Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28) - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

984

Views

152.3k

Users

527

Likes

3.8k

Frequent Posters

MOnamy11 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update :-) loved the way Khushi clears all the MUs between them ! Can't wait to read their life in NY;-) My wishlist is Arshis babies and Arnavs reaction towards Khushis motherly love towards their child as Arnav did never get such pure love and affection !
shruti46 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
so obviously i m happy with the chapter..
see this was only required CONVERSATION .
he asked,she answered
she asked , he answered
she shouted , he pacified her
he shouted , she calmed him
he misunderstood, she clarified.

this was only required..
surely was arnav was living in guilt but i dont know why he believed divorce was the only solution?
yes mela pictures made thier entry,
jo baat vo nai keh sakta those pics will tell her..

yo dubai , its amazing , there so much things related wiith dubai...
gown, first kiss, punching of shyam the creep and due to them only she could she the pictures.
now full to ROMANCE😆
oopppsss thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Anonny...I love MKM2 family too..and will miss everyone.Till then I am going to enjoy,relish and hold on to every word you write for MKM2.Though we are a part of this journey together,this story belongs to you so whatever you write further in the story is most most welcomed.Even after you finish MKM2 we will have more awesome ffs from you and each day this bond will get stronger...atleast I will never stop stalking IF for your stories.PS as always waiting impatiently for next update.
Bhartic71 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Hi anamika, thankyou so much. It was a wonderful update. I m so happy/ finally releaved.cant wait to read the next update!! Thanks heaps!!
Bhartic71 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Also I think it's high time, that blue gown should be used ;)
akurmapu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
nice update. Arnav and Kushi was conversation and feelings well written😊
shree10 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
I am still overwhlemed by last chapter to make any proper comment after going through so much angst earlier!

But I am enjoying the happy feeling last update brought!

Abt wishlist-
We need atleast 5 more chaps. No hurry please.

While I dont demand mushy romance bet Arshi but some good moments between them would be cherishable! We have seen too much angst, distrust from Arnav and many lows. Dont you deserve some good romance (Arnav style hi sahi ) Doesnt Khushi need to be loved by him as she deserves?

As a reader the whole journey is worthwhile when we get these happy moments too. Please please dont deny that! And yes we want these moments like chapter 39 (Which was scarred by laterones) sans any disturbance esp Rishabh!! 😡
shruti46 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -BarunSanz-

@shruti46 I LOVE ur letter XD

thankyou.
glad u liked it
gopikaaji thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
thank u for ur update...it was a beautiful as poem ...
a needed conservation between couple...to clear the mess..
i must say something new generation must think ..and practice..it will bring the many divorce..less in number..
wen he wished to hug her ..i too wished to hug him...
wen he said yes ...to her...my heart goes for him ..thinking how badly he needs her...
photos in his room speaks for him surly ...now she could get him that he pampered her in his heart...
now they both deserve some sweet moments ...for we r waiting ...that helps him to open up to her ...say ILU...to her...

can't wait for next update ...

siamesecat thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Anonyji
Absolutely love this story no doubt. My favourite on this forum.
I remember a few months back when you were about to upload chapter 30, I had asked if its the last one as it was for MKMI and you clarified that probably the story would stretch till 45-48 chapters. Strange we are at that stage now and I feel so sad and empty that their will very soon no longer be that thrill that anticipation that we expsrie ce wben waiting for a fresh chapter or that excite.ent to read a freshly uploaded one. This awesome journey is coming to an end like all good things do.
About tying up loose ends, you have already started that by intrkducing khushi to arna s hitherto secret passion for photograghi g her. These pics are a small but significant glimpse into how far back arnavs admiring of her loveliness started. I would love for khushi to get a chance to wear that stunning blue gown she got from dubai and leVe arnav stunned. It would be nice if she discovers that arnav had kussed her passionately i dubai and all those rations on her skin a d lips werenot due to an allergic reaction to the wine.
But after so much pain and misunderstanding verbal or physical disply of love is awkward and uncomfortBle even painful.
I would love to learn more about why other favourite character karan was so silent and u suspecting about what was goi g on. I would love to see more of his banter with khushi a d esp a friendly brotherly love between him and arnav.
Ok off now will wrie more when i think of something later.
Sorry for tbe typos.

Edited...
Frankly my dear, I do feel that this maha confrontation was perbaps just a little tame and surprisingly short, for a man with Arnavs acid tounge and deep rooted suspicions/ beleifs about Khushi. Perhaps in that case it would not have been so possible for Khushi to surmount tbis mountain within say half an hour. Isnt this how hard real life is.


You wrote in the prologue that very rarely does life give anyone a second chance. Well we see Khushi give Ar av a second chance at their love and marriage practically on a silver platter. You promised that Arnav is going to grab this opportunitywith both hands, go to any length to redeem himself and emerge a stronger better man and husband. Again thats very rare in real life for egotiztical men. However with Khushis wary nature towards his secretive heart, and his guilt for pushing her might convince a hard man like Arnav that its the only way to retain his sanity purge his guilt seek his wifes forgiveness ie to his satisfaction, and reposses and reestablish the love they shared so breifly. I am looking forward to reading how you are going to make Arnavs redemption sweet and mindblowingly romantic. After making such a mega mess how does he plan to bounce back.
Edited by siamesecat - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: themasked · 2 months ago

Hi,I recently started watching Kasauti Zindagi Kay 2 and fell in love with it and got introduced to so many characters.I started playing around...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: So-So · 6 months ago

One of my entries for Love-O-Rama Pyaar Ka Trope Fest Storyline: Enemies to Lovers Setting: Crime Character/Pairing: Arnav Khushi from IPPKND...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli · 5 years ago

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".