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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: canapoem

I am becoming a fan of your comments. Last time I read it and found it amazing and this time too your comments were just fabulous. do you write stories too???

Firstly, a huge thank you again dear, you're too generous & kind :)

@ Bold, sorry dear, no such talent :( Love reading stories though... 😉

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#812

Lavanya is so selfish...and miserable...I feel sad for arnav and kushi ..

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#813

Arnav's past was heart breaking... But feel bad for Lavanya too...

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Nice update.

Sad past.

Waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the pm.😊

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

Jen - I enjoyed the update but I do have a tiny issue. And because it's you.. I think I can talk about it.

I see where Arnav is coming from and how badly he needs some genuine affection and warmth in his life.. so I understand this intense attraction he feels towards Khushi. But love? I mean.. he just recently lost a child. I don't judge him, but it is a bit difficult to digest that he was back in his senses enough to fall in love with another woman.

Having said that, I thought it update was beautiful 😊 In my last comment I mentioned that I wanted the lovers in the blooming saffron fields under the moonlight.. and you gave us that 😃 It was magical. Romance at its very best.

At this point, I want to know more about Lavanya. I know now that she has made some terrible mistakes.. unforgivable even. Yet she doesnt seem like a bad person, and perhaps she really does love Arnav in her own twisted way. Me is intrigued.

And Khushi.. poor thing. Torn between wanting to do the right thing and her love for this man... who clearly needs her in his life. Sigh.

Also - hows Aman doing ? And Anita?

Waiting eagerly for the next installment :)

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

Loved it, esp the father-son bond that Arnav spoke of...don't sympathize with Lavanya at all.

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#817

loved it jenny

thank u for pm

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nuts4u

@nuts4u

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#818

Cheater Lavanya...she cheated Arnav and still not ready to let him leave happily self centered women...

My heart goes for Arnav ...firstly believed Lavanya blindly when she told her baby is his...after kn owing Arav is not his child still try to mend things between him and lavanya for sake of baby...loved him unconditionally...And that lady blamed him for his child death how can she...

At last Khushi confessed her feeling to Arnav...M so happy for both of them...hope now at least he will get his deserve happiness.

Loved it Jen Sacchi Mucchi

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#819

Wow! I am always amazed at the various levels of emotions you display for all your characters. Arnav has such a big heart! Aarav's story was sad. Lavanya is going to be a huge problem. The last sentence - "they were climbing uphill, towards the road, with their hands firmly clasped." sums it all - Arnav and Khushi's relationship and the uphill battle they are about to face.

Beautifully written!