'Tumhari CHANDNI' A Dark FF (RTMC_KSG_Rati) - Page 4

Originally posted by: darshika121

awesome start arpi..

i loved the fact that sanskar bhawan itself telling the story...

kind of monologue

1st part was also gud..

ud asap...waiting😉

Thank You.

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">Hi Arpi...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">This was a very nice part...!!! Sanskar Bhavan was decked up like a bride... Your description was beautiful...very beautiful..!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">Ahhh... so Kunwar Prithvi is coming... our hero...!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">And Nikhila... Nice name... I loved it. She loves her brother so much. But Rani Ma doesn't want her to meet either Prithvi or Neel... SO sad. Poor girl...!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">I don't understand... Rani Maa said she didn't want Nikhila to meer either Kunwar Prithvi or her son Neel. So is Prithvi not her son>??? And Nikhila is Prithvi's step sister...???</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">Update soon... I cannot wait for the next part...!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">Luv</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#000099">Flavia</font>

You Understood It Very Well, Prithvi or Nikhila Has No Blood Relation With Renuka, Renuka Is Neel's Mother, n Nikhila Is Prithvi's Half-Sister, His Fathers n Step Mom's Daughter. Thank You.

"Tumhari CHANDNI"

Part > 2

PRITHVI Looked At The Outside Of The Car Window... AJMER, His Hometown, His Birth Place, Where His Parents Got Married, From His Childwhood He Heared Alot About Ajmer, Saw Its Pics On Internet, But He Never Steped His Foot Into Ajmer Before, Neel Visited Ajmer Before Also With Renuka Aunty Opps! With MahaRani Maa But He Never!

For Some Unknown Reason, Prithvi's Family Choose To Keep Him Far Far Away From Not Only Ajmer But From His Own Family Members Also, He Always Wanted To Meet His Parents, His Siblings, His Grand Mother, His Step Mom Nivriti, Rana Ji But It Was Always Only Maharani Maa Who Used To Come To Meet Him n Neel At Usha Aunty's Place In MUMBAI.

He n Neel Did Not Even Dare To Ask MahaRani Maa Anything About Their Family All Thanks To Her "Gabbar Nature" n Big Big Eyes With Lots Of Kajal In It, But They Asked Usha Aunty n In Return They Always Used To Get Only One Answer,

"You Guys Belongs From A Very Very Royal Family, Ranjan Bhaisa Must Be Very Busy, n Except MahaRani Sa Other Womens Of Sanskar Bhavaan Dont Have Enough Freedom To Travel Along But Dont Worry You Will Meet Them Soon When You Will Go To Ajmer"

"Finaly That Day Has Come When I Will Meet My Family For The Very 1st Time" Prithvi Thought n A Small Smile Covered His Face As He Realized The Speed Of The Car As Well As The Excitement In His Best Friend Neel Who Was Driving The Car Forgeting The Difference Between A Car n A Plain,

Prithvi Turned His Face To Look At The Backseat, n There He Found His Friend Lavina Busy With Her Expensive Phone Which Usha Aunty Gifted Her On Her Recent Birthday,

"Lavina Is In Love With Social Networking Sites Unlike Her Mother Usha Aunty Who Inspite Of Being A Modern Educated Women Hates The Existence Of Internet" Prithvi Thought,

Suddenly Prithvi Felt The Car Hitted At Something n Neel Stoped The Car With Such A Force That Lavina's Phone Ended Up Into Two Pieces,

Shocked Lavina Shouted > Neeel... You Idiot!

Prithvi Was Shocked Too, He Asked > Arre Kya Kiya?

An Equally Shocked Neel Made A Puppy Face n Answered > Thok Dia!

Then All 3 Of Them Found A Loud Voice Of A Male Voice, They Came Out Of The Car, n Both The Boys Run To Help That Panipuri Wala n His Unrecognizable Panipuri Stall, Leaving Behind Lavina Who Was Still Looking At Her Broken Phone n Geting Mentaly Prepared To Eat Neel Alive,

Prithvi Helped The Man To Stand Up, Neel Looked Shockingly At The Result Of His Driving As The Stall Was In A Very Bad Condition,

Neel > I Am Realy Sorry Uncle, Galati Ho Gai, Kitne Paise The Ish Stall K? Main De Deta Hnu.

