Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28) - Page 17

cant wait to read more

Loved the Chapter...

For the previous Chapter I had made two comments,

1st comment...partial

"Many emotions...I am going to stick with my first gut feeling...Arnav is the only one in this disaster that is true to himself...no excuses...no cover up...owned up to his mistake. Pushing her was totally wrong, totally not acceptable, but then so was her holding his arm when he said get lost. His reason for leaving...I don't believe he ran away...

"If you love someone, set them free. If they come back they're yours; if they don't they never were." Will wait for his POV."

2nd comment...

"The bottom line...

- This story is still Making Khushi Mine.

- Arnav is still in control...with all his guilt he cannot let her go.

- He apologized, she didn't listen to him, he didn't listen to her, she said leave and he left for NY.

- Three month silence between them, he has started the process by which she will be forced to talk, if not him then at least his dad.

- He sent a divorce draft.

- He told his father that Khushi wants the divorce.

- The "Deal" has begun.

- He is confident that the "deal" will go in his favor...knows his wife and family, but I think he will drive it in such a way that Khushi will be leading the "deal". She will be making some sound decisions on her behalf which he will have no problem with...mostly...he is master dealer...she is not.

- He will make atonement for his guilt and much more.

Once Khushi said she did not want the Divorce Arnav was in his element!!

To sum it up...

- He left her and moved to NY.

- He waited silently...her silence in return started the "Merger/Dissolution"

- Proposal initiated - Divorce Draft

- Response came as a "surprise" at his door - Khushi

- Initial talks led to a "Yes" for the "Merger" - Khushi does not want the Divorce and he wants her in his life.

- Further deliberation prodded by Arnav but aggressively led by Khushi

- Agreement in favor for the "Merger" - Same bedroom

- Khushi sees a collage of her photos - Her skepticism about his "Yes" disappeared.

- And...ahh yes Khushi, he knows the photos are there...he sent you to the bedroom alone...they are an "I Love you and have loved you" from him!!

Hope the story has at least 5 more chapters...love it...nicely laid out story!!

Secondly, I must say I am happy that the story is close to end. Because I have my college starting next month and I wouldn't have much time to actually read and re-read the chapters like I usually do.

Thirdly, you are AWESOME👍🏼!! And of course, we don't expect anything cheesy or rosy😆. We love your writing❤️. And every new chapter is beyond our expectation⭐️. So don't worry about it.

Take care and We all LOVE you sooo much!!! 🤗

And I hope you will continue with your writing and gift us many more beautiful ArShi stories in the future😳.

Update soon.

P.S I am sorry I know this became a like an last comment 🤔. I mean it's like a farewell post 😆.

I certainly don't know why did I write this all now😕. I am just being silly 🤪.

Lovely pix, loved it!

An epilogue too, thx you Dear! This is so exciting!

A heart to heart conversation really helps and now both Arnav and Khushi have cleared off their doubts and looking forward to the life together. This is the second chance for both of them and they are going to make most of it. I read the note on page 17 and you said you are going to close off this story in minimum 2 chapters. Please don't hurry up the end. I would love to read the way both move forward in their life and yes I would love to see Arnav giving confidence to Khushi to do something in her life. She is doing good at NGO but Arnav can probably start a trust on his own and make Khushi the chairperson so that she can do something on her own and this would give her life a whole new meaning.

Also I would love to see a small part where Khushi would get nervous of getting pregnant for the fear of their child getting her problem(limp) and Arnav putting her doubts to rest and they having a healthy child. Please do close off this loop because even though Arnav said that he didn't care for Khushi's limp, Khushi as a person would be very nervous when she would be expecting constantly fearing her child may get the same problem. Arnav supporting Khushi in this phase would be really good and Khushi can finally get over her insecurity regarding her limp. And yes a honest communication between Arnav and Khushi regarding his feelings about Khushi before and after would be really good. Like Arnav initially thought that Khushi was brought in by Sumer to replace him but now she has become his lifeline.

Looking forward to the next update. I would really really miss this story as I really enjoyed the growth of the characters Arnav and Khushi in this story. I would be coming back to re-read this one whenever I can steal some time. Thanks a lot for penning this one. I do hope you will write something or other on IF as I would really miss reading your stories.