IKK PG147 all is well that ends well - Page 85

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Posted: 18 years ago
amazin part, cont soon... N i jus luv da song u used btw!!!! I was thinking of usin it in ma ff yday, but u stole my song 😡 😡 😡 Loll 😆 im jus jokin, 😆 😆 😆 cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part.... 👏 ...jus wonderful.... 👏 ....bechara angad...i pity him...now wht will he do... 😃 ....continue soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome wasnt hoping u would con soon

erm thanx.....i think

Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
poor angad shaddi and concert on the same day

hehe thanx😛

Originally posted by: Honii

fantastic part rach loved it 👏

thanx a lot😃
thanx

Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz

OMG...GIRL U TOOK THE HEKC OUT OF ME.... 😆 😆 phewww.i was scared since the last night after reading the part.....MINDBLASTING, AWESOME, AMAZING, COMPLTELY MINDBLOWING...waiting for the next part 😊 hmmmm...angad will i think miss his own wedding thts gonna be worthreading.....can u plzz bring SK baq to india then maybe u wil write more of thm... 😊 JOKING....take ur time with the honeymoon...........and a new entry i wonder if its a he a she...and if he/she is nice or bad..... 😕 waiting for the next part eaerlyy 😉




Saraa

heheh ur so funnyyyy haan dont worry SK have 2 come bak 4 the wedding😛
new entry is a he....lekin kaun....i havent decided yet😆thode se ideas hai....erm hmm ill try do da next part tommorow....gunna catch up on nb2 now
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

amazin part, cont soon... N i jus luv da song u used btw!!!! I was thinking of usin it in ma ff yday, but u stole my song 😡 😡 😡 Loll 😆 im jus jokin, 😆 😆 😆 cont soon... 😊

hahah go ahead use it neways....lol.....haha thanx😃

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

grt part
i have a feeling angad is gonna let kripa down

thanx...hmmmmm u may b right...may be not😛

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

gr8 part.... 👏 ...jus wonderful.... 👏 ....bechara angad...i pity him...now wht will he do... 😃 ....continue soon.... 😊

thanx a lot.....hehe ab angad kuch na kuch tho karoo ga....lol😆

Originally posted by: del_geo

nice part 👏 continue soon

thanx😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
luved the part it was awsome and the song was mindblowing and my bechara angad pata nahin kya hoga uska ek taraf shaadi aur dusri araf concert ye tumne kya kiya rachi u put my angad in such a halat 😆 jk anyways it was gr8 cont soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
rach yaar the part was simply awesome... very damn amazing....me liked it very much... it's good that angad is moving on with his life... he has finalized his work with sumeet..that's very nice...& dusari taraf uski aur kripa ki shaddi ki baat bhi chalne lagi hain...this is all too goodd.... ab dusare taraf humare honeymoon couple sujal , kashish.. see jaise maine kaha tha kashish kho gayi aur phir mil gayi sujal ko.. the way sujal hugs her after he finds her or rather sees her that hug showed soooo muchhhh of lovee , concern... that was very damn cute , sweet... i loved it totally..bohat hi mast , zabardast scene tha....your story is just going very damn intresting..😳 par ab what is this angad either going to let down sumeet or going to let down kripa... hmm..well i think angad will let down kripa by not reaching to the marriage hall...& may be iski wajah se angad , kripa ki shaddi nahi hogi.. & may be sujal , kashish bhi durr ho jayenge is wajah se kii sujal might support angad while kashish might support kripa.. this is just a wild guess.. ab tum batao rach dear aage kya hoga.. do you think my guess is right ???? 😉
ab please continue soon..me waiting for the next part me waiting for it eagerly.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
when sujal told kripa not to move.....iy was obvious that she would.....as it always happens like that 😉

but when i read this :

Sujal gave her the food and watched her eat, he smiled but then thought to himself, if he was this worried when she was only away from him for a few hours, what would happen if they got seperated for longer, Sujal dismissed the thought and ate with Kashish........meanwhile in India


it sounds like there'll be a track where they will have to......separate........I don't know maybe it was just a silly thought or maybe a hint to a new track of you fanfic....

well if Angad wants Kripa to hate him for his friendship's sake......I bet he won't go to his own wedding......................coz that's almost the only way that she'll hate him since both the famillies and kripa will be a lil' embarassed coz of Angad not turning up for the wedding......I just hope everything's going to go fine......hope SAHIL dies..........I felt sorry for Kunal dying coz 1st of all he had changed...2nd...he was Angad's brother......but this Sahil.......he wants angad's girl which.....is just so not kind of him!!!



I hope to read the next part soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
wats happened to the pages! omg im gunna have 2 take ages updating the first page........neways thanx 4 ur comments guys, ill try have the next part updated later on after uni 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

when sujal told kripa not to move.....iy was obvious that she would.....as it always happens like that 😉

but when i read this :

Sujal gave her the food and watched her eat, he smiled but then thought to himself, if he was this worried when she was only away from him for a few hours, what would happen if they got seperated for longer, Sujal dismissed the thought and ate with Kashish........meanwhile in India


it sounds like there'll be a track where they will have to......separate........I don't know maybe it was just a silly thought or maybe a hint to a new track of you fanfic....

well if Angad wants Kripa to hate him for his friendship's sake......I bet he won't go to his own wedding......................coz that's almost the only way that she'll hate him since both the famillies and kripa will be a lil' embarassed coz of Angad not turning up for the wedding......I just hope everything's going to go fine......hope SAHIL dies..........I felt sorry for Kunal dying coz 1st of all he had changed...2nd...he was Angad's brother......but this Sahil.......he wants angad's girl which.....is just so not kind of him!!!



