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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: VIRMANVIAN

oh god
what is going to happen next?
where is zain?
who kidnapped maanvi?
all these questions must be cleared in the next update.
please try to give long updates dear
liked the update.
thanks for pm.
update soon.

in next update every thing will be clear di
i will try to give
thanku for ur comments di
nd i will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: little_angle

Nice update annuu..!!

Aww por zain...
Now vurat wil not leave him...

Agry virat...!!! 😲

Wat about the end.. Where ia manvi.. Update soonnn u ended it at a intersting point..

in next update i will reveal soon dil
i will update soon dil
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Posted: 11 years ago
Outstanding update dear. ..
So finally truth are in frnt of manvi. ..
And now she didn't believe virat. ...
Love her bonding wd zain. ...
But virat missunderstud whole scene. ..
But now scaring wd virat's intention. ...
Who kidnapped manvi ????
Whole scenario now scaring me...
Hope that is not ,,, which I think. ...
Egrly waiting for next chapter. ...
Try to update soon dear...
Thanks alot for pm dea. ...
Keep rocking
Tc
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Outstanding update dear. ..
So finally truth are in frnt of manvi. ..
And now she didn't believe virat. ...
Love her bonding wd zain. ...
But virat missunderstud whole scene. ..
But now scaring wd virat's intention. ...
Who kidnapped manvi ????
Whole scenario now scaring me...
Hope that is not ,,, which I think. ...
Egrly waiting for next chapter. ...
Try to update soon dear...
Thanks alot for pm dea. ...
Keep rocking
Tc

thanku for ur longwala comments di
i always feel happy by reading ur comments
nd i will update soon di
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Posted: 11 years ago
i will as soon as possible di
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part anu
haww truth is out n virat misunderstood the situation
i think virat had kidnapped her
waiting eagerly for next part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

awesome part anu
haww truth is out n virat misunderstood the situation
i think virat had kidnapped her
waiting eagerly for next part
update soon

hmm let's wait till the next update
i will soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: panamaa


thanku for ur longwala comments di
i always feel happy by reading ur comments
nd i will update soon di



Thanks dear for replying 😊
Waiting. ...Keep rocking ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 7
At present,

