Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 23

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Posted: 20 years ago
ah so sweet. Thanx for another great part. I'll be online all day waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 20 years ago

wow Raman....it was really cool story...i just love it....thanx lot....

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: happe

ah so sweet. Thanx for another great part. I'll be online all day waiting for the next part.

same here....i just want to read it as soon as it is posted

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Originally posted by: bips

same here....i just want to read it as soon as it is posted

Awwww Thanks u guys r really sweet. I'm writing it right now.😛

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Posted: 20 years ago

thanks alot for

another awesome piece.

waiting for the next one

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Posted: 20 years ago

plz cont

angads & adis relation is simply gr8

plz cont fast

waiting for ur next partssssssssssssssssss

lots of love

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
Good One. Thanks Waiting for Dadi to come👏👏👏
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omg it is so good u have to continue please soon soon soon soon yaar👏
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PART-?? (Don't wanna go back and check)

They get into his car.

And Angad drives off.

K: how come dadi wants to see us together,after soo many years

A: I don't know. If I'd known then I would've told you by now. Duh

K: whateva

They stop infront of Dadi's house and go inside.

Dadi hugs them both and says, "I've been for both of u. Come in."

K: Dadi u look soo weak haven't u been taking care of urself.

D: oh beta don't worry about me. I'm getting old. I'm making dinner for u all.

A: Dadi ap taklif kyun kar rahi hai. I'll help u.

K : we'll both help u.

D: but I need to talk to u

K: hugs Dadi and says, "we'll talk and work at the same time."

They all go in the kitchen.

A: Dadi it smells good, what r v making.

D: pizza

K: hmmm yummy

Dadi hold on to Angad coz she can barely walk

Kripa holds her and says Dadi u should go take rest and we'll make dinner, and we'll talk while we're eating.

Angad holds Dadi from one side and Kripa from the other they make her lie in her bed.

She says, "I'm really happy to see my two bache together again. Please stay happy and don't ever fight."

A and K look and each other, but smile for dadi.

They go out.

A: Ok Kripa I'm gonna watch a movie now. Put extra cheese on my pizza ok.

He goes and sits on the sofa.

Kripa goes behind him angrily, grabs him by the arm and says.

K: no Mr. khanna ur helping me. U were being all nice and sweet infront of Dadi now what. You better help me or else.

She drags him into the kitchen.

She says I'll get the dough ready u cut the veggies, for the veggie pizza.

A: why do I get the hard part

K: Ok I'll do that then, u wanna switch

A: no I'm ok

They both start working but keep arguing over every little thing. Angad cuts his hand while chopping the onions.

A: ahhhh

K running over to him: I swear u can't even do 1 thing right without me. She sees blood coming out of it. She takes his hand and slowly washes the blood of it.

K: does it hurt

Angad looks at her: no

Kripa puts a bandage on it. She says its ok I'll do it myself. You go ahead and watch tv. Jao. She makes him go. Angad looks back at her feeling like nothing ever happened and they were still together.

Kripa bakes the pizza and yells: Angad go get Dadi the pizza is ready.

Both Angad and Dadi come to the Dining table and they all eat happily.

Afterwards dadi tells them to come to her room, she wants to give then something.

They go with her. Dadi sits on her bed.

This is what I have soo far.It's short coz I'm still writing, but didn't want to keep u guys waiting. I'll post up the next part as soon as I finish writing.

Lots of love from Raman.

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Posted: 20 years ago
oh this one is part 23.....i wanted to read ur fan fic like one big story without all the comments n all so its all stored as one word doc in my comp.....its 23............love the chemistry between angad n kripa....so cute....waiting impatiently

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