'Tumhari CHANDNI' A Dark FF (RTMC_KSG_Rati) - Page 2

Originally posted by: sammuratfanno1

Another rtmc ff 🥳

Amazing start! ab hamein bhi iss haveli ke raaz janne h! really looking forward to it arpi 😃

Thanks Sam, Haveli Cant Speak But Hopefully It Will Find Someone Who Can Read Its Silence,

Originally posted by: ashne

Lovely start, Arpi. Congrats😊

Thank You Di,

nice introduction...it really interesting to read next..update soon.. 😊 😳

~ Tumhari CHANDNI ~

Part > 1

24th September 2012,

SANSKAR BHAVAN :

In The Palace Sanskar Bhavan It Was Not Any Usual Day, It Was Very Unusual...Something Different, Unlike Any Others Normal Day All The Royal Members Of The Palace Were Not Busy With Their Own Stuffs, For A Change All Of Them Were Working Together, All Were Busy With Some Special Preparation,

Well The Sanskar Bhavan Was Famous In The Whole Rajashthan For Its Amazing Look In Every Funtion With Flowers, Lights, Lots Of Traditional Decorations n All BUT That Day It Was Looking Extra_Ordinary Beautiful, Just Like A Newly Wed Bride Waiting For Her Man In Their Very 1st Night.

Even The Atmospheare Of Ajmer Was Also Very Weird, Peoples Were Continueusly Taking Only One Name Inbetween Their Regular Works...

"KUNWAR PRITHVI"

In The Sanskar Bhavan, A Dark Skined Not So Beautiful Yet Innocent Looking Young Girl Wearing A Black Salwar Suit With Dupatta Covered Her Head Was About To Enter In The Hall From Kitchen When A Rude Female Voice Came From Her Behind...

"Yeh Ladki, Kar Kya Rahi Hai Tu Inha?"

Nikhila Stoped. Fears Covered Her Innocent Face, With A Shaking Body She Turned To Face Mrs. Renuka Bhardawaaj

With A Shaking Yet Beautiful Voice Nikhila Tried To Answer > Mmm... MahaRani Maa, Woh Hum... Woh...

Renuka Shouted > Woh Woh Kya?

Nikhila Answered Asap > Woh Aaj Humara Bhai Prithvi Aaraha Hai, Tho Humne Kheer Banaya Hai Unke Liye, Aaj Pehli Baar Hum Milenge Apne Bhai Se...

Bhai Nehi, SAUTELA Bhai... Renuka's Statement Stoped Her.

Nikhila Looked At Renuka In Disbelief, n Asked > Sautele Bhai Kya Bhai Nehi Hote MahaRani Maa?

Renuka Had No Answer, All She Could Utter Was > College Jao!

Which Made Nikhila Shocked,

Renuka Continued > Main Nehi Chahti Prithvi aur Mera Beta Neel Tumhari Kali Surat Tak Bhi Dekhe,

With This Renuka Made Her Way Towards The Hall Leaving Behind A Sad Broken Nikhila, A Tear Droped From The Eyes Of The Daughter n So Called Princess Of Sanskar Bhavan!

...

In The Entrance Of Rajashthan A Car Was Running In The Full Speed Towards Sanskar Bhavan With Two Handsome Young Guys n A Modern Young Girl In It.

Precap > What Was Waiting For Prithvi Neel n Lavina In The Famous Sanskar Bhavan?


(Nikhila > Archana Taide, Renuka > Alka Kausal
Prithvi > Rajat Tokas
Neel > Mehul Vyas
Lavina > Lavina Tandon)

ok so the sanskar bhavan itself telling it's story...well the start is good, little hatke from other's...

n the part 1 is good, ufff this renuka is too much, poor nikhila,
ok don't feel bad but nikhila n renuka actually reminded me of ajabdeh n her father, poor me :-p
but whatever i just wish that she could meet her brother's at the very moment of their arrival, before renuka
update soon
luv u :-)

wow its different story...and liked it ..waiting for arrival of hero...thanks for pm...update soon 😳

Originally posted by: ridzzi

ok so the sanskar bhavan itself telling it's story...well the start is good, little hatke from other's...

n the part 1 is good, ufff this renuka is too much, poor nikhila,
ok don't feel bad but nikhila n renuka actually reminded me of ajabdeh n her father, poor me :-p
but whatever i just wish that she could meet her brother's at the very moment of their arrival, before renuka
update soon
luv u :-)

Thank You Di, Nikhila Is A Mixture Of Ajabdeh n Phool, Her Character Has A Lots Of Layers In It, n There Is A Big Difference Between Ajabdeh_Her Father n Nikhila_Renuka That Is Nikhila Has No Blood Relation With Renuka!

Originally posted by: Renu111

wow its different story...and liked it ..waiting for arrival of hero...thanks for pm...update soon 😳

Thank You Renu, I Am Glad You Liked It. 😳

Such an interesting story arpi 👍🏼

Renuka ki bacchi 🤬
'Nikhila' I loved this name! 'sautele bhai kya bhai nahi hote' 👏 loved this dialogue!

Toh hamare hero ki entry hone waali h aur heroine woh kab aayegi

update soon aur please hum saath saath h ka bhi update dedo 😳

Originally posted by: sammuratfanno1

Such an interesting story arpi 👍🏼

Renuka ki bacchi 🤬
'Nikhila' I loved this name! 'sautele bhai kya bhai nahi hote' 👏 loved this dialogue!

Toh hamare hero ki entry hone waali h aur heroine woh kab aayegi

update soon aur please hum saath saath h ka bhi update dedo 😳

Thank You Sam,

Well I Cant Run Two FFs At The Same Time So I Will Include The Story Of HSSH In This FF Only,

Both The Heroines Will Make Their Grand Entry In The Right Time, Tab Tak Enjoy The Heros!