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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Hey Sandy, I just read your update & it was wonderful. It brought back many fond memories of my visits to Dhikala in Corbett, especially the elephants & the tiger sighting.

I have had many close encounters with wild elephants, one of them especially memorable that happened in the open grasslands near Dhikala... I still shudder to think how we managed to escape that day when we were chased by a full-grown female elephant... 😲 LOL In retrospect, it seems so funny, but I can assure it sure was frightening as hell to see a full grown elephant charge at you with her trunk aimed straight at you. 😆

Of course, a tiger spotting is any day the highlight of any jungle adventure & boy are they majestic or what. Full respect to those cats for sure.

And I loved the way you gave a brief synopsis of ArHi's past through Khushi's angry words hurled at Arnav. Boy that kiss was so haawwttt... Phew! I loved the way Arnav said, it ain't over missy, just the beginning... 😉 Yay! so looking forward to that.

P.S. Sorry took forever to read the chapter, life's just been too hectic lately. :(

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Jen dear, what an amazing teaser!! Phew! with all the electrifying chemistry between them, they sure can power up a few fans themselves can't they?? 😆

Looking forward to Monday, hoping we can see more of this sizzling chemistry then... 😉

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mpat

@mpat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#713

Love the teaser Jenny!!

It is in perfect pace with the previous chapters and a nice build up after Sandhya's.

It is established that Khushi and Arnav had a relationship that was not a mere college romance but one that had meant a lot to both of them. Each chapter is shedding more light on it and the tension between the two.

The teaser...

What a setting...power outage, hot humid night...jungle, stars, sweaty meagerly clad bodies of the two "at odds" lovers.

Arnav whistling a song ...it's apparent it is a special song... Khushi's denial said it all. 😆

Looking forward to reading the next Chapter!!

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thumbi

@thumbi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: clappingfish
I really love this story and its one of those that drove me to make an id so that m able to comment. I was so happy to find a new update too today itself.
though m kind of disappointed with the last chapter. My liking for the story is overwhelming enough for me to voice my honest opinion and not pretend to go gaga over it just because it had two kisses, which in turn were out of the blue.
here are my points:
1. How did they become so overtly friendly in a matter of fortnight in which infact they hardly interacted and given their last encounter , this demeanour of both of them isn't quite matching the character developed in the last few updates.
also if m correct, Khushi was confused why he isn't bringing up the activity that was going on that night.
2. I appreciate that you must have spent time researching and wove a chapter. Now the chapter came out to be really a filler, the first half borderline boring, with just googled material and two kisses inserted.
that brings me to that i didn't like Arnav s behaviour. By the time of the second kiss, the whole thing started irritating me.
3. They were quite aware of each other in the last chapter. Its now they realized that she has curves and he is now a man?
4. Somehow, the whole chapter was a cut off from the past three. Most importantly, it was out of the blue when he commanded its not over. There wasn't any gradual build up or any proper thought process that lead to his realization of this decision. When did he take that.? In those few minutes/hours of going back to lodging when its been years since they parted and also a few weeks since she came into his vicinity in which they was a continuity in his character or even gradual development. This, as i said for the lack of a better word, was very abrupt and cut off.
i have really thought a lot and then decided to put this up because i think its all genuine and sensible and cant bring myself to say that i like this chapter by turning a blind eye to all of the above.
and i was waiting for smuggling track too. But maybe that's how it was planned. Appreciate the realness of sighting the animal s scene. Plus past history had already been quite clear in the last update. Still, this one gave more clarity.
I hope IPK007 is able to resurrect back the story.

Clappingfish, I really took offence to your opinion of calling it a 'googled' material... Of course googling is needed for any research today,becoz as far as I am concerned, it is a story happening in a real South Asian jungle and not in James Cameron's Pandora to have a "never seen" creative version...IMHO the way Sandhya has created the backdrop from googled material is commendable!...No comments on the rest as you are entitled to your own opinion.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#715

Sandhya,

As I was reading the update, these words came to me automatically, Splendid, Spectacular, flawless!! The flow of the chapter was so flawless and the ease with which the update came about like a river finding its desination to the Ocean!! I loved the update with everything in it, the grand beauty of the park (it makes a huge difference when reading thro' the eyes/mind of an author), the chemistry/sexual tension between the leads and not to mention the kiss. And the second kiss and his declaration that it just started ❤️

Loved their Safari through the restricted area of the park and eventually the Tiger sighting. I would be hell scared if I were in Khushi's place sitting in an open jeep 😲 What if the tiger came towards them & pounced on them 😕 May be the fact the Tiger's hunger was satiated made a difference.. Anyways what Khushi got to see nothing less than a spectacular scene and once in a lifetime opportunity 😊

I'm loving the tension that's brewing between Arnav & Khushi and the fact that it is not in Khushi's control 😳 Thank you for the lovely update!!

Cheers

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#716

Sandy ! 🤗

Its the beginning in deed !

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Jen ... my brain has stopped functioning after reading...

It was Arnav, clad in a sweat soaked vest and shorts and looking decidedly disgruntled.

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thumbi

@thumbi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: _disha_
Jen ... my brain has stopped functioning after reading...

It was Arnav, clad in a sweat soaked vest and shorts and looking decidedly disgruntled.

You are on with your cute one liners again, aren't you? :D