Asya SS: Jaane Pehchane Si Ajnabi (Thread 2) (Part 32 - Page 55) - Page 32

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Part 31:

Hospital:

Doctors are operating Asad. Dilshad has unstoppable tears rolling on her cheeks. Rashid held her consoling. Zeenat was going through trauma thinking about Zoya. Everyone is in shock with sudden happenings and helpless situations. ICU floor waiting room is filled with family members. Arjun and IIA agents trying to find leads. Zoya was untreacable.

After 5 hours of operation doctor came out in his green dress removing his mask. All stood in there pants waiting him to speak.

Doctor - Humne bullets nikal diya. Par hum kuch nahi keh sakte. Unhe 1 gante mein hosh nahi aaya toh, Comma mein jaa sakte hai. Which is dangerous?! Baghwaan pe bharosa rakhiye.

He excused himself and left from there leaving them distraught.

***

Flash Back:

Reading Room:

Zoya held book and about to leave when she saw person behind Sofa-set.

Zoya - Kaun hai waha?! Bahar niklo. Kaun hai waha?!

She moved forward repeating words. She bent behind but couldnt find anyone. Before she could turn, person hit on her head with a vase and she fell down. He bent down to check her breath. She is alive and unconcious. He called someone.

Person - Gadbad hogayi hai. Dulhan ne mujhe dekh liya.

He explained other person in the phone everything.

Other Person - Pen drive kaha hai?!

Person - Gaffur ke pass hai.

Other Person - Plan B.

Person disconnected call.

***

Inside:

Humeira and Simran went to reading room to inform Zoya. They were shocked to see her lying on the ground unconcious.

Humeira - Baji!!!!

Simran - Aapi!!!

Humeira - Simran tum jaake bahar inform karo.

Simran ran from there to inform elders. After few seconds Humeira heard thousand glasses breaking sound as sandlar broke on floor. Bullet firing was ringing inside. Gaffur guards were shot dead in matter of seconds. Some people ran out and few got captured by terrorists dressed as waiters behind closed doors.

Bunch of people were targetted with guns and they made them sit at one corner. Humeira who witnessed everything from first floor behind the pillar ran inside reading room to keep Zoya safe. Person commanding that anti-social group asked to check all other rooms. Humeira hid herself safe leaving Zoya. If they see Zoya missing they will suspect and can do anything.

***

Outside:

People was in mode of panic. Gaffur Farooqi, PM of India is in surrounded by anti social agents. Person with high security got trapped in. Asad and his family reached there. He was in shock but revovered soon to take up his duty and save everyone. He cannot take any impulsive step. After 1 minute door was opened Sharat Chandra came out. As he walked out 5 bullets holed his body and door was closed immediately.

Police, few guards and Asad ran to him. He was spot dead. Asad found paper in his pocket.

Asad (Reading Paper) - Humein Gaffur Farooqi aur unke pass ki pen drive chahiye. Humein yaha se safely bahar nikalne ke liye gaadi aur waha se ek chopper chahiye. Tum logon ke pass sirf 10 minute hai. 10 minute ke baad pura parivaar aur kamre mein behosh padi dulhan laash bann jayenge.

Asad crumpled paper in his fist. Force reached in next 3 minutes. People and Media were cleared from there. Asad spoted his duty to save people inside and also his love in danger. Duty and responsibility is standing before him. He was under his chief.

Asad - Tumhe kuch nahi hoga Zoya.

They tried negotiating with people inside. They denied to negotiate and stood adamant on there demands.

Person - humein yaha se 10 minute mein nikalna hai.

That shut down the conversation. PM is in danger. CCTV's inside are disconnected. Force out, are preparing for military and commando operation. Head by two teams. One from back door head by Sanjay Singh. Other from first floor commanded by Asad Ahmed Khan.

Person - Kya decide kiya tum logon ne.

From outside.

Chief Negotiator - Tum logon ko hum yaha se jaane denge. Sabko surakshit bahar riha karo. PM saab ko kuch hona chahiye.

Person - Pehle hum yaha se niklengea. Hum PM ko waha chodenge. Jisa hum kahenge, waisa hi hoga.

Negotiation end there.

Chief Commando - Agar yaha se yeh log PM ke saath niklenge toh bahot problem hojayega. Par humein iss samai commando operation nahi karna chahiye.

Sanjay Singh - Sir aap kuch bhi karke toda waqt lijiye. Humein operation abhi karna hoga. Agar hum zyada time lenge 'element of surprise' hum use nahi kar payenge.

Asad - Agar unke pass granite ya plastic explosions honge toh yaha se 1Km tak koi nahi bachega. PM saab aur PM saab ke pass jo pen drive hai woh, hum dono nahi kho sakte.

Chief - I agree with both. Par humein high command se order ane tak hum koi decision nahi le sakte.

