Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 24

Originally posted by: bips

oh this one is part 23.....i wanted to read ur fan fic like one big story without all the comments n all so its all stored as one word doc in my comp.....its 23............love the chemistry between angad n kripa....so cute....waiting impatiently

awww bips ur such a sweetie. Thanks for letting me know

wow....Thanx for another great part....

~sweta~

since the last part was really short I'm gonna combine the two:

PART-?? (Don't wanna go back and check)

They get into his car.

And Angad drives off.

K: how come dadi wants to see us together,after soo many years

A: I don't know. If I'd known then I would've told you by now. Duh

K: whateva

They stop infront of Dadi's house and go inside.

Dadi hugs them both and says, "I've been for both of u. Come in."

K: Dadi u look soo weak haven't u been taking care of urself.

D: oh beta don't worry about me. I'm getting old. I'm making dinner for u all.

A: Dadi ap taklif kyun kar rahi hai. I'll help u.

K : we'll both help u.

D: but I need to talk to u

K: hugs Dadi and says, "we'll talk and work at the same time."

They all go in the kitchen.

A: Dadi it smells good, what r v making.

D: pizza

K: hmmm yummy

Dadi hold on to Angad coz she can barely walk

Kripa holds her and says Dadi u should go take rest and we'll make dinner, and we'll talk while we're eating.

Angad holds Dadi from one side and Kripa from the other they make her lie in her bed.

She says, "I'm really happy to see my two bache together again. Please stay happy and don't ever fight."

A and K look and each other, but smile for dadi.

They go out.

A: Ok Kripa I'm gonna watch a movie now. Put extra cheese on my pizza ok.

He goes and sits on the sofa.

Kripa goes behind him angrily, grabs him by the arm and says.

K: no Mr. khanna ur helping me. U were being all nice and sweet infront of Dadi now what. You better help me or else.

She drags him into the kitchen.

She says I'll get the dough ready u cut the veggies, for the veggie pizza.

A: why do I get the hard part

K: Ok I'll do that then, u wanna switch

A: no I'm ok

They both start working but keep arguing over every little thing. Angad cuts his hand while chopping the onions.

A: ahhhh

K running over to him: I swear u can't even do 1 thing right without me. She sees blood coming out of it. She takes his hand and slowly washes the blood of it.

K: does it hurt

Angad looks at her: no

Kripa puts a bandage on it. She says its ok I'll do it myself. You go ahead and watch tv. Jao. She makes him go. Angad looks back at her feeling like nothing ever happened and they were still together.

Kripa bakes the pizza and yells: Angad go get Dadi the pizza is ready.

Both Angad and Dadi come to the Dining table and they all eat happily.

Afterwards dadi tells them to come to her room, she wants to give then something.

They go with her. Dadi sits on her bed.

Part-24 (thanks bips)

Afterwards dadi tells them to come to her room, she wants to give then something.

They go with her. Dadi sits on her bed.

D: Come here and sit next to me.

A and K sit on sides of dadi

D: now I wanna tell u both that I made my will

A: But what for

D: listen to me na first bacha

Dadi takes out some papers and says, "I've divided all my money, property and belongings into 4 equal parts. One for my son, eventhough he doesn't bother to even visit me I still love him, Second for my grandson, third for my beti Kripa, and fourth for my great grandson Adi.

K: But dadi.

Dadi puts a finger on her lips and says, "I don't care what u, angad, or anybody says but I know that Adi is my great grandson", she looks at Angad. "We've gone over this topic like a million times already, so please Kripa accept it as my last wish."

Angad remains quiet.

K: "ok dadi, I can accept Adi's coz he's ur khun, but me Dadi. I'm not even married to ur grandson."

D: "I don't care what people say, but I've always considered u as my angad's wife. And our relationship isn't that, I consider u as my beti so u have to accept it. Beta I don't know how many days I have left. I just wanna take this bojh off of my shoulders, and before I die I wanna tell u both something. Kismat valo ko sachi mahobbat nasseb hoti hai. I've explained this to both of you like a million times. I hope my words have some affect on u before I die."

