IPKKND:The misconstrued C4 Pg31 09/06/14 CONCLUDE writers response p37 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago
just got around to reading this story...

firstly that Shit was Arnav's first wife...didnt like that part at all...wish Arav was just another adopted kid...

secondly in first part Khushi was so close to Arnav, yet later, she seemed very very distance...where his doctor knows more about him, infact she seemed more concerned for his health then his own wife...somehow accepting Khushi like that is difficult, esp since she was so caring in the first chapter...

Arnav-Khushi shares a very very special bond, where in, they have a world of their own... here he shares that bond with Anjali...Khushi is just another person, with whom he shares a more intimate relationship...thats also kinda weird...

overall, this story is good but it doesnt have that special Arnav-Khushi bond thing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow, awesome story
We often take our loved ones for granted and never realized they have feelings too
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Posted: 9 years ago
@anj thank you for reading - i think at the time when i wrote this .. it seemed the most natural way portray things, sometimes we need someone other than the one that we are closest to..because the little distance they have enables them to see better...

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Posted: 9 years ago
@ prdover i see that you are gradually going through my works one by one..thank you for reading im glad you are enjoying them!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very well written,Arnav was the backbone of this family and they finally reliesed there mistake
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hiuytlm

Very well written,Arnav was the backbone of this family and they finally reliesed there mistake



Thank you feels weird to comment on this one after such a long time but I'm glad you liked it ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good story, It is weird to see Khushi less caring but flow is written good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Surprised to see this has been dug up..
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love reading ur stories agn nd agn
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice and realistic story
Arnav made them realize they just can not take things for granted
Glad the family realized their mistake
Aarav being khushi's step son was something new
Is he from arnav's first marriage ??
Little doubt there
Wonderfully written

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