Asad - Itna samai nahi hai humare pass. Sirf 10 min hai. Aur daer karenge toh andar koi nahi bachega.

Chief - We have to go with protocol.

Chief left to attend call.

Asad - Protocol my foot.

Sanjay Singh - Calm down Asad. We need cool mind to handle things.

***
Inside:

Humeira tried to bring Zoya into conciousness. But she failed. As she heard foot steps she hid herself again.

Living Room:

Gaffur - Nahi!!

Gaffur tried to move, but failed under gun.

Simran was under gun point. Zeenat, Anwar were threw aside with other relatives.

Person heading group - Woh pen drive humein dedo PM saab.

PM - Kabhi nahi. Iss desh ko bachane ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon. Yeh Pen drive tumhe kabhi nahi milega.

Person - Marne ki itni bhi jaldi nahi hona chahiye.

He activated his gun.

Gaffur (Smirk) - Tum aisa nahi karoge, kyun ki tum logon ko yaha se shurakshit nikalne ke liye mera zinda hona zaroori hai.

***

Reading Room:

Humeira slapped her cheeks gently trying to bring her to concious. Zoya held her head opening heavy eyes. Everything was blur for a moment. What is she doing here?! Today is her dream wedding, what happened?! She regained incidents happened. She saw Humeira kneeled before her. She stood up with her support. She heard chaos in Main hall.

Humeira - Baji!! Aap teekh ho?!

Zoya (To herself) - Zoya, kuch karo Zoya. Sabko safely bahar nikalna hai. Abb tak force pura yaha pahonch gaya hoga. U have to contact them. Asad. Asad ko call karna hai. My phone.

Zoya (To Humeira) - Humeira my phone. Phone kaha hai.
She looked around. Her phone was lying under table. It was broken into pieces. She tried to fix it up. Screen was broken. She hoped touch to work. There it goes. It is working with 10% battery. She heard foot steps. She fell back on ground, acting unconcious and Humeira hid behind in safe place.

Another person also reached there. Zoya heard him saying, 'Tum apne bomb ke saath taiyaar rehna. Tumhara yeh kurbaani barbaad nahi hoga. Yaha iss desh mein dehshat phelega, iss PM ke maut ke saath. ' Zoya recorded in her phone and sent him. After that one message her phone have 5% charge.

***

Outside:

Suraj Singh - Hum unhe yaha se jane nahi de sakte! Bomb blast karne se pehle humein kuch karna chahiye.

Asad - Bomb-Kurbaani-taiyaar rehna. Kya matlab ho sakta hai iska?! Damn it. Suicide bomber.

Suraj Singh - Matlab woh yaha se nikal ne ke baad PM ko airport mein suicider bomber ke saath chod denge. Unn logon ke nikalne ke turant attack hoga.

Asad - Ha. Yahi plan hai unka. Humein commando operation karne mein daer nahi karna chahiye.

After pros ans cons chief commander has to take decision in emergency. Chief Commander announced.

Chief Negotiator - Agle panch minute mein aap sabko yaha se nikalne ke taiyari hojayega. PM sabko aur andar kisi bhi insaan ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.

There was no reply from inside. Silence from other side intuted danger.

***

Inside:

Hall:

Zoya's phone drained. They heard person pointing gun at PM saying.

Person - Aapke pass sirf 2 minute hai. Iss 2 minute mein aapko marna hai ya jeena hai, yeh aap decide karenge.

Gaffur - Mein marne ke liye taiyaar hoon. Mein apne desh ko anyay nahi hone dunga.

He removed gun from him and pointed at Simran.

Person - Aap kurbaan honge aur aapke saath saath aapke parivaar ko bhi kurbaan kardenge.

Gaffur - Nahi!!!!

**

Reading Room:

Zoya - Iss se pehle Asad aur force andar aaye, humein kuch karna padega.

Humeira - Iss kamre mein Abbu ke bahot sare pen drives hai. Par uss mein confidential files honge.

Zoya - Nahi. Abbu empty pen drives alag se rakhte hai, neeche ki drawer mein.

Zoya and Humeira got spare drive.

Zoya - Mein yeh leke neeche jaari hoon. Tum yaha mehfoos rehna.

Humeira - Nahi Baji. Neeche aap nahi mein jaungi.

Zoya - Samajhne ki koshish karo Humeira. Unhe tumhari yaha hone ka kabar nahi hai. Mein nahi chahti ki tum bhi katre mein pado. Waise bhi unhe pata hai ki mujhe pen drive ke bare mein pata hai. Meri jana he sabke liye sahi hai. Unhe shak nahi hoga.

Humeira - Par Baji!!

Zoya left room without listening to her.

**

Hall:

Before bullet triggered Simran, Zoya came down running.

Zoya - Pen drive mere pass hai. Simran ko chod do.

Gaffur (Shocked and confused) - Zoya!!

Zoya - Nahi abbu!! Mein apni parivaar ko kurbaan nahi kar sakti.

She is extending time with her drama.

Peson - Pen drive iddar do.

Zoya (Firmly) - Nahi. Pehle sabko riha karo.

Person - Yaha shart hum rakhenge. Pen drive do.

Zoya - Nahi. Aap logon ko bhi pata hai ki iss mulk mein aapke pass zyada waqt nahi hai. Sabko riha karne ke baad he yeh pen drive milega.

Person authorising chaos sighed him mates to leave people except PM family.

Person - Hum pehle iss drive mein jo hai woh dekhenge. Baad mein, tumhare log riha honge.

**

Outside:

Asad and Suraj Singh are ready in there positions. They were breaking in ways, when they were ordered to stop at there feet by Chief Commander.

Suraj Singh - Kya hua sir?!

Chief Commander - Woh logon ko riha kar rahe hai.

Asad - What?! Sir kuch aur plan kar rahe hai woh log. Humein andar jana chahiye.

Chief Commander - Jab tak hum negotiate nahi karenge, tab tak hum kuch nahi kar payenge.

Asad - Sir, humein andar jana chahiye.

Chief Commander - Its my order Asad. Come back to positions.

***

Reading Room:

Humeira heard person ordering to check the pen-drive. She must stop them before they check. If they check and come to know that it was wtong drive. They will kill Zoya.

Humeira - Abhi tak force kyun nahi aaya. Asad jiju kaha hai?! mujhe kuch karna hai!!

She took other drive.

Humeira - Par iss mein risk hai!! abhi risk lena he padega!!

She ran down.

**

Outside:

As people came out. Each were tested under bomb detection machine. Asad came across a person whose face narrated some other story. His body language is not of a victim. As he scrutinized him he saw a black wire running down neck. He suspected it to bomb.

Asad (To himself) - why will they take this risk?! Is he the sucide bomber. He will blast before detection.

Asad - Stop him.

Asad ran to him and pointed gun. He raised his hand. He was kneeled down and tied his hands back. There is button inside his shirt with a mike.

Asad - Kya hai yeh bol?! bol!!

He pressed the botton pressing against his body with chin and laughed out loud.

**
Inside:

Humeira - Nahi!! asli pen-drive yeh hai.

Zoya - Humeira!!

Zoya looked at her and then at masked person.

Zoya - Nahi!! yeh drive asli hai!!

Humeira and Zoya started arguing.

Person - Chup karo tum dono!! chup!!

**

Outside:

Person who pressed button looked at them and said.

Person - Yeh andar ke halaton ka faisla leta hai. Abb andar koi nahi bachega. yeh danger button hai.

He swallowed sinade tablet hanging down his chain.

***

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With in next two days!!
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Part 32:
IIA (Shimla):
Ranveer Shekawath - Asad ko hosh aagaya?!

On going circumstances brought Ranveer Shekawath to Shimla. In the absence of Asad his efficient team can lead the case but senior should take responsibility. This mission is important and need his attention. After Asad's shoot out he shouldered mission. They nodded negative at his question.

Ranveer Shekawath - Akram aur uske family ke bare mein kuch pata chala?!
Virat - Akram ke sare references humne re-check kiya hai. Woh sab asli hai. Par Akram asli Akram nahi hai.
Adarsh - Humne uske US office aur wahe ke sare dost ko bhi call kiya. Akram wahi US mein hai.
Aziz - Iss nakli Akram ne asli Akram ke details, address and references use kiya. Pehle kisi ne asli Akram ko nahi dekha. Isi liye unhe laga yahi asli hai. Nikha bhi isi liye jaldi karwana chahte te.
Ranveer - Where is Arjun?!
Adarsh - Hospital mein security re-check kar raha hai. Unhe hint mila ki koi waha reh kar Asad ke health ke bare mein information pass kar rahe hai.
Ranveer - Car ke bare mein kuch pata chala?!

Virat - Car humein Shanti Nagar ke pass mila hai. Par humein waha se koi information nahi mila.

***
Flash Back:

Chief Commander/Negotiator - Move. Positions.

They could here bullet sounds from inside. Before command, Asad was on his way to barge in. They entered place. There were only five in first floor. Asad realized they don't have army. They are around 10 one among is dead outside. Four must be down aiming guns. Person leading will be fiddling with people.

Two were down. Other two had to be killed by gun. It alerted people in hall. Chaos scattered people. Zoya was held by person under gun point. He dragged her with him making her armor. They completed task of first round in first floor. Second team was firing down. Asad ordered other mates to search around rooms. He with two ran down. Soldiers with him lost there lives. Only five left including him and singh.

