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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awww that was so cute.

Khushi's growth from chindhood to getting married to the love of her life is so well depicted.

Loved the entries in the diary where she makes mistakes as she is a child.

Then the language improves bit by bit.

Loved this attention to detail.

And her love hate relationship with Arnav.

Very sweet OS.

Really enjoyed the read.

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

hey thanks for the pm, loved d update. awesome. journey of khushi kumari gupta alongside arnav singh raizada fantastic. 😊

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

It was jus awsum...
Loved the way it was written...

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Omg!! Amazing..im a big fan of ur work
Tht spelling error thing was very creative..Loved it"!
Beautiful OS :-)

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Tina

@tina451

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Sooo Cutee !

Frm A Girl to Women !

Soo Sweet

Nyc Update !!

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samaz95

@samaz95

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

It was adorable (:

Loved the last part!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Aww this was so sweet...

The spelling, grammar, and her relationship with Arnav was chronicled beautifully.

I too agree with Mansi. Arnav troubled Khushi so much because he had a crush on her. And I am not surprised he followed her to IIT too...

Banda bachchpan se focused tha 😃

La and ASR dated for 3 years! What was Arnav trying to prove to Khushi? Trying to make her jealous? Of course the jaleibis Khushi made when La and ASR broke up had nothing to do with it 😆

Btw, as a child La pulled Khushi's braid but the fact that Arnav laughed at her made her cry. And Arnav apologized for making her cry, knowing perfectly well that it were his actions and not La's that brought the tears... Investigation kare ka padi 😆

PS: The sex was good too?! Lucky Khushi 😉

PPS: I love these bachchpan to adulthoodwala ArHi stories 😳

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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88sandy

@88sandy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

hey its not bad at all infact i quite lyked it...
the way u described khushi's whole life in so short through her diary writing was amazing...
dat was so funny wen khushi mentioned dat she is very happy n cookd jalebis n at last of dat entry she mentiond d actual reason dat arnav n lavnya brokeup...

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome !!!!!!!!!! The chronicles of Khushi kumari Gupta It is almost a complete story in one shot loved it

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Mina420

@Mina420

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

That was seriously cute... Chamkoo... That was so sweet. I loved how you chose to alter khushi's writing to make it sound more childish... Well done...