Dear Anonyji
Absolutely love this story no doubt. My favourite on this forum.
I remember a few months back when you were about to upload chapter 30, I had asked if its the last one as it was for MKMI and you clarified that probably the story would stretch till 45-48 chapters. Strange we are at that stage now and I feel so sad and empty that their will very soon no longer be that thrill that anticipation that we expsrie ce wben waiting for a fresh chapter or that excite.ent to read a freshly uploaded one. This awesome journey is coming to an end like all good things do.
About tying up loose ends, you have already started that by intrkducing khushi to arna s hitherto secret passion for photograghi g her. These pics are a small but significant glimpse into how far back arnavs admiring of her loveliness started. I would love for khushi to get a chance to wear that stunning blue gown she got from dubai and leVe arnav stunned. It would be nice if she discovers that arnav had kussed her passionately i dubai and all those rations on her skin a d lips werenot due to an allergic reaction to the wine.
But after so much pain and misunderstanding verbal or physical disply of love is awkward and uncomfortBle even painful.
I would love to learn more about why other favourite character karan was so silent and u suspecting about what was goi g on. I would love to see more of his banter with khushi a d esp a friendly brotherly love between him and arnav.
Ok off now will wrie more when i think of something later.
Sorry for tbe typos.
Edited...
Frankly my dear, I do feel that this maha confrontation was perbaps just a little tame and surprisingly short, for a man with Arnavs acid tounge and deep rooted suspicions/ beleifs about Khushi. Perhaps in that case it would not have been so possible for Khushi to surmount tbis mountain within say half an hour. Isnt this how hard real life is.
You wrote in the prologue that very rarely does life give anyone a second chance. Well we see Khushi give Ar av a second chance at their love and marriage practically on a silver platter. You promised that Arnav is going to grab this opportunitywith both hands, go to any length to redeem himself and emerge a stronger better man and husband. Again thats very rare in real life for egotiztical men. However with Khushis wary nature towards his secretive heart, and his guilt for pushing her might convince a hard man like Arnav that its the only way to retain his sanity purge his guilt seek his wifes forgiveness ie to his satisfaction, and reposses and reestablish the love they shared so breifly. I am looking forward to reading how you are going to make Arnavs redemption sweet and mindblowingly romantic. After making such a mega mess how does he plan to bounce back.
Edited by siamesecat - 11 years ago
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