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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: priya_nishal
woww such an awesome update anu, really love it alot.. y virat s hell bend to break manvi and zain relation.. bt love ths posessive virat.. continue soon da, cldnt wait

yeah akka

i will update soon

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: VIRMANVIAN
agar itna crazy hai maanvi par toh
choda kyun maanvo ko
apni bache ko b chod diya
pls reveal soon otherwise i will start hating virat.
thnx for pm dr

don't be hyper di

i will update soon

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: pink1
nice update how could he get down show
much if he have feeling he should break
there friendship update soon

yeah di i will

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: GOOGLU
Outstanding update dear. .
Love manvi n zain ' frndship. ..
Yhe way they care n trust each other. .
Wts wrng wd virat...
He is really madly in love with manvi...
Wt will happen when manvi came to know virat's real intension. ?
Egrly waiting for next chapter. ..
Continue soon. ..
Thanks alot for pm dea.
Keep rocking
Tc

thanku di for ur lovely comment

nd i will

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: niki795
awesome update
virat planning to separate zain and manvi
continue soon
thanks for the pm

thanku so much nd i will continue soon

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: virmanfan013
superb update anu
aww zain n manvi had become best buddies now but people think they are as lovers
aww manvi trust zain so much which failed virats plan
now what will be his next plan to get manvi
waiting eagerly

thanku so much dii

i will update soon

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

PART 6

Next a pleasent morning nd a hope full day...

Today virat is determined , determined to say his feelings to manvi. Now he is not cared about any one else but he really hate Zain from his heart. So he want to talk to manvi about his love for her and make a distance between manvi and Zain. He have a faith that his love for manvi will make a distance between manvi and zain.

But we don't know naa what's our fate store for us...

Other side Manvi is not calmed yet after what the students had done to Zain. Here Zain is trying to calm her down but manvi has become completely a hungry tigress.

Zain: Hey Manvi calm down it's all over now naa.

Manvi:Who told that it's all over now. It's started only. Now i will show you what i can do.

Zain:Manvi, relax i know how much you care about me but i am fine and happy because you are there for me Manvi in my worst time. You trusted me naa that's enough for me Manvi.

Manvi:But Zain...

Zain:Manvi...

Manvi:Ok i will not think about it anymore.(in mind: but Zain i will find the truth soon.)

Luanch break

Zain:Where is Manvi ? Hmm where she has gone at these time. Actually always she wil mess up with me in coming late but today she is missing... i must find her.

In a class room two persons are standing face to face.

Manvi:Actually i have no problem with you but you did a grave mistake yesterday.

Neha:Please for that i apolagised naa.

Manvi:I don't want your appology. I only want to know about the truth.

Neha:Truth...

Manvi:Haa truth who told you to do these.

Neha:No one told me,

A sound echoed in the room'slap'

Yeah Manvi again slapped Neha

Neha:No i will tell the truth...actually Virat told me to do these.

Manvi:What 'Virat'.

Neha:Yeah please believe me.

Manvi:But why Virat will do this that too Zain.

Neha:That all thinks i don't know he told me to do these nd he offered me so much money so i can't deny it.

Manvi:Please get lost from here other wise i will lost my control.

Neha ran from there and that time Zain came there and saw Manvi crying. So without thinking twice he run towards her and take her in arms.

Zain: Manvi what happened? Why are you crying Manvi? What happened?

Manvi:Zain, here no one is good and we can't trust anybody.

Zain:But Manvi

But Manvi is uncontrollably crying so Zain remind silent and kissed her forhead to calm her. But on the other side Virat is seeing all these but only actions so he misunderstood everything and ran from there. His hatred toward Zain has become it's high level.

And now after seeing Manvi too hugging Zain he become a wild animal without any mercy. So now he is not a man he had become a beast...

A beast can destroy so many lives...

Zain:Are you ok now.

Manvi:Haa i am Zain i want to tell you one thing..

Zain:Ok tell me..

But at that time some one calls Zain and he went with Manvi to do that work. And that day she did't get a chance to say it to him. So she waited for next day.

Every afternoon Manvi and Zain will go for walking and it's their daily routine. But today Manvi is waiting alone for Zain but he is not came yet. So she is waiting for him. Suddenly a car came and take her inside and they tied her hands and eyes with clothes. Here Manvi is helpless and she is crying. But nobody is there to help her. Suddenly the car stopped and they taked Manvi inside it.

And they all go after releasing her and she get her shock of life.

Room is decorated with rose petals and so many flowers. There comes a sound from outside and she became extremely weak by seeing him infront of her.

BYE

Edited by panamaa - 11 years ago

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Hiba

@Kicha111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Nice update

Manvi cme 2 knw d truth

Virat misunderstood evrythg...

Do cont soon

Hope it s virat der...

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Hiba

@Kicha111

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Nice update

So manvi cme 2 knw abt d truth

Virat misunderstood evrythg

Do cont soon

Hope its virat der

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

AWESOME UPDATE ANU. LIKED IT VEEY MUCH. FINALLY MANVI KNOWS THE TRUTH. NOW VIRAT IS BURIED TO SEE ZAIN AND MANVI TOGETHER.BUT WHAT WILL HE DO. IS IT VIRAT WHO IS BEHIND KIDNAPPED OR SOMEONE ELSE. BUT I HAVE A STRONG FEELING THAT IT MAY BE ZAIN. SO PLZ REVEAL IT SOON ANU. UR STORY IS GOING TO BE VERY INTERESTING NOW. CANT WAIT NOW. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. LOVE U.