Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28) - Page 54

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update
Tereso treasure
Mi amore my love
Arnav loves khushi but afraid to express his love so


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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing and wonderful chapter:))!!! Can't wait for next update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update... Loved the communication and reunion part... Greatly written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update..yup communication is the best foundation in any relationship..And I love khushi and her persistence to slowly bring arnav out of his shell...she makes him prompt to communicate with her...Her cute queries and his quick answers were highlight of the update..I like it the way their relationship is progressing..You've penned it beautifully..worth the wait update,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh..how well they talking like matures..
i like khushis attempts and the fact that arnav understands it too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...
its such a sweeet update dear...
really, just like the 4 months of separation never happened...
enjoyed reading every bit of it...
congrtttsss for the OS contest...
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thnxxx a lot 4 mail...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last two words definitely mean "My Love"...

And I have slight inkling about the other word... But I'll go check nonetheless...

Baaki ka comment after I am fully awake...

Finally... It was a very long wait! I haven't been more impatient for an update before! Honestly!

It was wonderful to see a caring Arnav... The whole scene was sooo cute!

It's relief to see Arnav's brain and heart coming to sync! Finally he accepts he loves her! What can I say? HALLELUJAH!!!

To answer his question... Of course it counts! All of what you want to do now counts!

You know coincidentally before reading the update I was thinking of their first morning after marriage too... Since this was a new start... It kinda transported me back...

Khushi is such a simple soul really... With her its "you get what you see" even now... I would've thought that with everything that had happened there be a little cynism and scepticism in her... She has come a long way and managed to retain her essence...

And she has grown more perceptive! Brooding shyness??!! Aww... I'm melting...

Oh its so good to see Arnav planning for them... He's sure going to put this second chance to good use...

I would've been disappointed and shocked if Arnav wouldn't have been abreast with Khushi's progress... And again Khushi looks surprised... Still a long way to go...

This communication thing is working very well for them! I'm loving it... Though its a little unsettling... If you get what I mean... They've never poured their hearts out to each other... And though I wanted this... It's just weird... Don't get me wrong... I'm loving it!

Arnav must me over the moon! Khushi wants exactly what he wants! To sleep in his arms!

The way Arnav explained why he left... To be honest I had first taken the act as something the character of Arnav would have done... His perspective was clear to me and that did not seemed flawed at all... Because what else can you epect from a flawed character... But I hadn't thought he could actually convince me that the act really had a strong rationale behind... When he says it like that you understand that the act stems out from his concern and not wholly through guilt...
What I mean to say is... A lot of people write about stuff like this... And one just laps it up because the story "needs" it but without truly justifying why the character did t... Or sometimes those justifications are a reflection of how the writer's mind works... What he sees as right and wrong... But you A have the ability to see things from others POV... You can separate yourself from another, see their perspective and also justify them... And you have a way of doing it in a very simplistic manner though the elaborate web of events, emotions and circumstances that you have created are anything but simple... I therefore would like to congratulate you for a job well done...

Khushi you have such a high opinion about him! I wish he could see it too someday...

Overall in the update some bridges have been crossed... But in lots of places ArHi are thinking on two parellel tangents...

So all I want is...
1) that they really get to that stage where they are on the same wavelength...

2) they become sure of their place in the other's life...

3) though Khushi should remain the same in essence but some change in her too... Like exactly what she learnt... How she grew... How she changed... Obviously Arnav mein we can see abhi se...

4) I wanna know what the nightmares are!

5) and yeah no full on sappiness... They are married... And moreover they are ArHi... How can they not have arguments? Any two people who live together have them... They aren't bad or ugly... Just natural...

PS: Let me love you by Ne-Yo
Give your heart a break by demi lovato
are both songs that suit this story from Khushi's pov... Take a listen...
Edited by Paridhi7250 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
E 'stato bellissimo tesoro.
Vorrei aspettare il giorno in cui Khushi scopre il significato di Mi Amore.
(courtesy Google translator 😆 )
Edited by Moumita_2014 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww..that was such a cute update..loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Cute ! Khushi will pull him out from his shell for sure !

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