The Old Man Looked At Neel, He Had Tears In His Eyes, Which Did Not Go Unnotice By Prithvi, But Neel Was Too Immature To Notice That,

Prithvi Was About To Stop Him When Both Of Them Heared A Young Female Voice,

"Aap Khud Hi Bataie, Kisi Gareeb K Sapne aur Mehnat Ki Kya Keemat Ho Sakti Hai Bhaisa?"

Prithvi n Neel Turned To Face An Unknown Young Girl, Who Was Not Beautiful By Look But Had Her Own Beauty,

Prithvi Felt An Unknown Pul Towards Nikhila His Half_Sister Whoom He Never Met Before!

Precap > Renuka Taunted Nivriti as Even Being A Sauteli Maa, Nivriti Was Excited To Meet Her Daughter's Half_Brother n Her Husbands Younger Son, Prithviraj Malhotra!

it is a bit confusing. nikila's step brother is prithvi. his step mom is nikila's mother.but he is not the son of Maharani Renuka, who is the mother of neel and step mother of nikila. so prithvi is the maharaj's first wife's son, neel is Renuka's son and nikila is nivriti's daughter who is a sauteli ma for prithvi. this means there are 2 options. one is that Renuka, Nivriti and prithvi's mother are the wives of the Maharaj. the second is that Prithvi and nikila share same father and neel is their cousin. i am confusing u too. but please clear it for me. waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish

it is a bit confusing. nikila's step brother is prithvi. his step mom is nikila's mother.but he is not the son of Maharani Renuka, who is the mother of neel and step mother of nikila. so prithvi is the maharaj's first wife's son, neel is Renuka's son and nikila is nivriti's daughter who is a sauteli ma for prithvi. this means there are 2 options. one is that Renuka, Nivriti and prithvi's mother are the wives of the Maharaj. the second is that Prithvi and nikila share same father and neel is their cousin. i am confusing u too. but please clear it for me. waiting for the next update

Nivriti Is Nikhila's Mother, n Prithvi's Step Mom,

Neel Has No Blood Relation With Prithvi, Who Is Renuka, You Will Get Know About It In The Next Update, But She Has No Blood Relation With Nikhila or Prithvi.

Renuka Is BHARDAWAAJ n Prithvi Is MALHOTRA.

Wow amazing
so true what a punch dailogue dear
such mai "kisi ke sapnoo n mehnat ki kea keemat hu sakti hai" just superb
awesome update
maharani maa ki ankhen uff qayamat hain.
W8ng 4 next n thanx 4 pm

Padh liya mene! Jaa khush hoja!! 😆

Originally posted by: Murat_Fan

Padh liya mene! Jaa khush hoja!!😆

Okay on a serious note...it is interesting!! Reminded me of Shikar though!😉

But yes, nicely written...full on mysterious! Sabse zyada khushi mujhe pta kis baat se ho rhi hai???

Lavina ko yha dekh ke!😃😃

Oh I am in love with this woman after Rajat and Mugdha!😳😳😳

Hmm so Prithvi never met his family before! And Nikhila is his step sister..umm intersting!

I oved the line by nikhila ''Kisi gareeb ke sapno aur mehnat ki kya keemat ho sakti hai''...So true!!

continue soon!

P.S. If you have a pm list..include me as well..and I may not be a regular commentor fron now, but that dosn't mean I 'll not comment! I'll do..whenever I'll read and get time!!😊

and what about HSSH????😡

Aaho Bhaag Humare Ki Aap Padhare 😆 Thank You!

I Also Love Lavina After Mugdha Di, Rati Di, Rajat, KSG, Wahi n Mehul, You Know What, I Included Her Specialy For Priya n You 😳

IFs PM System Is Very Irritating, I PMed Only Those Who Are Not In My FB Friend List, I Will Inbox You On FB.

Once Again Thank You.

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Aaho Bhaag Humare Ki Aap Padhare 😆 Thank You!

I Also Love Lavina After Mugdha Di, Rati Di, Rajat, KSG, Wahi n Mehul, You Know What, I Included Her Specialy For Priya n You 😳

IFs PM System Is Very Irritating, I PMed Only Those Who Are Not In My FB Friend List, I Will Inbox You On FB.

Once Again Thank You.

Originally posted by: Murat_Fan

Oh not a problem...mujhe btate rehna...when I'll read I'll surely comment!😊

You included Lavina especially for me and Priya??!!! 🤗🤗🤗

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