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shivani_bv

@shivani_bv

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Arnav's past was really heart wrenching. Nothing could be worse than a child's loss for parents. They could have been each other's strength at such a painful time, but the blame for the child's death and a relationship built on deceit, of course things had to go downhill. Though I feel sorry for Lavanya too for such a loss in her life, I think being separated is the best course for them. Lavanya will not get anything in her life by trying to make Arnav tied in the relation for name sake and keeping a grudge forever. She definitely needs an anchor in her life to see reason, accept her follies too and try to live.

Arnav is a good human and was a good father. Why he didn't share everything with his mother is something I am not able to completely get. He definitely needs love and support in his life and I am happy that he has Khushi with him now who is believing him completely. With lavanya's stubbornness to let Arnav move on, things are not going to be easy for them. Hope their love only strengthens with time. They have a long way to go and I do want them to know each other well and fall deeply in love as meant to be.

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

gr8 chapter!

glad to know happy times are gonna be back!

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thumbi

@thumbi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

Really gripping update... A loss of a child can act both ways for a couple... It seems like life itself cheated Arnav by taking away Aarav and making mentally unstable Lavanya blame him for that...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Loads of revelations coming to light in this update !

Arnav and Lavanya having had a rough marriage would be a mild term ... but Aarav's demise and the reasons behind it sadden me beyond measure!

Khushi's conflict between the right and wrong ... whether to follow her heart or mind ...has been written very well!

Very different from your usual style Jen ... Keep it up !🤗

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

oh my I never expected this!
My sympathy for lavanya flew outta the window!
If she'd loved Arnav she would have never trapped him like this!
That woman stoop so low and blamed him for something he never did!?!
Using the old Hindi movie trick!
Wonder who's Aarav's father!
And now she accused him for killing her son!
I hate her!!!
Arnav loved Aarav so much!
You wrote that part brilliantly!
His story made me teary :(
Does aastha know that Aarav was not Arnav's son???
I m happy that Khushi confessed her love for him!
And their kiss was so full if love *sighss* :')
Looking forward to read the next update :)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Aww aww aww aww aww I am speechless again. This is a fabulous, super fantastic update

I love the scene of Pompey fields, love the way you penned it down.

From their vantage point, they could miles and miles of blooming saffron fields, stretching till the distant, hazy horizon. The full moon, slightly yellowish in hue, appeared extraordinarily large as it hung low over the horizon, bathing the profusion of divinely fragrant, light purple flowers with a surreal glow.

The words immediately form the mesmerizing scene of midnight in my mindd where two lover were promising to share every sorrow and happiness and seal their eternal true love with a kiss. It was a lovely scene.

Arnav is a great guy, he is doing right to make their marriage officially over. I felt pity for lavanyah and somewhere I am angry too because of her selfish behavior. She really deserves a treatment, she is sick I wonder how is she medically fit to be a doctor. I hope her session will help her out and she will fond out soon that it just a wastage of time to hold Arnav who doesn't want to be more part of her and neither interested to work for their marriage.

I can't believe that she used Arnav and their honest friendship bond between them, she trapped him in a marriage. She should be grateful to Arnav who loved her child even when he found out that he was his biological father. I am doubtful that lavanyah knows about this information.

Arnav can be nasty in getting their divorce finalize by using lavanyah as a cheater who took advantage of him and fooled him brilliantly but he didn't played that card and it's is nice of him that he wants divorce to be settled in every possible civilized way.

The love confession was beautiful and I love these words "they were climbing uphill, towards the road, with their hands firmly clasped." Indeed they are moving towards a road of a happy, blissful life where they will always besides each other with full support and infinite love. Gosh this is so romantic and beautiful.

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

awesum update loved it soo lav play cheap to marry arnav n now blaming hin of killing aarav n dont want to see him happy n move on in his life she is truly mad hope therapy help her atlast arshi r together after soo much pain sepration n lots of tear plz add sum mine too feel really bad for arnav after hearing his past i douth aastha dont inow bout aarav not being arnav own son n lav cheap tricj how he trap arnav thats y she feel soo much for lav eager waiting to read more

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anjubua

@anjubua

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Amazing as always, lavenya blaming Arnav for their
loss is the easiest way to cover her guilt. Arnav loved
little Arav regardless of DNA or being deceived to believe
he's his son.his torment and agony show the love and bond
between father and son. He's found comfort, love and
understanding in Khushi's arms. Eagerly waiting for next update.
Thanks Jenny. 👏

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Loved the update...content, speed and length. To me, the following paragraphs said it all...

"And...why are you here...with me?", she continued, her voice inadvertently getting laced with a little anger, a little accusation, "Shouldn't you both be with each other? Being each other's anchors...supports...sharing your grief".

"I wish, Khushi", he replied, a bitter little smile curving his lips as he recognized the accusation in her moist eyes, "But that's over-simplistic expectations of people, and relationships and life is not always this uncomplicated".

This is a complex story about complicated people dealing with complex issues.

I feel so sorry for Arnav and Khushi. Lavanya definitely has issues which will tear apart all their lives. There is something very poignant every time Khushi and Armav meet each other. It is as if there is a need to seek comfort and a need to provide comfort reaching out to each other...two halves finding each other and become whole.

I am so looking forward to see how you take this story forward.

As parents, Arnav and Lavenya went thru something so horrific that it's hard to even comprehend fully. It has altered both of them irrevocably and nothing will ever be the same.

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago