IPKKND:The misconstrued C4 Pg31 09/06/14 CONCLUDE writers response p37

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Rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow!! thats great update...loved it...

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seeta naipaul

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in all this Khushi was hurt the most

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Swathi/Ammu

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Ure an amazing writer. I love to read your works!!! 😊

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jagrutid

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Swathiarshi
Ure an amazing writer. I love to read your works!!! 😊

thank you!! youre too kind please feel free to pm if you would like links to my other ffs if you don't already have them ..enjoy reading..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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It is so true that while a person is there, you may not show them value and yet when they are not there, you realize how much you need them, value them and love them.

I am a little disappointed at Arnav Khushi conversation. I expected much more there from Khushi...he is in a forgiving mood but this was her chance to really convey that he can not just leave her like this without talking. That is not pointing to a very open relationship where. Husband would actually talk to the wife, complain, fight and make up spectacularly...

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jagrutid

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Posted: 11 years ago

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^ thank you for reading folks, @ Anamika100 I think when i think back i would say there was an element of protest lacking from Khushi towards the end. I think i would have been disappointed no very angry as to why I was left astray so yey maybe there is an element from the last part that may be missing but whatever mind frame i was in when i wrote it probably went over my head 😆 - thank you for reading though its lovely to have readers to take time to talk about their perspective too.

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navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome update
read all parts together
arnav is right
he leave them
after he left family realise his importance
last part is awesome
his way of talking with khushi is swert
mami way of saying sorry is funny
i am confuse about few things
u say taht armav hd arrange matrrige with khushi
before that he had affair with sheetal and aarav is sheetal and his son
where is sheetal now
is khushi aware about aarav before their marrige or after marrige sheetal send aarav to arnav
i know thos questions has nothing to do with thing u want to show
but this things come in my mind while reading cahpter
thnx for pm

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jagrutid

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: navjot7
awesome update
read all parts together
arnav is right
he leave them
after he left family realise his importance
last part is awesome
his way of talking with khushi is swert
mami way of saying sorry is funny
i am confuse about few things
u say taht armav hd arrange matrrige with khushi
before that he had affair with sheetal and aarav is sheetal and his son
where is sheetal now
is khushi aware about aarav before their marrige or after marrige sheetal send aarav to arnav
i know thos questions has nothing to do with thing u want to show
but this things come in my mind while reading cahpter
thnx for pm

Thank you for coming back to read another one of my ff's lovely to have you as ever. I'm glad you enjoyed this. So in response to your query in my mind it was - Arnav's first long term relationship was with Sheetal they were married for quite a while had Aaarav but things fell apart after a few years.. maybe love wasn't really love? and then after some time being a single father because Sheetal wasnt in the picture ASR married Khushi. For Aaarav for his family, and for himself.. but in a more traditional arranged way maybe she worked in his office and then the family were suggestive or whatever. Diidn't really dig that deep. Hope that helps of course my readers will perceive differently depending on ones imagination and some things i tend to leave a little open to allow the reader to make their own choices certainly in a short ff like this.

Thank you..and please keep following.

Edited by jagrutid - 11 years ago