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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

awesome update..⭐️

the way u explain in detail about park and their adventure to see tiger and other animals...

both of them are strong headed.. looking forward for their this beginning as Arnav said😊

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#612

thanks buddies for liking the RES post.. sorry for late comment..

once again awesome update.. Sandhya i was literally travelling along with arnav-khushi.. wow that was marvelous journey enjoyed elephants passing, big cat taking away his food away seeing humans around, all those birds, snake, other animals, the muddy path, sacredness and beauty of nature.. everything was simply out of this world experience.. finally on reaching back.. loved the convo and the hot kisses of ARSHI.. arnav is not going to let this time go out of his hand.. he have done a mistake in past but not now.. he have declared this is beginning of their life together.. lets see what khushi will do now.. as she have already avoided him for 15 days will she go on same way again.. loved the update.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Ohhh after seeing that wild cat our Arnav babua has turned into wilder..😉😃

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Ishque

@Ishque

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Oh that is one nice update 1st half was little slow for me. Because they are in a thrilling environment and i wanted a twist. But the second half made me sit on the edge of the seat to read it.Like i wanted the past to get over and for them to just feel what they have.

Some times insecurities make us blind seeing whats in front of our eyes.Or it is the past experience of loosing it.

Loved the update keep writing.:)

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Superb update.. Its absolutely amazing the way you described the whole atmosphere of the forest..Khushi is a tough nut to crack...But I am sure he'll win her back..You have penned it beautifully...

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bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Loved the update Sandhya!!!

"One day I'll go to Masai Mara."

OMG Masai Mara - been there twice, seen the wild life, Jeep and hot air balloon rides...it is amazing there!!!

Turned out to be quite a date for Khushi and Arnav with a make out session to boot!!!

"No. It's not over. In fact, it's just the beginning, Khushi."

Yeah Arnav...go for it and Khushi ...give him hell!! 😆

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

beautiful

nw I really wanna to knw y arnav avoided Khushi 4 so mny yrs, if my calculation is ri8

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

wow

ARSHI journey to wild park was very beautifully and amazingly written

it was thrilled and loved their enthusiasm

awesome part

loved reading it

so arnav now wanted khushi back in his life

and take it as a challenge to start their relationship all over again

IT"S NOT OVER,

IT"S JUST THE START KHUSHI

loved this arnav dialogue

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pooja_sanu

@pooja_sanu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

awww u guys r awesome yaar!!!
lovely discription for each n everything!!!
thx for the pm!!!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#620

that was a very well written update...the story is progressing way too well...keep up the good work going..thank you for the PM..please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...👍🏼