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Inspired, your "busy in a good way" brought me a good day (?)! Very interesting start, I do admit, like Ipoona, I too was worried a bit, then that phone call request saved me..
That picture on top.. couldn't take eyes off... the intrigue built around ... the poetry and the title everything brilliant... Sheeshmahal is one thing in the story that has as much a character as these two..stumped by it being introduced as the fulcrum.. auguring a great tale..Khushi seemed to be so much Khushi here...that sweet, young independent girlYour story already a super hit.. laage raho.. and bring the man to us pronto!!😊Great start my friend!
Horizon, thank you! 🤗
I know how busy you are nowadays, so your coming here means so much to me! Just promise to keep an eye on my story, and give me feedback!
Sheeshmahal - I always thought it needed more space in the original story - the very foundation of ASR - the place where everything started - I had to make it my starting point and explore it further.
I am glad you like Khushi - but will want to know your reaction when you meet the ASR in my story - yours and Ipoona's reaction to my ASR will be the litmus test for my story! 😛
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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