Virat woke up from his memories by hearing a cry nd he know who it is. It is his own blood crying. Without thinking twice he rush to Manvi's house. He entered Manvi's house through the half opened door and rush inside. He so his son lying in the craddle and crying for his mother. Without any delay he rush to him and take him in his hands. He feel so much happy because for the first time he is taking his son. At that time he heard a voice from out side the room and it was his Manvi's and he feel so happy.
Manvi:Baby don't cry . Mama will come now it'self with your food ok.
With these she enterd in her room with a bowl of baby food in her hand. At the time she saw him she is stunned and get angry. She rushed to his son and take her baby away from him.
Manvi:How dare you ,how dare you take my baby ?
Virat:Manvi, mein
Manvi:Shut up just shut up and get out or i will call police for entering my house without my permission nd taking my baby.
Virat:Manvi please what are you saying. I am your Virat naa.
Manvi:Excuseme actually i don't know who are you and i only know you as Jeevan's friend and never ever try to take my baby.
Virat:What is these Manvi. I know i had made a huge mistake and I want a chance , a chance to retify my mistake.
Manvi:What are you talking about Mr Virat. I am not etting you. So please leave from here.
Virat:Manvi...
Manvi:I said you get out from my house.
By hearing these Virat went out from there without arguing more.
Virat(in mind): You have changed alot Manvi . Now i can't see your innocence in your face. I can only see hatred towards me and i know you are rite in your place. I am the one who changed you. I am the one who behind all your lose. Please fprgive me Manvi and give me one more chance because I love you, Love you so much more than my life.
With these thought he sit on a chai and closed his eyes and he can only see Manvi's smiling face then pleading face nd atlast crying face. After 5 - 10mints he heard a loud and harsh voice from Manvi's house. He rushed towards his balcony and his friends where already standing there looking towards Manvi's house. In Manvi's house she is carrying her baby in her hands and Shika is standind angrly looking towards a person who seems to 55 years of age.He is talking harshly toward Manvi and Manvi is standing there with out any reaction. Shika is burning in anger but Manvi is holding her hand to keep her quite.
Mahesh(Manvi's papa): You know that every month i will come here for money and it is my right to come here nd you have the duty to give me the money I and my family deserved.
Manvi:But papa...
Mahesh:What did you call me papa. Please never ever call me like that way. Our relationship has end when you chose thse creature in you r hand more than us.
Manvi:Papa..
Mahesh:Just shut up. I know what my wife is your step mother but she loved you more than our own daughter.
Manvi:Yeah papa you are rite she loved my money not me.
Mahesh:Manvi hold your toungh and we gave all our savings for your studies and now we have nothing. So it's your duty to give compenstion for destryoing our dreams and health.
Now it become unbearable to Shika and she bursted out.
Shika:Excuse me what do you mean by compensation Uncle?
Mahesh:I don't want to talk with you and you Manvi next time when i will come i want money. It's not for me for ypur sister who is getting marry.
Manvi:What my Ali is getting marry .
Mahesh:Yeah and arrange the money fast as you can. Any way i want money.
With these he leaves from there and Manvi get happy with the thouht of her sister getting marry soon.
Manvi:Wow Shika Ali become so big to get marry. I can't belive it.
Shika:Manvi are you mad. They people don't love you . They only want your money.
Manvi:So what Shika I am responsible for their pathetic situation so i want to give every happiness they deserve naa.
Shika:Ok as your wish but what about the money.
Manvi:Hey I will manage it. Don't think too much. Think about your Jeevan for atleast a minute yaar.
Shika:I am serious Manvi.
Manvi:I am also my Shika.
With that they went inside without noticing the boys who staring at them with amusement.
In other side everyone is stunned by hearing the conversation between three. They all felt pain for Manvi.
Rahul:Who is that beast who done these cruelty to these poor soul.
Jeevan:If i get him alive infront of me then i will kill him with my own hands.
Virat:Then kill me Jeevan.
With that sentence all looked back where Virat is standing.All become quite by hearing these sentence.
Jeevan:What do you mean Virat?
Virat: I mean only the truth . I am the only person who is responsble for her present condition and he started his story.
Continuation of the flashback,
Manvi:You, why are you here and why you bring me here.
Virat:Manvi I want to say you that I love you and you want o say me that you love me too.
Manvi:Are you mad?
Virat:😡 Yes i am after seeing you . I am crazy for you but you what are you doing with me. You and Zain makes me mad.
Manvi:You Mr Virat I thought you are a good friend but you are not
and i am leaving now.
Virat:Where will you go from my place and i can do what ever i want now but if you say i love u to me then you will be free from here and we can start a fresh life. If you say no then we can start a painful life. Any way i am happy because you will be with me.
With that he bagan to come close to her and she started to move back.
Manvi:Virat you are drunk and you are not in your senses .
With that her cell started ringing and she get reliefe by seeing Zain's name on the screen.
Manvi:Zain...
Wuth that Virat become a wild beast and his anger eached it's hieght by seeing smile on Manvi's face by seeing Zain''s name. And with that he caught her and he started to force on her and he succeded in it. She plead infront of him but he denied her crying and pleadings.
Afternoon, Manvi sitting on the floor near the bed with out any expression and here Virat id sleeping peacefully on the bed. Manvi gatherd herself and without making sound run from there to a hill top to end her life which is destroyed by Virat. But at that time her cell ringed and by hearing other side coversation she can't control on her self and she throwed her phone and she cried her heart out.
bye

Edited by panamaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yipee me first to comment..

Unres
Superb update
Nice
Amazing work
The flashback was lyk😭😭😭
Fantastic
And what virat did was really bad
And i feel lyk slapping manvi's dad
Poor manvi
Continue soon
Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago

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