I hope to read the next part soon....

lol hunnni ur gettin the 2 fanficz mixed up.....sahil isnt in this hes in lfe😆😆 but i get what ur sayin

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Posted: 18 years ago
Previously
S - then we will work around it, vaise zyada show Rahul ke liye hai, tum kab bhi perform kar sakte ho, ya tum shaadi se pehle perform karo ya shaadi ke baat....thats up to you, tum bas vahan paunch jao
Angad left the building, he had a bad feeling he was going to let either Sumit down or Kripa.....how did he know....he was right
Part 44
Over the next few days, Angad kept thinking of ways to either delay the wedding or the concert, he was unsuccessful in both.
The wedding day came, Sujal and Kashish had returned from their honeymoon.
Angad was sitting in the dressing room awaiting his turn to perform, his phone rang
Suj - arre kahan hai tu Angad, pata hai yahan kitna kaam hai jaldi aaja
A - i will...tu bas samal le
Angad hung up and got lost in his thoughts, the door opened
S - Angad, tum tayar nahin hue? you're next
A - lekin Sumit.....mujhe teek nahin lag raha
S - kyun?
A - i might miss my wedding
S - don't worry
Angad started to get changed.
In the Sharma house...everything was decorated beautifully
Kashish and Suhana were helping Kripa with her jewellery, there were 3 hours left for the wedding
Ka - wow Kripa, you are so beautiful
Kr - thanks
S - ab tho sirf meri baari hai
They laughed, at Angad's house....
N - Angad kahan hai!!! Prithvi!!!
P - yes mom?
N - Angad ka pata laga
P - ok mom
Prithvi phoned Angad, who was about to get on stage
P - dude kahan hai tu? baraat nikalne vaali hai
A - ek kaam kar....tum sab vahan chale jao, i'll be there
P - you sure?
A - definately
Angad hung up, he breathed deeply and awaited his name being called.
10 minutes later the announcement came for him, he went out on stage and began singing Har Manzar, the crowd roared
har manzar har lamha
yeh pagal dil tanha
har manzar har lamha
yeh pagal dil tanha
betaab retha hai
yeh kehta hai haan kehta hai
mehfil mein akele mein
mehfil mein akele mein
tujhe yaad karta hai haan karta hai haan karta hai
har manzar har lamha........
The crowd roared, Angad sang more....meanwhile everyone had reached the Sharma household
Aditya - Angad kahan hai?
N - aata hoga, fikar mat ki jiye...Sujal
Suj - yes aunty?
N - usse phone kar
Suj - ok
Sujal phones Angad but he doesn't answer because he is performing.
Prithvi went to see Kripa, he saw her and hugged her
P - looking gorgeous
K - thanks Prithvi....Angad aah gaya?
P - aata hoga....don't worry...voh apni shaadi tho nahin miss karega
The clock struck 12:30, there was only one and a half hours left but no sign of Angad.
Everyone was tensed
P - mom voh aata hoga.....Angad aaja ab
Suj - Prithvi i think we should go to the concert
N - nahin, voh aah jayega
The pundit requested for the bride and groom to sit down, Kashish bought Kripa
Pundit - dulha kahan hai?
N - voh aata hoga pundit ji
Pundit - teek hai
Kripa sat in the mandap waiting, she looked at the clock strike 1, a tear fell down her eye.....the song Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi played in the background
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kahena
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kahena
(shows Angad getting out of the concert)
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
(shows Angad signing some autographs)
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
(shows everyone waiting for Angad, guests getting restless, Angad getting in his car)
tujhe har khushi de di
labhon ki hasee de di
zulfon ki gataa le rahi
paighaam wafaa ke laayi
tune achi preet nibaayi
tune achi preet nibaayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
(Angad stuck in traffic, shows 1:20 on the clock)
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
(Angad trying to get through taffic, some guests leaving, Sujal and Prithvi trying to stop them )
voh chaand mere ghar aangaan ab tho aayega
tere sunhe is aachal ko voh bar jaayega
teri kar di gaud barai
kisi se ab kya kehna
teri kardi gaud barai
kisi se ab kya kehna
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
(Kripa crying more, clock shows 1:50)
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
(Angad pulls in to the driveway, rushes inside to find everyone has left, everyone disappointed, Kripa crying, Angad feels guilty)
katha hogayi mujhse
kaha kuch nahin tumse
iqraar jo tum kar paate
tho door kabhi na jaate
koi samje na peer parayi
koi samje na peer parayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
(Aditya comes forward and slaps Angad)
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
dil royaa ke akh bar aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
tujhe yaad na meri aayi
kisi se ab kya kehna
Kripa stands up and faces Angad, before he can speak she slaps him and runs to her room
A - Kripa suno...
Ad - just get out!
Suj - chal Angad
A - lekin Kripa.....
P - usse baad manale...
Naina walked out, Sujal and Prithvi took Angad outside, Kashish and Suhana followed.
Kripa was crying bitterly, she hated him for missing their wedding
K - voh aisa kaise kar sakte hai....humhari shaadi mein nahin aaya...i hate him!
Angad sat on his bed with his head in his hands regretting doing the concert.....the next few days Kripa avoided him...Prithvi was in his office with his dad
R - Prithvi....contract ke liye koi madat chahiye?
P - no dad im fine
R - thats good...mujhe ab bhi nahin yakeen ho raha ke humhare haath se itna bada project chale gaya
P (thinks) - ab tho aise bohat hai dad......kyunki Prithvi ko rokne vala is duniye mein nahin hai
The airport is shown....a guy's back is shown, then his shoes, his eyes and his lips. but not his face, he steps out of the airport and gets into a car
To be continued
seriously dont kill me for not getting AK married..it will happen soon
coming up - new characters intro....Sujal joins office and meets Swayam

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