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Posted: 11 years ago
Im loving it more day by day n couldn't control
Myself to thnk further abt this ff in my dreams ;)
Awsummm update there were some moments
Which were so depressing his guilt n her helpnes
Im dying for next part plzzz update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deeps, what can I say but what a wonderful update. I am totally awed by your writing.
The scene in the hospital waiting room made me feel sorry for all those rich couples where the father can afford the expense of a private clinic, but the not the time to attend an antinatal appointment with his wife, the bearer of his child. So glad that Arnav was there, being all hands on so to speak. The scene of the two of them talking was so sweet, the calm before the storm. I truely felt for Arnav, he had never seen her undressed as such, and the sight of her like that brought back the horrible truth. OMG, in a sense he was traumatised just as much, if not more as he wasnt drugged up at the time. He needs to talk to someone about his feelings... how is he going to feel when they do make love?

Its so sad that Khushi thinks that the first time leaves scars, will she put two and two together. Was this the same clinic that Anjali works at? Will the doctor discuss Khushis condition and how she got the scars? Anjali will definately figure that Adi raped her, hence his actions on that night. Hopefully she will not tell the police, Arnav has suffered enough. I loved the way you expressed Arnavs feelings about the baby, how at first he wondered if he could live with this child, but then realises that the child is an innocent, hopefully he will remember the child Adi was before childish prejudices blurred his sense if right. I felt for Khushi, the feeling that the baby hates her so much as it is kicking her on the inside is heartbreaking. The child she would fight for, hold above her love, her Arnav, hates its own mother.instead of being overjoyed at the sight of it she is under the impression the baby does not love her. When she finds out will she be able to love it?.. too much to think about.


Deeps the way you sre weaving this story is flabbergasting, Arnav seems to have found his biological perents, wanting to know the reasons why they did what they did must have been gnawing at him for years. I hope he leans on Aman, I have the utmost respect for this character, I love his scenes, his vibrancy , his utmost respect for Arnav. Arnav probably will never talk to someone, but he would talk to Aman. 👏 👏 👏
Edited by addicted25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing and wonderful update:)). I hope no more tears and anguish just love and understanding in growing relationship between Arnav and Khushi. But I think Khushi should know the truth!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

The replies you give here Deepthi, fuels our minds to think more about the story and the different angles it can be looked at from. Thats the reason we cannot stop thinking about TVK. 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem


The replies you give here Deepthi, fuels our minds to think more about the story and the different angles it can be looked at from. Thats the reason we cannot stop thinking about TVK. 🤔


Absolutely... Very True...

As Meenu Says .. instead of saying RAM RAM RAM... I will say TVK TVK TVK .. and while I am thinking about TVK, I always say to myself ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya



Hey Abhi, I think I understand why you are finding it hard to understand Khushi's reaction to the US. If you take Khushi, she always sensed trouble beforehand. Ex from initial chapters: When Payal called from Mumbai to Khushi, Khushi knew something is wrong. If you remember, being miles away from Arnav that night, She felt he is in pain. She called Aman and asked her to take her to him. Her instincts are too strong to ignore. As we proceed, you will see how Khushi reacts to her own pregnancy, as she reaches every milestone like feeling the kicks or the way she feels everything in general about it. Its no longer any nausea or sickness for her to feel this way, its her gut feelings, her intuitions that lays path for her.



Happy weekend!


Deepu.. so are you indirectly hinting us here.. that.. Khushi will figure out all by herself according to her intuitions all through her pregnancy. Her gut feelings, her intuitions that lays path for her in figuring out the truth.

PS: I know I am sounding "C"razy... Trying to figure it out by my intuitions... I know you are laughing at me Deepu...😉

Happy Weekend to you too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
every step of this journey is very painful test of his tolerance patience n he is doing best at his ability
feeling discomfort she was having while n after ultrasound was somewhere subconscious alarm
nice one
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
hospital part is awesome
arnav is trying level beat to jeep khushi happy
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sry sry sry... Couldn't cmnt the last 5 updates..I could not login due to some stupid ntwrk . ...BT don't think that I have passed my days without tvk! I had my way to read the update whnevr u update ...2 or 3 am... !!! So the way asr find out truth ,his emotion...amans dialogue about what *** was doing adi in his room...I read the dialogue and was just thinking asr' s conditions... Oh god,aman just said the truth brutally... Next when adi died I was like oh no..why so early?? Well u give him a brutal death..BT still the girl in me wanted more!( wow I'm such a vindictive!) BT next u satisfied me writing asr also wanted him not so easily dieing. As just said what I wanted to hear, so when u giv teaser about aborting baby...I knw there will b also some explaination... So I waited and wow their conversation!!! Now they are back to themselves... Loved it when khusi can feel smthing is amiss..whether asr'r pain or watching the baby... Oh did Isay how much I loved the way arnav handle the murder...I was like " wow!!that's asr" totally loving the story...keep going( how come u update only at night before my xm sister??? Well I love it. Tvk is much btr than reading blabla...study just sucks!)

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