Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 22

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Posted: 20 years ago
I love the song Nach Baliye from Bunty aur Babli. Suna suna from Krishna cottage is nice too. Suraj hua madham from k3g. There r so many songs that i like but i'll stick to these n the other songs that the others have chosen. Now its up to u Deepey. Continue ur fan fic. its lovely.
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Posted: 20 years ago

my fav songs

Banjao meri.. from silsalay i think!

EK Dilrubaa hai and woh bewafaa hai-- bewafaa

GOT MY EYES ON YOU- JAY SEAN

STOLEN-- JAYSEAN (ALL SONGS)

CHAK DAY (HUMTUM)

U'N i --- HUMTUM

WOH LAMHE WOH JUDAAI..

SUN ZARA AND JAAN MERI JAA RAHI HAI -- LUCKY

AND MORE!!! THE LIST CONTINUEES!

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Posted: 20 years ago

plz continue ur story can't wait for the next parttttttttttttttttt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭

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Posted: 20 years ago
please continue fast I can't wait
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Posted: 20 years ago
3 days and still no update......where are you..........please story ko aage badhaoo......plsssssssss
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey deepey plz continue fast...........
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PART-?? forgot

Angad opens the door and both of them walk in.

A: so what songs should we sing.

K: oh wait first we should decide our solo songs.

A: that Ive already decided I'm gonna sing the song "Stolen"

K: "ur gonna sing a English song, ok then I'll sing an English song too"

Angad raises his eyebrow: "which one"

K: "we belong together"

A: "ha"

K: "it's a song sweety"

A (looking away) :I know, but we still have to sing a hindi solo 2.

K: I'm gonna sing Suna Suna

A: what's up with u and sad songs. Ok then I'll sing who lamhe, and ae bekhabar from Zeher."

K: yeah those sure r some party songs

A: shut up

K: anywayz I think we should sing Chup chup ke from Bunty aur bubbly

A: hell no, that's hella stupid.

K: no its not, its hella romantic

A: so?

K:so we're gonna sing it.

A:nayi

K:ha

A:nayi

K: ha

A: nayi

K: ha

A: SHUT UP, ur so f***** annoying, ok we'll sing it.

Kripa smiles

A: But I get to choose the other ones. We're gonna sing Pyaar mein so uljhane hai, and raaba mere rabba. Remember that one.

K (hurt): how can I forget that.

A: ok since that's settled.

Lets start practicing

They practice, and Angad is still mesmerized as ever listening to kripa's sweet voice.

When she sings "we belong together" he's just blown away.

(omg guys I just love this song. It's soo beautiful, especially the lyrix)

I didn't mean it
When I said I didn't love you so
I should have held on tight
I never should've let you go
I didnt know nothing
I was stupid
I was foolish
I was lying to myself
I could not fathom that I would ever
Be without your love
Never imagined I'd be
Sitting here beside myself

Guess I didn't know you
Guess I didn't know me
But I thought I knew everything
I never felt.
The feeling that I'm feeling now
That I don't hear your voice
Or even touch or even kiss your lips
Cause I don't have a choice
Oh what I wouldn't give
To have you lying by my side
Right here

Cause baby
When you left
I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby please cause
We belong together

Who else am I gonna lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There aint nobody better
Oh baby, baby
We belong together

I can't sleep at night
When you are on my mind
Bobby Womack's on the radio
Singing to me
'If you think you're lonely now'
Wait a minute
This is too deep, too deep


I gotta change the station
So I turn the dial
Trying to catch a break
And then I hear Babyface

I only think of you
And it's breaking my heart
I'm trying to keep it together
But I'm falling apart
I'm feeling all out of my element
I'm throwing things
Crying
Trying to figure out
Where the hell I went wrong
The pain reflected in this song
Ain't even half of what
I'm feeling inside
I need you
Need you back in my life baby

When you left
I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby please cause
We belong together

Who else am I gonna lean on
When times get rough
Who's gonna talk to me on the phone
Till the sun comes up
Who's gonna take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh baby, baby
We belong together

Baby
When you left
I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
Come back baby please
Cause we belong together
Who am i going to lean on
When times get rough
Who's going to talk to me
Til the sun comes up
Who's going to take your place
There ain't nobody better
Oh baby, baby
We belong together

Kripa gets tears in her eyes while singing, Angad turn around feeling his heart beating soo fast that it hurts. He just leaves.

Outside he sees Jay.

J: Hey have u guys decided the songs.

A: yeah

J: that's great, just give me the name of the songs, and I'll make up a dance sequence with it. So we can start practicing this week.

Angad gives him the songs.

Jay: Alright u go ahead and practice now.

He leaves and Angad goes back in again.

He sees Kripa staring straight ahead.

A: slowly comes and sits down next to her.

Kripa looks at him and says. "its ur turn now."

Angad starts singing.

