The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148

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mpat

@mpat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Whoa... Sandhya!!!

Awesome update!!

The jungle ride, elephant crossing, tiger sighting...all so vividly written that one can feel taking the ride with Khushi and Arnav...a silent passenger in the back seat. Awesome!!

A little more of the past anguish in the relationship.

Cinders of passion still exist and waiting to ignite into flames of love!!

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

The image of Khushi reading under the blanket was really amusing.

The lengths she was willing to go to avoid him!

Loved her excitement when she saw the elephants.

And she got to share the most exciting moment of her life with him...

Love the intensity they feel for each other.

Well done as always.

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

thanks for the pm..

my fav line " "No. It's not over. In fact, it's just the beginning, Khushi."

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Great update! That last part was not expected at all. Wow he really went for it there didn't he! But like khuhsi said he needs to deal with the consequences of his actions.

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thumbi

@thumbi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Oh My God!... This was beautiful!...I started reading thinking what kind of research you may have done for writing this chapter, Sandhya. Read your note at the end and I have to say all your effort is shining through in this update...

The description of travel through the jungle was awesome, felt like I was there...the only safari I have been to is the one in Disney. I am glad I have at least been to that even though I'm sure it is nothing compared to a real one...I could connect to so much of what you wrote...The moment they saw the tiger, I wanted Khushi to kiss Arnav hard on his cheeks and voila! you made her do exactly that... LOL

The intimate moment they shared was really nice with both of them forgetting their past contentions and lived for a moment in the afterglow of the high they experienced through out the safari...I loved how you ended with Arnav's stubbornness to not leave things between them strained anymore...

As for blending in with the previous updates, it was seamless! Loved every bit of it!

Edited by thumbi - 11 years ago