Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

What a twist...I will truly be amazed if Shyam is turned into a white or even a grey character because so far we have been led to believe he is all black.

How do you come back and defend that you have been keeping a man drugged and giving him state altering drugs at that while keeping him imprisoned?

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Hain? He is lying right? He can't be the good guy! He isn't!

Of course he isn't but he is a good liar, isn't he!

Loved the chapter. Suspense intact - calm on the surface...

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Uttara.D.Jaiswar

@Uttara.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

hey its a wonderful ff.. i really love suspense fictions and arshi are my fav.. i really liked the whole Raizada family especially arnav and anjali.. anjali in ur story is soo good..she is strong and thats the most imp thing.. i really liked khushi..but i was very much shocking Shyam a CBI officer... is the mystery related to that necklace or smthing.. waiting fr the mystery to be revealed.. & can u Plzz PM me when u update next.. updt soon..&tc.!!

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Wow a twist in the tale, Shyam CBI? Is he a good cop or a bad one? I hope he is good but whydo I doubt it? Well plotted , keeping us on the edge!

Ahh Khushi and Arnav hearts are beating...

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#675

So, when can we expect an update?

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#676

OMG 😲

Shyam is an CBI officer??? Shocked to say the least...and i don't think he is lying it would be stupid on his part to blow the one chance that Arnav gave him with a bunch of lies

Looking forward to the next update

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Wow. Fantastis twist. Shyam an undercover cop! Conitue soon

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Hi IS- you are one inspired soul!😃

I loved the way you so neatly in a few strokes turned the tables on all our expectations with such dexterity 👏

You led us up the garden path of assuming Shyam to only have evil motives!! What a twister that was to have Shyam be part of something that seems good- a CBI officer! But why has he been doing all this- is someone inside the family involved in something bad?

Now please give us Shyam's story.

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Now that is a shock... What is happening here... I never thought someday I'll be this impatient to hear Shyam's side of story... But I'm now... Waiting for the next part...