Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

enjoyed part one, nicely set up the story and characters. but yep, interesting twist, now i'm also wondering if it's dhruv that needs rescuing from sheesh mahal or akash 🤓

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

ASR is here... 😳 Dhruv and Aakash.. 😲 Hope Khushi will convince Aakash to call Arnav.. And what problem is Dhruv in now?

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div26

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Seriously, I can no longer wait to know how it is going to go from here. Brilliant idea 😊
Very nice description of the business and Akash and Aman.
Love the fact that you thought of having Dhruv in the story and I love Arnav ❤️

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

quite intriguing start !!! loved it.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Nice start

Plz add me to ur PM list

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Horizon

@Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Crisp, intriguing, racy.. Very interesting Inspired. All the guys downloaded already with Aman and Mohan. Loved that busy business man.. Very vivid, lively.. Eager for the next IS.

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Hello Friends,

Back from a refreshing, relaxing holiday! Came back a day later than planned, so I am one day behind in my writing schedule. I am halfway through writing Part 2. I will definitely post tomorrow - that is, Thursday - by 5 pm U.S central time.

Thank you!

- IS

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

seems that they got him
as in dhruv
his own dadi is doing all this
and for what money
pathetic some people are
seems dhurv is coming outta his drugged state
why else is he looking more alive and reactive to his surrounding
this dadi i tell ya
she is asking for trouble
dont tell me that malliks were trying to pull the wool over raizadas
well they are gonna pay for it
khushi is more astute than these peeps thought
she is good in observing
of course she believed them when they said he had an accident
when nothing could be further than the truth
hope she can help out dhruv
lets see shall we

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Japonica

@Japonica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Wow just read the prologue, this promises to be a terrific read.
Thanks for the poem., it is beautiful.

Looking forward to catching up with the rest of the story.