Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28) - Page 20

Originally posted by: psarada

So finally I am here on Thread 28 to give my comments on the last chapter. I am not wrong in saying that last chapter was the single most favorite chapter of mine and most of MKM-II readers. This was the chapter I was eagerly awaiting to read - to find out how the conversation between Arnav and Khushi will take place and you didn't disappoint me at all. Loved the chapter and it was absolute spot on in the way I expected both Arnav and Khushi to react.

A heart to heart conversation really helps and now both Arnav and Khushi have cleared off their doubts and looking forward to the life together. This is the second chance for both of them and they are going to make most of it. I read the note on page 17 and you said you are going to close off this story in minimum 2 chapters. Please don't hurry up the end. I would love to read the way both move forward in their life and yes I would love to see Arnav giving confidence to Khushi to do something in her life. She is doing good at NGO but Arnav can probably start a trust on his own and make Khushi the chairperson so that she can do something on her own and this would give her life a whole new meaning.

Also I would love to see a small part where Khushi would get nervous of getting pregnant for the fear of their child getting her problem(limp) and Arnav putting her doubts to rest and they having a healthy child. Please do close off this loop because even though Arnav said that he didn't care for Khushi's limp, Khushi as a person would be very nervous when she would be expecting constantly fearing her child may get the same problem. Arnav supporting Khushi in this phase would be really good and Khushi can finally get over her insecurity regarding her limp. And yes a honest communication between Arnav and Khushi regarding his feelings about Khushi before and after would be really good. Like Arnav initially thought that Khushi was brought in by Sumer to replace him but now she has become his lifeline.

Looking forward to the next update. I would really really miss this story as I really enjoyed the growth of the characters Arnav and Khushi in this story. I would be coming back to re-read this one whenever I can steal some time. Thanks a lot for penning this one. I do hope you will write something or other on IF as I would really miss reading your stories.