt i knew he needed to move on too ..as sanyu having betrayed him(or so i thought ) bt then a sandhir fan that i am!! ;p no bt srslly this character rids was so amazing so lovely n most of all pure hearted soul as she is !! letting him have his love n letting go of him ,, though she eventually found her soulmate too ! i must say u penned down this one beautifully it was just flawless...n yea the best part was that u mixed up the sandhir n clay-rids convo ..one of the creative ideas of beautiful writers such as yourself!! ;)
n also
If you could go back and just change one thing about your life, would you? And if you did, would that change make your life better? Or would that change ultimately break your heart? Or break the heart of another? Would you choose an entirely different path? Or would you change just one thing? Just one moment. One moment that you've always wanted back.
these lines ..aahh! my fav from the above ..n just so trruee!!
actually it is sometyms the moments only we would want to change which inturn can change our lives n future altogether !! it is the moments which change us for who we are or become .and afterall MOMENTS are tht we cherish!!
kudos to u !! <3 <3
Anupamaa
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