Person (Holding Zoya) - Koi apne jagah se nahi hilega. Nahi toh mein goli mardunga.

Everyone plastered there feet. Three persons covered him. Asad in his bluetooth.

Asad - Kisi ko clearance hai. Who can aim him?!

They answered no. They have to act fast as there is less time. Gaffur came front.

Gaffur - Zoya ko chodo. tujhe mein aur yeh drive chahiye. usse chod do.

Gaffur moved towards them as Zoya moved in opposite direction. As they crossed Gaffur turned and threw pen drive which fell middle. Zoya snatched it and started to run. Simran (Zeenat and Anwars daughter) saw person aiming Zoya. She came across taking bullets saving her.

Zeenat (Cried) - Simran!!!

Zeenat ran to her, Anwar trying to guard. Gaffur sensed guns towards Zoya and no Government officer near her to save. Gaffur fiddled with person holding gun landing bullet in his heart. After movment in positions. Mr. Singh found clearance.

Singh - All clear!!!

He shot bullet killing lead. Other two scattered showering bullets. A miss hit bullet made other person among them fell down. Anwar weeping heavy heart dragged Humeira, Zeenat towards main door and out. Asad ran to meet Zoya.

Person who fell down with a miss hit bullet got up screaming with a remote. He insanly shouting venting out his anger. He pressed button activating series of bombs in the building. There were series of blasts in different corners of building.

Zoya - Asad!!!

Asad ran to meet her but fell apart with a blast which threw him to pillar.

Flash Back Ends

***

Present: Shimla: Hospital:

Asad - ZOYA!!!!

Asad opened shuttered eyes. Anxiety, restlessness, anger, pain vent his red eyes. Nurse tried to calm him down and other ran to inform doctor. Doctor declared him out of danger after check up. He need complete bed rest as his wounds need to heal. But these medicines cannot heal real wounds. Doctor stepped out after giving sedictive.

Doctor - Aap unhe mil sakte hai. Par unhe araam karne dijiye.

Everyone met unconcious Asad supervised under Monitors. His face lost all the charm. Horror of past and ugly future featured his face. He lyed there for half a day under injection.

He woke up with wires and monitors around him. His reeling head blured his eyes. He tried to wake up but failed at his attempt. He removed saline, plug on his finger, plastered wire on his chest. He stepped down when nurse ran in.

Nurse - Aap utt nahi sakte, aap laete rahiye, aapko araam ki zaroorat hai.

Heavy dose of anti-biotics made him step back reeling his head. He lay back to regain his senses. Nurse informed doctor about Asad. After check up doctor informed Asad not to make any move.

Asad - Mujhe jaane dijiye doctor!!! Mere yaha rehna kisi ki palon ko kum aur iss desh ke dushmano ki zindagi ko lamba kar raha hai.

Doctor - Aapka body koi bhi stress ya swift movement nahi le sakta. Aapka stitches khul jayenge. It may lead to infection.

Asad is not ready to hear any denying statement from doctor.

Arjun - Asad tum yeh kya kar rahe ho?!

Ayaan - Bhaijaan!! Aapko araam karne ki zaroorat hai.

Arjun and Ayaan helped Asad's body to rest on bed which is stained with blood of Asad due to his swift movement.

Asad - Zoya!! Arjun, Zoya ko woh log Shimla se bahar lejane se pehle humein unn logon ko pakadna hai!! Zoya ko bachana hai Ayaan!!

Arjun - Hum sambhalenge Asad!! Ranveer sir bhi yaha hai!! Zoya ko kuch nahi hoga!!

Ayaan - Hum sab hai bhai!! Aap phikar matt kijiye!!

With doctors sedatives Asad closed his eyes.

***
Doctor after testing him came out to meet his family.

Doctor - He is perfecry fine now. But he need complete bed rest. If he strain his body with swift movements. Unke stitches khul jayenge. Which is really dangerous. Now excuse me.
Doctor left from there asking one of the family members to come with reports. Arjun and Ayaan walked out after doctor.

Ayaan - Zoya ke bare mein pooch rahe te!!

Zeenat (Flowing fresh Tears) - Pata nahi kaisi hai meri bachi!! Kaha hogi woh?!

She broke down in Anwar's arms.

Humeira - Aap phikar matt kijiye Aapi. Zoya baji ko kuch nahi hoga.

Ayaan/Arjun - Hum kuch nahi hone denge!!

***
Ayaan, Najma, followed Arjun out of
hospital. Ayaan patted him when Arjun disconnected call.

Arjun - Bolo Ayaan!!

Ayaan - Mere pass ek idea hai!!

Arjun - kya?!

Ayaan - Humein chief se milna hai!!

Arjun - Ok!!

***

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Nice...
Hope asad n team success
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's been so long please update this
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I missd last few updates..!!
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Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update it ... the story is awesome ... can't wait to read it full

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