Stolen (I love this song too)

You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You were my air when I couldn't breathe
I think you always knew what you meant to me

And you were my strength when I was down
And you made me humble when I wouldn't bow
I held on to your promise that you'd be around

Where were you when I was alright
Tell me, did you know I was alright
You left me thinking I'd be alright
Won't you come back to me

It's crazy but I'm falling apart
It's crazy how you're leaving me scarred
It's crazy girl wherever you are
You stole my heart

Stolen
Just like a moment
Stolen
You never owned it
Stolen
You took away my heart

I was feeling lost in my own world
Neglecting your needs and your wants girl
If only we could try again once more

Now it's the same sad story that we all know
How lovers make mistakes watch it all blow
I don't wanna be the one to let it all go, no

Where were you when I was alright
Tell me, did you know I was alright
You left me thinking I'd be alright
Won't you come back to me

It's crazy but I'm falling apart
It's crazy how you're leaving me scarred
It's crazy girl wherever you are
You stole my heart

It's crazy but I'm going insane
Feeling lost, confused and ashamed
It's crazy hope you're feeling my pain
You stole my heart

Stolen
Just like a moment
Stolen
You never owned it
Stolen
You took away my heart

And no man can live without blood running through his veins
And it's hard to remember the summer now here is rain
I don't how much longer that I can wait
It's a thin line between love and hate

It's crazy but I'm falling apart (girl it's crazy)
It's crazy how you're leaving me scarred (leaving me scarred)
It's crazy girl wherever you are (tell me where are you, where are you)
You stole my heart

Its crazy but I'm going insane (going insane)
Feeling lost, confused and ashamed
It's crazy hope you're feeling my pain (are you feeling my, feeling my pain)
You stole my heart

Stolen
Just like a moment
Stolen
You never owned it
Stolen
Girl you took away my heart

Angad's words pierce through Kripa's heart. When the song ends Sahil comes in clapping.

S: wow, that was amazing. Seems like u've witnesses a heart break man

Angad doesn't respond but stares deep into Kripa's eyes.

Then Sahil goes over to Kripa and asks, "Kripa Jay said our work for today is done. If u don't mind can I take u out for some lunch."

Angad feels jealous.

Kripa looks at Angad and says, "umm actually who."

S: "oh comeon Kripa"

A (sarcastically) : yeah go ahead kripa, what's the problem

K (gets mad looks straight at angad and then at Sahil) "I'd love to "

She gives one last look to Angad, hold's sahil's arm and leaves.

Angad punches the wall in frustration.

He goes home and gets a call from Dadi

A: Hi dadi

D: Hi mere bache. Can u come meet me tonight. I need to talk to u.

A: yeah sure Dadi.

D: can u also bring Kripa with u

A: but

D: please

A: ok

Dadi hangs up. Angad wonders why Dadi called them together.

He calls Kripa.

Kripa doesn't answer purposely.

He keeps calling her. But she doesn't pick up.

So in the evening he just goes to her house and rings the bell.

Kripa opens it.

K: Tum, what r u doing here.

A: where were u the whole day, and why didn't u answer my calls.

K: I was busy

A: smiles dangerously, "yeah BUSY"

K: what r u doing here."

A: mujhe koi shonk nahi hai tumhari shakal dekney ka. Dadi called up and wants to meet us both right now. You have to come with me.

K: oh, ok wait. I'll go get dressed. Umm come in

He walks in slowly, and looks around. It's a huge living room, with really high ceilings. On the walls there is pictures of Adi. Some with Kripa and some with Khushi.

He goes in and sits on the sofa. He really makes himself comfortable, puts his legs on the table and turns the tv on.

Just then adi comes running and jumps into Angad's lap.

Angad is really happy.

Angad: "heeyyyy kiddo."

Adi: "Hi star"

Adi sits in Angad's lap and Angad kisses him

Adi: what r u doing here star.

Angad: nothing, to meet u ofcourse

Adi: liar

Angad (smiles): ok ok, me and ur mom have some work to do

Adi: oh can I come too

Angad: ummmm

Adi: please please

Angad: ok u can come with us.

Just then Kripa comes downstairs

K: No, adi beta u have to stay home.

Adi: but why mom

K: coz u have to go to school tomm.

Adi: mom

Angad: comeon Kripa let hm come

Kripa: nayi, Angad then he's not gonna wake up in the morning tomorrow

They r acting like a family.

In the end Kripa still says no, so adi has to stay home.

Angad picks up Adi and says, "mom is a really big meanie huh"

Adi: "yeah sometimes, but I still love her."

Angad: ""yeah me too"

He stops when he says this and thinks about what he just said.

Kripa comes in from the kitchen and says, "ok, Adi eat ur food, and don't bother masshi too much ok."

Ok ma. She goes to Angad and says, "Can I say bye to my son now."

Angad who was holding Adi says, "ok wait, let me say bye first. He kisses him and says bye kiddo."

Then Kripa takes adi from him.

She also kisses him and says, "I love u hun."

He kisses her back and says, "I love u too mommy."

Angad is really touched seeing them.

He then goes outside Kripa following him.

They get into his car.

And Angad drives off.

K: how come dadi wants to see us together,after soo many years

A: I don't know. If I'd known then I would've told you by now. Duh

TADAM TADAM TADAM

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

I'm gonna write some more today. Promise. Sorry couldn't update we were painting my cousins house. Had alot fun over there, but couldn't take out the time to update. Am really sorry. This update was mostly about songs, but next one is gonna be really chatpata. I'll make it up today. Lots of love and enjoy.

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was really kool please continue soon as possible
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Posted: 20 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue.... i'm dying 2 read more😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
the family scene was so cute.....pls try to include more scenes where they unknowingly act like a family....it just tugs at ur heart......gr8 work as always 👏👏......waiting for the next one 😊

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