Kripa gets tears in her eyes and hugs dadi, "don't say that please dadi. You have a long life ahead of u."

Angad also hugs her. He basically hugs both dadi and kripa coz she was already hugging dadi. (group hug). They all than separate with tears flowing down their eyes.

Dadi: Angad beta please don't let ur ego ruin ur love please.

A: Dadi its getting late now. We should go.

D: Alright mere bacho take care, and remember I love u, I'll always be there for u.

They both hug dadi again and leave.

Both of them r feeling really sad at all that just happened.

They get in the car and leave.

Kripa is still sniffing.

A: "why r u crying like a little baby now. I swear, women."

Kripa hits him playfully, "Who was the baby infront of Dadi. You should've seen urself. It was like an ocean flowing down ur eyes"

A: oh yeah, atleast

K: just shut up ok.

Kripa's phone rings.

K: hello

K: oh hi Sahil

K: no umm why

K: tomorrow sorry I can't come I've to go with Adi

K: Is it important

K: ok then I'll see. I'll call u tomorrow ok.

K: bye

Angad is feeling really jealous

A: who was it

K: nobody it was just Sahil

A: what did he want

K: he wants to meet me

A: why

K: don't know. Anywayz why do u care

A: I don't care about u. I was just curious. I care for poor Sahil, bechara it's his turn to get played now.

Kripa yells: Shut up Angad, and mind ur own business.

Kripa is fuming: why do have to always say some bull shit like that

A: Coz Kripa I can never forgive u for what u did to me.

K: Just shut up ok I don't wanna hear a single word out of ur mouth or else

A: or else what what will u do huh.

K: or I'll jump out of the car

A: so I don't care. You r the one who's gonna get hurt.

K: I'll throw u out of the car then

Angad looks at her with his smile: I dare you

K: tries to push hm but he's too heavy

A: haaaa see u damn looser

K: shut up and hurry up, I'm tired I wanna go home and sleep.

A: I'm gonna drive slower now.

K: I don't care then I'll just fall asleep in your car. You're gonna have to pick me up and drop me off then.

A: yeah right. I would just leave you in the car.

K: whateva

Angad drives really slowly and Kripa really falls asleep.

Angad does exactlu like he said, He leaves her in the car and rings the door bell. Khushi opens the door and says Angad what r u doing her and where is Kripa.

Angad lies, "oh Kripa stayed over and Dadi's house." I wanted to spend some time with adi so I came over."

Khushi : "oh ok, he's sleeping in his room now"

Angad: "is it ok if I sleep there tonight."

Khushi : "yeah go ahead"

Angad goes and sleeps in Adi's room.

Kripa wakes up in the morning thinking, "where the hell am I"

She opens the door and gets out, she thinks about last night and yells, "Angad I'm gonna kill u."

She goes home and thinks, "I should wake up Adi now, he has to go to school."

She goes into Adi's room, still half asleep herself.

She falls on the bed and touches Angad's face. All three of them r sleeping on the same bed. Adi on one side, Angad in the middle and Kripa on the other side.

K(sleepily) : Adi wake up na sweety

Angad puts his arms around her and says, " Soney do na Kripa"

Kripa comes to her senses and wakes up she pulls herself out of Angad's arms and yells, "Angad what r u doing her."

A (waking up with a shock): huh oh, I told u last night but u didn't listen to me. Haaaa u had to sleep in the car the whole night while I was sleeping comfortably on this soft bed.

K: Shut up (they're both still in the bed)

Kripa starts hitting him and yelling at him

When suddenly Adi wakes up and says, "mama what happened"

Both Angad and Kripa feel really embarrassed

TADAM TADAM TADAM

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

I'll continue tomm. now. I'm tired. Have a nice day everybody. Lots of love from raman

wow Raman... Thanx for another excellent part....i can't wait for next part...plz post fast....

~sweta~

thanks alot

it was another great part

JUST AWESOME

AWWWWWW.....

that was soo qute!!!!

love ur writing!!!

please do continue!!!!

later

goldi2

tat was fab!!!!👏and qute!!!!!!😃