The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148 - Page 70

I really love this story and its one of those that drove me to make an id so that m able to comment. I was so happy to find a new update too today itself.
though m kind of disappointed with the last chapter. My liking for the story is overwhelming enough for me to voice my honest opinion and not pretend to go gaga over it just because it had two kisses, which in turn were out of the blue.
here are my points:
1. How did they become so overtly friendly in a matter of fortnight in which infact they hardly interacted and given their last encounter , this demeanour of both of them isn't quite matching the character developed in the last few updates.
also if m correct, Khushi was confused why he isn't bringing up the activity that was going on that night.
2. I appreciate that you must have spent time researching and wove a chapter. Now the chapter came out to be really a filler, the first half borderline boring, with just googled material and two kisses inserted.
that brings me to that i didn't like Arnav s behaviour. By the time of the second kiss, the whole thing started irritating me.

3. They were quite aware of each other in the last chapter. Its now they realized that she has curves and he is now a man?
4. Somehow, the whole chapter was a cut off from the past three. Most importantly, it was out of the blue when he commanded its not over. There wasn't any gradual build up or any proper thought process that lead to his realization of this decision. When did he take that.? In those few minutes/hours of going back to lodging when its been years since they parted and also a few weeks since she came into his vicinity in which they was a continuity in his character or even gradual development. This, as i said for the lack of a better word, was very abrupt and cut off.
i have really thought a lot and then decided to put this up because i think its all genuine and sensible and cant bring myself to say that i like this chapter by turning a blind eye to all of the above.
and i was waiting for smuggling track too. But maybe that's how it was planned. Appreciate the realness of sighting the animal s scene. Plus past history had already been quite clear in the last update. Still, this one gave more clarity.
I hope IPK007 is able to resurrect back the story.

Originally posted by: clappingfish

I really love this story and its one of those that drove me to make an id so that m able to comment. I was so happy to find a new update too today itself.
though m kind of disappointed with the last chapter. My liking for the story is overwhelming enough for me to voice my honest opinion and not pretend to go gaga over it just because it had two kisses, which in turn were out of the blue.
here are my points:
1. How did they become so overtly friendly in a matter of fortnight in which infact they hardly interacted and given their last encounter , this demeanour of both of them isn't quite matching the character developed in the last few updates.
also if m correct, Khushi was confused why he isn't bringing up the activity that was going on that night.
2. I appreciate that you must have spent time researching and wove a chapter. Now the chapter came out to be really a filler, the first half borderline boring, with just googled material and two kisses inserted.
that brings me to that i didn't like Arnav s behaviour. By the time of the second kiss, the whole thing started irritating me.

3. They were quite aware of each other in the last chapter. Its now they realized that she has curves and he is now a man?
4. Somehow, the whole chapter was a cut off from the past three. Most importantly, it was out of the blue when he commanded its not over. There wasn't any gradual build up or any proper thought process that lead to his realization of this decision. When did he take that.? In those few minutes/hours of going back to lodging when its been years since they parted and also a few weeks since she came into his vicinity in which they was a continuity in his character or even gradual development. This, as i said for the lack of a better word, was very abrupt and cut off.
i have really thought a lot and then decided to put this up because i think its all genuine and sensible and cant bring myself to say that i like this chapter by turning a blind eye to all of the above.
and i was waiting for smuggling track too. But maybe that's how it was planned. Appreciate the realness of sighting the animal s scene. Plus past history had already been quite clear in the last update. Still, this one gave more clarity.
I hope IPK007 is able to resurrect back the story.