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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Is Aarav no more?

This is what I gathered from the update.

I already read the update twice, Jen.

I keep saying it, but I really feel you have outdone yourself with this story.

All the emotions the characters feel are so real.

Khushi feels this yearning to be close to Arnav.

One can understand that.

She feels it is wrong but still her feelings for him are too strong.

I really wish Aastha had not interfered.

Wish Arnav could have explained things to Khushi.

And Lavanya.

She doesn't want to let go.

So she is vindictive.

I loved the song and the beautiful verse by Faiz ahmed faiz.

And now the wait for a new update begins again.

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Found it!!!!!

Will res for later update!!!! Can't read right now...🤔

I don't know what to feel now that I have read the update!!!!!

This one was fantastic update, despite the pain, the loss and of what could have been!!!!!!

Khushi's jumbled thoughts, one moment she's trying to get out of her misery and the very next she's pulled into that vortex of those same miseries!!!! Extremely well-portrayed emotions, Jen!!!! 🤗 Hell, she's even googling her curious case of wanting and not wanting Arnav to be with her!!!! Poor girl!!!!

Whattt????? Arnav and Lavanya had a kid???? And by the suspense you have built up around Arnav and Lavanya, am guessing that he might be no more!!!!!

Lavanya's character is the most surprising one here, though!!!!! On the surface she is fighting against Arnav but its actually her own inner turmoil, I think!!!! Because sometimes you're just pushed too far into realizing your own guilt feelings/ faults that you begin resisting and being stubborn to everything.. Every single thing!!!!!

But her sobs at the end convinced me that whatever has happened to them (La and Arnav), she did not want it!!!!

Again this wait untill the next update is unbearable... But, what to do??? Everybody has a life outside IF!!!! Hats off Jen for giving us this amazing tale!!!! 👏

Oh I forgot to mention!!!!! That "text was not from Khushi"???? Then who was it from????

Edited by shutter - 11 years ago

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

superb update...

khushi was restless why she didnt hear Arnav's story...

the way she kept thinking..

oh my god Ar-La had a son... what went wrong??

looking forward the story to unfold

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Sj236

@Sj236

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

arav was der in d picture!!!?!!
What happened????
Wish d misunderstanding will go away soon!!
Waiting to hear lavanya's sidee of story.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

They had a son too.. Im assuming they lost him.. Lavanya doesnt seem that bad.. She is just emotionally very weak.. She wants Arnav to come back to her.. And Im feeling really bad for Khushi.. She really wants to get out of the guilt for falling for a married man...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Thanks for pm. Commented on page 15

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

There is some story beind La n Arnav

Wanna know that soon

Nice update

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Well that's scary.. La has decided that this whole process will be hell for Arnav still she's pinning for him! What's with arav? Curious , v curious.
Khushi is feeling insecure n can understand that feeling!!!

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

arnav has a son !! 😲 the story is getting quite interesting now..lovely update

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

How beautifully you described her wavering thoughts.

Her goodness of heart made her see Astha's fairness.

Dreading to read what has happened to Aarav. Will reserve judgement on Lavanya until I know more of their history, although it's difficult to do so right now.

Hope Khushi is able to have the fortitude to stand by him during his dealings with Lavanya.